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Blog Progress Peer Assessment

Blog Author: Daniel Springthorpe

Blog Assessor: Dom Chidlow (17.10.13 Lucy Smith)

Date: 10/10/13

Question 1 The formatting of the blog

The title you have used for your blog is suitable and you have met the criteria for

the correct URL protocol. The background you have chosen makes the text hard

to read because it gave me a migraine. You have also left the sharing option

turned off which doesnt follow the criteria and makes the posts you have

written untidy. You have created links to other pages therefore the blog isnt allon one page which makes it more complicated, this could be made more simple

by keeping the posts all on one page.

Current Mark: 3/10

Question 2 Your Welcome Post

You have written a welcome post but that is all. You havent introduced yourself

or provided any information in your welcome post and havent identified where

and why you are studying media studies or worse so you havent even said you

are studying media studies! This needs to be improved because people that aregoing to view your blog will not feel welcomed by your post. You also havent

gave any information on what you are going to be posting.

Current Mark 1/10

Question 3 Shot type post

There is no information about shot types on your blog.

Current Mark: 0/10

Question 4 Camera movement post

There is no information about camera movements on your blog.

Current Mark: 0/10

Question 5 Cut types post

There is no information about cut types on your blog.

Current Mark: 0/10


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Question 6 Rule of thirds post

You have embedded a You Tube video to your blog explaining the rule of thirds.

You have not explained the rule of thirds in your own words you have just relied

on the You Tube video.

Current Mark: 4/10

Question 7 Match on Action post

You have embedded a You Tube video to your blog explaining match on action.

You have not explained match on action in your own words you have just relied

on the You Tube video.

Current Mark: 4/10

Question 8 180 Degree rule post

There is no information about the 180-degree rule on your blog.

Current Mark: 0/10

Question 9 Continuity post

You have embedded a You Tube video to your blog explaining continuity. You

have also gave a brief very blunt explanation of how continuity works. There is

no advanced explanation of continuity so you a majority of the post is relied onthe You Tube video to explain continuity

Current Mark: 5/10

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Question 10 - Script Writing post

You have created a post that briefly explains the rules of script writing. However

I feel that you should write the posts more formally, after all this is your

coursework. Also you have not embedded any media to help your explanation.

Current Mark: 4/10

Question 11 Preliminary Task Post

You have assessed your work and came up with valid working practice ideas.

However you have not embedded your finished product so there is no physicalevidence of this assessment.


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Current Mark: 4/10

Question 12 Blog Narrative

There is not continuing narrative to your blog, you have tabs to other pages on

your blog and no scrolling feature. This makes it hard to find the posts to readersand when they were published on a timeline.

Current Mark: 2/10

Question 13 Time Management

I cant tell when youve posted anything. Again you have written your posts in

tabs so there is no real idea to when you have posted anything therefore I cannot

asses your time keeping.

Current Mark: ?

Total Mark: 23/130

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