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    Descriptive WritingPlaces & buildings

    A descriptive essay about a place or building should consist of:

    Places you can describe:

    Public places: museums, open-air markets, zoos, art galleries, shoppin

    centres….etc

     Tourist attractions: ancient theatres, bazaars, temples, souvenir shops

    monuments, statues…etc

    In which you give the name & location of the place/ building and thereason for choosing it. You can use the following phrases: is situated/ located, in (the) west/south-east of…, on the north/west coast of.., in the

     

    In which you describe the main aspects of the place or building in detail.

    A place: describe what you can see & do there shopping! sight"seeing!nightlife! restaurants! etc.# You can use phrases li$e: The most fascinating

     part of the cit is the open-air market. / The most famous attraction is thebotanical gardens./ There are plent of places to go shopping in !airo./ The area is also well-known for…..

    A building: describe the e%terior & interior & give historical facts about it."istorical facts# when $ wh it was built%The e&terior# what it is made of, appearance, ground/gardens, etc. (using

     

    hich includes your comments/ feelings & recommendations'ondon is a city that has something to o(er everyone. It)s the ideal choice

    for a few days from*..

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    +ervices: subwas, sk trains, dance clubs, restaurants, caf's, fun fairs, multi

    screen cinemas…etc

    ,atural places: botanical gardens, natural parks …etc

    -thers buildings#: palaces, schools, houses, hospitals…etc

      Don’t forget to use plenty of adjectives:

    Alive! amaing! beautiful! bright! calm! colourful! creepy! crowded! deserted

    di(erent! dry! enchanted! fresh! hot! incredible ! interesting! magnicen

    modern! mysterious! natural! noisy! perfect! pleasant! 0uiet! remar$able

    shiny! silent! stormy! strange! terric! ugly! uni0ue! unusual! warm! wild

    windy! tran0uil! peaceful! traditional! tropical! harmonious! fresh! sensationaromantic! magical! fairytale li$e! calming.......

      Don’t forget to use sensory details:

     To give the reader a more vivid picture of the place you are describing! yo

    can refer to the senses.

    +ight: deep blue of the ocean

    +mell: vanilla"scented candles

    +ound: the chirping of the birds

     Touch: burning sand

     Taste: scrumptious chocolate ice"cream

    1%amples:

    2isitors can dine watching the moon rise over the mountains.

    I remember the 3ar 1ast with its aromas of e%otic herbs and spices.

      Don’t forget to include colours:

      +nowy / mil$y / marble / cream / ivory / oyster / pearl: white

      4et / ebony / licorice / in$y / pitch: black 

      'avender / lilac / plum / fuchsia / mauve / maroon: purple

      +almon / tomato / crimson / blood / vermillion / ruby / scarlet: red

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    Apricot / peach / tangerine / topa / ochre / pump$in: Orange

      +ilver / platinum / dove / steel / ashen: Grey

     

    5hestnut / chocolate / co(ee / tan / hael / dirt: rown

      6rass / forest / olive / $ha$i / mint / emerald: Green

      7ustard / golden / butter / lemon / canary: !ellow

      8oyal / sapphire / a0uamarine / s$y / baby / navy: lue

    "#ercise$ead this descriptive essay about %ondon' and (ll in the blanksusing the words given in the word bank)

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    busiest e%ceptional nest

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    'ondon has many 999999999999999 sights to see! ranging from thhistorical beauty of +t. Paul)s 999999999999999 and ig en to uc$ingham

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    'ondon is an 9999999999999999 place! a truly modern city that ha

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     Two sentences can be =oined together by using past participles.

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     You can write:

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    C. The swimming pool is located near the city centre. The swimming pool is

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    crstal-clear water, tall buildings, car horns beeping, fresh scent of pines,special spices, swaing palm trees, acrid smell of old tomatoes, hurring

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    *a5ple "ssay

    Welcome to Bohol, Philippines!

    Have you ever been to Bohol? Let me tell you about this place which attracts many tourists. It

    an island located in the south near the province of Cebu. If you come from Manila, you can eithe

    take a plane or a cruise liner to et there.

    !side from its pristine white"sand beaches and the Chocolate Hills, Bohol#s tourism assets als

    include centuries"old churches and towers. $ou can find there manificent scuba divin havens

    ma%estic falls and caves and historical landmarks, yet the primitive and e&otic flora and fauna

    somethin you don't want to miss.

    (here are many thins you can do there to make your holiday en%oyable. )or e&ample, you can tak

    a boat to brin you to one to these islands where you could buy fresh seafood or eat in a floatinrestaurant. $ou can also take a dive or have a swim in the clear blue sea with the ama*in

    shorelines. In addition, the local people are very warm and friendly, so they will be happy to tak

     you to various interestin places.

    In short, if you are lookin for the perfect vacation to rela& and en%oy yourself, this is the plac

    for you.

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    Writing 3ssign5ent:

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    "#ercise 7:

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    +tanding outside of the ritish 7useum last wee$! I had ignored the

    pouring rain as I gaed up at the marble tall columns! unprepared for the

    dignied beauty of the famous building. 7s. 6reen! our teacher! she hurried u

    inside! impatient to show to us all the artefacts of the ancient gree$ and

    egyptian civiliations which we had studying in our history class.

    Inside! the museum was 0uiet impressive. The gentle hum of voices

    echoed through huge walls with polished marble Foors and sweeping

    staircases as we were followed 7s. 6reen on tiptoe to the section with the

    6ree$ e%hibits.

    e in admiration gasped at the beautiful sculptures displayed there. The

    delicate features and graceful bodies of the gures were such lifeli$e that the

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    loo$ed more as actual people turned to stone than carvings from thousands o

    years before.

