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doc.: IEEE 802.15-15-0465-00-0010
Submission
May 2015
Project: IEEE P802.15 Working Group for Wireless Personal Area Networks (WPANs)
Submission Title: Proposed Resolution for Comments R89 and R223 from Charlie Perkins
Date Submitted: May 31, 2015 Source: Soo-Young Chang (SYCA), Jaebeom Kim (Ajou Univ.), and Jaehwan Kim and Sangsung Choi (ETRI) Company: SYCA, Ajou Univ. and ETRI Address: Voice: +1 530 574 2741, E-Mail: [email protected] and [email protected]
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Abstract: Proposed comment resolution for two comments from Charlie Perkins
Purpose: To suggest comment resolution for Comments R89 and R223 from Charlie Perkins
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Slide 1 Soo-Young Chang (SYCA) et al
doc.: IEEE 802.15-15-0465-00-0010
Submission
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Soo-Young Chang (SYCA) et al
Comment R89
• Commenter– Charlie Perkins
• Related text in draft– 5.2.2.1, Page 26, line 1
• Comment– Is "Inactive time aware airtime" different than "link occupancy"?
• Proposed Change– If it means the same, use "link occupancy“.
Slide 2
doc.: IEEE 802.15-15-0465-00-0010
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Soo-Young Chang (SYCA) et al
Proposed Resolution (Reject)
• Explanation– The result from the corresponding expression in Page 26 is the value of a
metric representing an expected transmit time, after taking link errors and inactive time of the PAN into consideration.
– Therefore it is more appropriate to keep this term rather than to change to “link occupancy”.
• Proposed Change– No change
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Submission
May 2015
Soo-Young Chang (SYCA) et al
Comment R223
• Commenter– Charlie Perkins
• Related text in draft– 6.2.9.1, Page 67, line 25
• Comment– Not clear why MCO determines Intermediate Address Mode
• Proposed Change– Insert clarifying text.
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Proposed Resolution (Accept)
• Proposed Change– Simply delete the text, “If MCO is enabled, the Intermediate Address List is
set to 1).”.
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