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    Tuesday,May29,2007

    secondopinion0238thCTP(PAAS)

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    ComprehensiveNoteWritingPracticeFor2008Let'sDoIt!

    Hi,

    IaminitiatingathreadforthePassagewritingpracticeEnglishPaperIIQ3.Hopeyouallwouldparticipateattheirbest.

    Lookingforwardtoyourcontributions!

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    __________________Lo!manisinastateofloss.(AlAsr:103:2)Andeverysmallandgreatthingisrecorded.(AlQamar:54:53)AndguardyourselvesagainstadayinwhichyewillbebroughtbacktoAllah.Theneverysoulwillbepaidinfullthatwhichithathearned,andtheywillnotbewronged.(AlBaqara:2:281)

    Tuesday,May29,2007

    secondopinion0238thCTP(PAAS)

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    Plzcheckwhetheruptotherequirementsandcorrecttheerrors.

    2006Q3(c)Charmsstrikethesightbutmeritwinsthesoul

    Manypeoplethinkfromtheireyesanddonotbothertousetheirgraymatter.Thisisverycommonobservationthatawelldressedpersonishighlyregardedbymassesascomparetoamodestwearingperson.Thereasonmerelyisthecharmofthesightandtheimpressionofstatusthatparalyzetheabilityofjudgment.Withthisirresponsiblebehavior,theinjusticeisdonewiththemeritoriousones.Ithasbecomeanormoftoday'sworldbusinessfirmsarespeciallytrainingtheiremployeestomakethemselvesupeffectivelyinordertoimpressthecustomers.Suchmeasuresgreatlyimprovethesaleoftheproduct.Leavingasidesomereputedorganizations,someenterprisesaredeceivingpeopleindisguise.Thetruth,lateron,disclosesoverthepurchaserthattheproductisnotuptothemark.However,contrarytothisphenomenon,awellrecognizedandqualityproductdoesnotneedsuchflatteringtricks.Thequalityandmeritoftheproductspeaksvolumesaboutitsutilityforthecustomers.Whetherthesalespersonissittingonthefootpathorwhethertheproductisinanordinarypack,thepervioussatisfactionofthecustomerwouldnotbothertoseethecharmpurchaserswouldonlyjudgebythesatisfactoryresponseoftheproductthathadpreviouslygotbythem.Therefore,newproducts,whicharedefectiveintheirmeritsbutattractiveintheirpackaging,wouldneverbeabletowinthesoulofthecustomersovertheproducthavingsomemeritinitsquality.Hence,charmstrikesthesightbutmeritwinsthesoul.__________________Lo!manisinastateofloss.(AlAsr:103:2)Andeverysmallandgreatthingisrecorded.(AlQamar:54:53)AndguardyourselvesagainstadayinwhichyewillbebroughtbacktoAllah.Theneverysoulwillbepaidinfullthatwhichithathearned,andtheywillnotbewronged.(AlBaqara:2:281)

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    TheFollowingUserSaysThankYoutosecondopinion02ForThisUsefulPost:Faisalmemon(Saturday,January03,2009)

    Thursday,May31,2007

    MuskanGhumanSeniorMember

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    @SecondComing,

    Goodeffort!Especiallythelanguage,syntaxandorganizationaresuperb.Youhaveinterpretedthequotefromthepointofviewofbusiness.Nodoubt,youhaveprovedlogicallywhateveryouwantedtosaybutthesamequotecanbeinterpretedinanothersenseaswell.Likeinthismaterialisticagemostlypeoplegoforouterlooksorfacialbeautyofapersonbutthischarmisnotlonglastingandfadessoon.Onthecontrary,meritsi.e.differentgoodattributesinone'spersonalityleaveapermanentinfluenceonothers.Outerbeautycansatisfyonlyvisionbutmeritsmakeastrongbondbetweentwosouls....Anyhowyoureffortisreallycommendable.Keepitup.

