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Blog-peer Assessment

Blog Author: Daniel Vidmar

Blog Assessor: Daniel Springthorpe

good things: i tal ics bad things: normal

Question 1: Is my blog formatted

appropriately?

Good choice of colour for the background itgoes well with the text due to the texts good

choice of size and colour. You also put the

correct URL for the blog. You have put in a

good side bar that contains all the necessary

tabs to the different links required in the blog.Most of the things in the side bar are also

mentioned on the home page as well

which isn't needed.


2/8

mark: 8/10

Question 2: Have I produced a welcome

poster that invites a reader to follow my

media journey over time? Have I clearly

presented the commission?

You haven't posted a welcome title.

mark: 0/10

Question 3: Have I published a post thatclearly defines shot types? Is this supported

with imbedded media?

You have put shot types in your blog and

defined it like the question asks. You have

also put embedded media to go with the text.


3/8

mark: 10/10

Question 4: Have I published a post thatclearly defines camera movements? Is this

supported with embedded media?

You have put camera movements in your

blog correctly. You have also put sufficienttext to go with each piece of embedded text.

Possibly too many videos (made the

computer lag).

mark: 9/10

Question 5: Have I published a post that

clearly defines cut types? Is this supported

with embedded media?


4/8

Yes you have defined split edited correctly.

But you haven't added a video to go with

it.

mark: 5/10


clearly defines the rule of thirds? Is thissupported with embedded media?

Yes you have defined rule of the thirds

correctly. You have also put sufficient

embedded media.

mark: 10/10


clearly defines what match-on-action means?

Is this supported with embedded media?


5/8

you have defined it and added embedded

media to go with it. But been thorough

enough and put in enough information.

mark: 8/10


clearly defines the 180 degree rule? Is thissupported with embedded media?

Again you have put in text and embedded

media. But there is still insufficient

knowledge of what is supposed to beshown being shown.

mark: 8/10


clearly defines continuity? Is this supported

with embedded media?


6/8

You have put sufficient text and embedded

media.

mark: 10/10

Question 10: Did I publish a post that clearly

shows how scripts should be presented? Isthis supported with embedded media?

Yes you have put in text describing how to

write a script and added a video to go with it.

But you could have added a more in-depthexplanation.

mark: 8/10

Question 11: Did I complete the preliminarytask successfully? Did I observe the basic

production rules?


7/8

Yes you went over the basic points and

described them with in-depth explanation.

You also added a video to go with it.

mark: 10/10

Question 12: Does my blog have a continuity

narrative? Does it link logically from post topost? is it easy for the reader to follow my

media journey?

Yes the blog is set out in an easy to read way

that allows the reader to navigate easilythrough the blog with ease. You have also put

sufficient videos to go with each post. But so

things aren't present (welcome post).

mark: 9/10


8/8

Question 13: Have i demonstrated good time

management? Are my posts complete? Have

I completed homework to the best of myability?

Yes you have completed the home works all

on time and put sufficient information. But

forgot welcome post. :'(

mark: 9/10

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