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Dear Personnel Manager,

Application for the Post of Assistant Personnel Officer

In response to your recent advertisement on CTgoodjobs.hk, it is with considerable interest that I apply for your post of Assistant Personnel Officer. This is an opportunity I am keen to pursue and, as my resume (enclosed) will verify, my competencies are well suited to this position.

It is with considerable interest that I enclose my resume in response to your advertisement in CTgoodjobs.hk inviting applications for the position of Assistant Personnel Officer. I am very interested in pursuing this opportunity with this position. As the enclosed resume willyou can see from my resume attest, I am a well- organizsed person and hard working person from my previous positions. I have with excellent interpersonal and communication skills. I have worked as an administrative assistant, project assistant and accounting clerk during in the past three years. I have also participated in an internship and in part-time jobs, which were particularly customer service focused oriented. Therough this fruitful experience provides me the, I have worked in environments where I have been encouraged to develop my efficient and effective problem-solving and decision-making skills, the abilityand have learnt how to work both independently, as well as to function and cooperatively and as an effectively in member of a team-environment.

Last but not least, through my previous working experiences I have been able to enhanced my proficiency in with MS Office software, and have learnt highlyto pay great attentiveon to details. With a , high level of clerical accuracy, I am able to work under pressure and meet tight deadlines.

I would welcome the opportunity to meet you to further discuss my suitability for this position;If you would like to have more information, please do not hesitate to contact me either by phone: (12345678) or by e-mail: (name@mail.hk). Your time and consideration would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you for your kindly attention and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely, SignatureName

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Mr Jerry YoungHuman Resource DirectorHong Kong Economic Times Limited

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