     The 1gyptian display was even more breathta$ing. ;uge statues towered

    above us! gleaming with gold! and beautiful =ewellry lled the display cases.

    It was li$e wa$ing from a lovely dream when 7s. 6reen whispered that it

    was time for us to go. I saw a long! nal loo$! reluctant to live these magical

    rooms! before I had followed my classmates to the bus waiting and the real

    world outside.

    "#ercise 9:

    rite a magaine article describing 5airo.

     You must include the following: 5atchy title< you might use alliteration 2ariable sentence beginnings Imagery Powerful verbs and ad=ectives Advanced punctuation  Topic sentence at the beginning of each paragraph stating what the

    paragraph is about#

    Gseful phrases and powerful verbs and ad=ectives

    1%perience the mystery of* / 1%perience a fabulous**  Truly remar$able/outstanding/superb/spectacular city of cultural diversity

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    Intense! rewarding e%perience +ight! sound and colour of this spectacular city capture your heart and

    imagination 3amous ethnic Hsou$s) or mar$ets Immensely s$illed craftsmen create intricate artifacts / leatherware 1thnic alley ways are teeming with life: co(ee shops serving** / street

    vendors selling*.  Ta$e time to wander around the e%otic / the world renowned* ,ow say hello to*. +lip o( to visit the museum of anti0uities 8echarge your batteries by*. atch the sun go down in a ,ile cruise: a truly remar$able view. 8e=oice in the tran0uility of the ,ile. A paradise of peaceful serenity

    "#erciseRead this descriptive essay about “London” and fill in the blanks using the ords in the or

    bank

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    shoppers truly enormous impressive traditional

    palace worth e&clusive hue peaceful classical

    visitors busiest e&ceptional finest

    -et in the of southern +nland, London is one of th

      and cities in +urope. !

    international city, London attracts millions of every year from all over th

    world, yet never loses its own charm.

    London has many sihts to see, ranin from the historical beauty o

    -t. /aul's and Bi Ben to Buckinham and the Houses o

    /arliament. In this city of contrasts, you can be walkin alon one of the busiest streets, yet sti

    be less than a mile from one of the many , parks. Londo

    is a reat centre, too0 the 1ational 2allery contains one of th

      collections of paintins in the world.

    London is also well"known for other thins apart from its monuments and art allerie

      will en%oy visitin the department stores on 3&ford -treet or they could tr

    Harrods, the most shop in London. )or evenin entertainment, the choice o

    theatres is . )rom the famous -outhbank (heatre Comple& to the smalle

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    theatres on Covent 2arden, there is no end of plays to see. -oho and its pavement caf4s are als

      visitin.

    London is an place, a truly modern city that has manaed to keep it

      style and sense of history. $ou may et

    London, but one thin is certain0 you will never et bored, as 5r. 6ohnson once said, 78hen a man

    tired of London, he is tired of life.9

    !lternative words

    "amous# renowned, distinuished, world"famous, notable

    $n%oy# re%oice in, indule in, relish, revel in, deliht in, lu&uriate in

    &elicious# scrumptious, luscious, delectable, succulent, appeti*in, mouth"waterin

    $nchant# enthrall, captivate, enrapture, hypnoti*e

    'ood people# kind"hearted, warm"hearted, hospitable, compassionate

    $at# devour, obble, nibble, dine, feast on, pi out

    (urprised: da**led, mesmeri*ed, makes your %aw drop, leaves you with wide open eyes.

    !lternative /hrases:)ake you happy: rechare your batteries, uplift your spirit, boost your enery.

    *ice e+perience: rewardin, truly remarkable, intense, capture your heart and imaination.

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      4et / ebony / licorice / in$y / pitch: black 

     

    'avender / lilac / plum / fuchsia / mauve / maroon: purple  +almon / tomato / crimson / blood / vermillion / ruby / scarlet: red

      Apricot / peach / tangerine / topa / ochre / pump$in: Orange

      +ilver / platinum / dove / steel / ashen: Grey

      5hestnut / chocolate / co(ee / tan / hael / dirt: rown

      6rass / forest / olive / $ha$i / mint / emerald: Green

      7ustard / golden / butter / lemon / canary: !ellow

      8oyal / sapphire / a0uamarine / s$y / baby / navy: lue

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    ;. !ll the walls in the palace were painted in white.

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      is the color of fire and blood, so it is associated with enery A war

    . I can't believe she dyed her hair orane.

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    . I couldn't resist her beautiful, rey eyes.

    D. 8e've decided to chane all the furniture we have0 we're oin to et new brown furniture.

    E. I can't tell whether this is teal or reen.

    F. His yellow shirt cauht my eye as soon as he entered the room.

    ;G. Blue comes in many shades includin: , ,

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    .nfor5al etters

    Descriptive 4arrative

     The occasions you may be as$ed to write about may include any of thefollowing:

    A celebration A school show A sports day A festival or carnival A holiday

    Plot:

    Introduction:

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    8ain:

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    ?= 3t5osphere: a=sight b=s5ell c= taste d= sound

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    Alternative words

    +a5ous: renowned! distinguished! world"famous! notable

    "njoy: re=oice in! indulge in! relish! revel in! delight in! lu%uriate in

    Delicious: scrumptious! luscious! delectable! succulent! appetiing! mouth"

    watering

    "nchant: enthrall! captivate! enrapture! hypnotie

    Good people: $ind"hearted! warm"hearted! hospitable! compassionate

    "at: devour! gobble! nibble! dine! feast on! pig out

    *urprised: daled! mesmeried! ma$es your =aw drop! leaves you with wide

    open eyes.

    Alternative Phrases:

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    energy.

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    4ice e#perience: rewarding! truly remar$able! intense! capture your heart

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