    Regards,__________________MyALLAHitisenoughformyrespectthatIm"Your"person&itisenoughformypridethat"You"aremyGOD."You"areexactlythewayIdesire.Thuspleasemouldmetheway"You"desire.

    Thursday,May31,2007

    secondopinion0238thCTP(PAAS)

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    @MuskanGhuman

    Thanksforyourappreciation,ithasrealyimprovedmymorale....Iameagerlyanticipatingyourownversionofthispassage.

    Regards,__________________Lo!manisinastateofloss.(AlAsr:103:2)Andeverysmallandgreatthingisrecorded.(AlQamar:54:53)AndguardyourselvesagainstadayinwhichyewillbebroughtbacktoAllah.Theneverysoulwillbepaidinfullthatwhichithathearned,andtheywillnotbewronged.(AlBaqara:2:281)

    Thursday,May31,2007

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    Charmsstrikethesightbutmeritwinsthesoul

    Manypeoplethinkfromtheireyesanddonotbothertousetheirgraymatter.Thisisverycommonobservationthatawelldressedpersonishighlyregardedbythemassesascomparetoamodest+lywearingperson.Thereasonmerelyisthecharmofthesightandtheimpressionofstatusthatparalyze+stheabilityofjudgment.Withthisirresponsiblebehavior,theinjusticeisdonewiththemeritoriousones.Ithasbecomeanormoftoday'sworldbusinessfirmsarespeciallytrainingtheiremployeestomakethemselvesupeffectivelyinordertoimpressthecustomers.Suchmeasuresgreatlyimprovethesaleoftheproduct.Leavingasidesomereputedorganizations,someenterprisesaredeceivingpeopleindisguise.Thetruth,lateron,disclosesoverthepurchaserthattheproductisnotuptothemark.However,contrarytothisphenomenon,awellrecognizedandqualityproductdoesnotneedsuchflatteringtricks.Thequalityandmeritoftheproductspeaksvolumesaboutitsutilityforthecustomers.Whetherthesalespersonissittingonthefootpathorwhethertheproductisinanordinarypack,thepervioussatisfactionofthecustomerwouldnotbothertoseethecharmpurchaserswouldonlyjudgebythesatisfactoryresponseoftheproductthathadpreviouslygotbythem.Therefore,newproducts,whicharedefectiveintheirmeritsbutattractiveintheirpackaging,wouldneverbeabletowinthesoulofthecustomersovertheproducthavingsomemeritinitsquality.Hence,charmstrikesthesightbutmeritwinsthesoul.

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    PleaselookthethingsI'veitalicised.Trytothinkwhat'swrongwiththemandgivetheminaseparatepost,I'lltrytotellyouhowyoucanimprovethem.Moreover,allofyourspellingsareinAmericanEnglishtrytoconverttheminthestandardBritishEnglish,e.g.,grayintogrey,paralyzeintoparalyse,behaviorintobehaviour.Therestsearchforyourself.IcanpresumeyouhavebeenpredominantlyreadingbooksofAmericanauthorsduringyourstudentship.However,Iappreciateyourdevelopmentofthethesis.

    ...Yasser__________________YasserChattha

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    OriginallyPostedbysecondopinion02Plzcheckwhetheruptotherequirementsandcorrecttheerrors.

    2006Q3(c)Charmsstrikethesightbutmeritwinsthesoul

    Many(Mostofthe)peoplethinkfromtheireyesanddonotbothertouse(using)theirgraymatter.Thisisverycommonobservationthatawelldressedpersonishighlyregardedbymassesascompare(cmpared)toamodest(humblyormodestlydressed)wearingperson.Thereasonmerelyisthecharmofthe(theisextra)sightandtheimpressionofstatusthatparalyzetheabilityofjudgment.Withthisirresponsiblebehavior,the(theextra)injusticeisdonewiththemeritoriousones.Ithas

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    becomeanormoftoday'sworldbusinessfirmsarespeciallytrainingtheiremployeestomakethemselvesupeffectivelyinordertoimpressthecustomers.Suchmeasuresgreatlyimprovethesaleofthe(theextra)product.Leavingasidesomereputedorganizations,someenterprisesaredeceivingpeopleindisguise.Thetruth,lateron,disclosesoverthepurchaserthattheproductisnotuptothemark.However,(usehoweverorcotrarybutbotharenotappropriate)contrarytothisphenomenon,awellrecognizedandqualityproductdoesnotneedsuchflatteringtricks.Thequalityandmeritoftheproductspeaksvolumesabout(of)itsutilityforthecustomers.Whetherthesalespersonissittingonthefootpathorwhether(orisenoughnowhetherhere)theproductisinanordinarypack,thepervioussatisfactionofthecustomerwouldnotbothertoseethecharmpurchaserswouldonlyjudgebythesatisfactoryresponseoftheproductthathadpreviouslygotbythem.Therefore,newproducts,whicharedefectiveintheirmeritsbutattractiveintheirpackaging,wouldneverbeabletowinthesoulofthe(theextra)customersovertheproducthavingsomemeritinitsquality.Hence,charmstrikesthesightbutmeritwinsthesoul.

    Dear,thatwasasplendideffort.Itriedtofindoutsomemistakes.Thesearementionedasabove.Imaybewronginmyassessment.Irequestfurthercorrectionfromtheothermembers.

    Regards__________________Winnersneverquitandquittersneverwin.

    LasteditedbyShootingStarWednesday,May09,2012at12:35AM.

    Thursday,May31,2007

    secondopinion0238thCTP(PAAS)

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    WHEREIGNORANCEISBLISS,ITISFOLLYTOBEWISEItishumannaturethatitcravesforhappiness,freedomandrelaxation.ThereisnodoubtthathumansaresentinthisworldtobearthesufferingsofthemistakecarriedoutbytheirancestorsinparadiseAdamandEve'sblunderagainstAllah'scommand.Sointhisworld,themankindisforlivingalifefullofworries,whichstartfromthebirthwithacryforfoodandendatthelastbreathwithafearofdeath.Thus,thereasontobeinthisworldistobearanxieties,frustrationsandfears.Nowthequestionisifthereisnowayoutoftensionsthenhowtoliveintheworld?Theanswerwouldbeclearbyasimplelogicthatachildisunawareofthethreatoftheweaponsofmassdestructionoraninevitabledeath.Thebabylivesinacarelessandfearlessworld,whichisfullofjoyandliveliness.Thisworldofneglectistherealcauseofaneverlastinghappinessofthekid.Therefore,itistheignorancewhichsafethechildrenfromhighbloodpressure,heartattack,depressionandsoon.Toneglectcertainrealitiesthathavenothingtodowithourdailylifeisnecessary.Suchmatterswhichhavenoimmediatebearingsuponourdailyroutineshouldbeignored.Ponderingoversuchproblemswouldbeoutofourscope.Therearethousandsofmomentsofjoysarelyinginfrontofustheneedistorealizethemandaccepttherealitythatwhereignoranceisbliss,itisfollytobewise.__________________Lo!manisinastateofloss.(AlAsr:103:2)Andeverysmallandgreatthingisrecorded.(AlQamar:54:53)AndguardyourselvesagainstadayinwhichyewillbebroughtbacktoAllah.Theneverysoulwillbepaidinfullthatwhichithathearned,andtheywillnotbewronged.(AlBaqara:2:281)

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    ThanksToLocateMyWeaknesses.....IHavePostedAnotherPassage,HopeYouAllWouldCorrectThis.WaitingForYourComments.....

    Regards__________________Lo!manisinastateofloss.(AlAsr:103:2)Andeverysmallandgreatthingisrecorded.(AlQamar:54:53)AndguardyourselvesagainstadayinwhichyewillbebroughtbacktoAllah.Theneverysoulwillbepaidinfullthatwhichithathearned,andtheywillnotbewronged.(AlBaqara:2:281)

    Thursday,May31,2007

    secondopinion0238thCTP(PAAS)

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    @YASSER28SirIwouldliketoaskthatwhyshouldIstopwritingAmericanstandard.IthinkitwouldbemistaketomixbothBritishandAmericanspellingsandstylesbutifIamtotallyfollowingAmericanpatternthenwhyshouldIshifttoBritish.AlsoitwouldbedifficultformetofollowBritishstandardcozIamusedtoAmericanwayofspelling.WouldnithaveanybearinguponmymarksifIdofollowtheAmericanstandardofwritinginexam?

    @YASSER28PlzjustifythefollowingmistakesasyouhavepointedoutWiththisirresponsiblebehavior,Ithasbecomeanormoftoday'sworldThetruth,lateron,disclosesoverthepurchaserpurchaserswouldonlyjudgebythesatisfactoryresponseoftheproductthathadpreviouslygotbythem.

    @555Couldyoupleaseclarifythefollowingmistakesthatyouhavepointedout?1.Many(Mostofthe)peoplethinkfromtheireyes.2.bothertouse(using)theirgraymatter.....("Botherto"phrasecanbeusedwithaverbword)3.Suchmeasuresgreatlyimprovethesaleofthe(theextra)product.

    Thanks

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    SECONDOPINION__________________Lo!manisinastateofloss.(AlAsr:103:2)Andeverysmallandgreatthingisrecorded.(AlQamar:54:53)AndguardyourselvesagainstadayinwhichyewillbebroughtbacktoAllah.Theneverysoulwillbepaidinfullthatwhichithathearned,andtheywillnotbewronged.(AlBaqara:2:281)

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    LasteditedbyShootingStarWednesday,May09,2012at12:35AM.

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    Quote:

    OriginallyPostedbysecondopinion02@YASSER28PlzjustifythefollowingmistakesasyouhavepointedoutWiththisirresponsiblebehavior,Ithasbecomeanormoftoday'sworldThetruth,lateron,disclosesoverthepurchaserpurchaserswouldonlyjudgebythesatisfactoryresponseoftheproductthathadpreviouslygotbythem.

    Dear,this"irresposible"isnotasuitableadjectivehere,useinstead"faulty","immature",etc.

    ''world's"insertcommaherenotasemicollin

    ''disclosesover''isnotaproperwordhere(yaarwatchingTVwhilecomposingpostsonotcominginmindasuggestiveword)yes,watchingDAWNNEWSgaveclueuse"dawnsupon"istead.

    "previously'gotbythem"trytoremaininactivevoice,passivevoiceisconsideredstylisticallyinbadtaste."Got"wordisusedininformalandspokenlanguageforwrittenyouhavetoresortto''bought"....you'vemissedsomeitaliciseditems,wellit'suptoyou.ButIshouldremindyouthatyouneedtostrengthenyourdefinitearticle''the"area.Moreover,youseemtomeamanagementorITgraduateandthereisanabundanceofAmericanisminyourwriting,esp.,inspellingconventions.DoremeberourCSSexaminersarelittleMaster'sinAmericanliteraturerathertheyareconservativefollowersofBritishconventionsofQueen'sEnglish.Itwasinformation,youcanbetterdecideforyourself.

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    @555Couldyoupleaseclarifythefollowingmistakesthatyouhavepointedout?1.Many(Mostofthe)peoplethinkfromtheireyes.2.bothertouse(using)theirgraymatter.....("Botherto"phrasecanbeusedwithaverbword)3.Suchmeasuresgreatlyimprovethesaleofthe(theextra)product.

    Itendtodisagreewiththefirstpointofmyverdearfellow555.Whenyouuse"Mostofthepeople"youaregivinganegativesignalthatmajorityisfoolratheryourSecond..."Many"appealstomeasitisgivingquitereasonablespacethattherearemanypeoplenot"nearlyallpeople".

    Thesecondpointof555isquiteagreebletomeandIfeelsorryImissedthat.Dear,youhavetuseagerundhereit'snotjustsimpleverbfirstformcase.

    ...Yasser__________________YasserChattha

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