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Comprehensive Literacy
YCS 2012
Key Result: Continuous, measurable improvement in literacy over time for all students
Strategic Priority“That all students show progress in their learning
with an emphasis on literacy.“
80% of students on regular programs will meet an acceptable grade level on: Alberta Achievement Tests (AAT) Diploma Exams
Students will show continued growth and achievement concurrent with instructional time
Students will apply digital tools to gather, evaluate and use information
District Wide Writes
CTBS Results Modified and IEP Outcomes
Why are we looking at literacy?
Yearly snapshot of how students are doing in reading, writing and math
Results reflect ONLY those students whom we are testing at grade level, and who write the AATs
Results for the past 3 years are true for both schools and both languages
Acceptable Exceeded Failed
ELA (Actual) 72.6% 8.3% 27.4%
ELA (8% Improvement)
91% 30% 10%
FLA (Actual) 64.7% 17.6% 35.3%
FLA (8% Improvement)
83% 29% 18%
Grade 3
Acceptable Exceeded Failed
ELA (Actual) 84% 11% 16%
ELA (5% Improvement)
94% 20% 6%
FLA (Actual) 83% 16.7% 16.75%
FLA (5% Improvement)
92% 33% 0%
Grade 6
Grade 9
Acceptable Exceeded Failed
ELA (Actual) 83.8% 8.1% 16%
ELA (5% Improvement)
91% 14% 9%
FLA (Actual) 85.7% 14.3% 14.3%
FLA (0% Improvement)
No difference from AB
No difference from AB
No difference from AB
Assumptions We can perform at least equal to Alberta’s
average.
We can look at outcomes to determine where we get the biggest ‘bang’ for our buck.
By ensuring we’re investing our time for the biggest return, we will help others too.
What we struggle with Inferential meaning Contextual understanding Predicting Understanding literary terms Structures Evaluative decision making (summarizing,
purpose of writing) Problem solving Using parts to see the whole Non-narrative writing Mechanics
Strategic Priority“That all students show progress in their learning with an emphasis on literacy.“
District Support
Creating Strategic Learners
Explicit Teaching
Literacy Across all
Subject Areas
Literacy withICT
Literacy is. . .
ECE - Towards Literacy: A Strategy Framework – 2008-2018)
. . . linked to language, social context and cultural identity, encompassing a broad range of competencies: reading, writing, speaking, listening, observation, visual representation, numeracy, use of technology, critical thinking and problem solving; a continuum of lifelong skill development
(Alberta Education, 2010)
. . . acquiring, creating, connecting and communicating meaning in a wide variety of contexts
(Ontario Literacy and Numeracy Secretariat, 2008)
. . . the ability to read, write, create, interpret and present a range of media in all subject areas
Interpret
ProduceCommunicate
Literacy is . . .
(YCS 2012)
Critically
Creatively
Ethically
Reading
Writing Speakin
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using
to
in ALL subject areas and in life
Literacy Myths
Myth #2
Literacy = Language Arts
Students learn everything about reading and
writing in primary and elementary school.
Literacy instruction is the sole responsibility of Language Arts
teachers. Myth #3
Myth #1
Comprehensive Literacy
Across ALL subject areas
Comprehensive Literacy
Integrate literacy into all subject areas
Recognize that reading, writing & speaking are active and reiterative processes
Provide authentic learning experiences
Promote critical and creative thinking
Incorporate evidence-based instructional practices
To ensure all students achieve their full literacy potential . . .
Strategic Priority“That all students show progress in their learning with an emphasis on literacy.“
District Support
Creating Strategic Learners
Explicit Teaching
Literacy Across all
Subject Areas
Literacy withICT
Students should understand that they’re
expected to perform certain undisclosed
outcomes.
Besides . . . My system works!
The point of learning is to keep them
guessing about the criteria so they’ll work harder in their
desperation not to fail. Stress facilitates success.
Using Rubrics Rubrics?! I never give my students rubrics! That’s equivalent to cheating! I might as well write their papers for them!
Formative & Summative Assessment
Using rubrics for
Clarifies teacher expectations
Develops focus for instruction
Aligns objectives and evaluation
Provides common language
Provides feedback for improvement
Encourages self-evaluation
Reduces marking time
The Traits
Organization
Word Choice
ConventionsSentence Fluency
Voice
Ideas
If people cannot write well, they cannot think well, and if they cannot think well,
others will do their thinking for them.
George Orwell
Assessing WritingFocus Trait Ideas
Guided and Collaborative Practice
Key Question
Key Qualities Topic Focusing the topic Developing the topic Using details
The heart of the piece – the main idea (topic) and the details chosen to develop it.
Does the writer stay focused and share original and fresh information or perspective about the topic?
Focus Trait Organization
Key Question
Key Qualities Creating the lead Using sequence and transition words Structuring the body Ending with a sense of resolution
The internal structure – the thread of meaning, the
pattern of logic.
Does the organizational structure enhance the ideas and make the piece easier to understand?
Focus Trait Sentence FluencyThe auditory trait -- how words and phrases
flow through the writing piece.
Always write and read with ear, not the eye. You should hear every sentence you write as if it was
being read aloud or spoken.C.S. Lewis, 1959
Key Question Can you feel the words and phrases flow together as you read it aloud?
Key Qualities Creating well-built sentences Varying sentence types Smooth and rhythmic Breaking “rules”
Focus Trait Conventions
Editing standards applied to a piece of writing to make mechanically correct and
easy to read. Key
Question How much editing would have to be done to be ready to share with an outside source?
Key Qualities Checking spelling and capitalization Punctuating effectively Paragraphing accurately Accurately applying grammar and usage
I am a color crayon no one would use me I was an ugly green They would use pretty pink and blue instead I fell out of Stacys desk that night and in the morning somebody steped on me and smeared me all over the Floor and then the Teacher saw it and Sandy got in trouble there was only have left of me so she trew me in the garbag well it was kind of fun cause there was a brown crayon right then we fell in love so three days later I was Mrs Brown
he gave me a life saver for a wedding ring I have him one too then a week later we had a little baby Girl we named her Stacy Then that niht the ganetur came to take the garbag can out what a relif cause people were spitting gum out and about got on us then when he was going to pick it up we fell out and we lived in the corner of a desk for several years we still do and the brown family lived happily ever after.
Color Crayon
Beware of conventions bias!
Ideas = 4 Organization = 4Conventions = 1
Scoring Color CrayonIdeas = 4 topic is focused clear and original main idea interesting details support the main idea
Organization
Word Choic
e
Conventions
Sentence Fluency
Voice
Ideas
Organization = 3
Sentence Fluency = 4
main idea clearly introduced writing is generally easy to follow attempts transitions end is predictable but connected
sentence structure usually controlled simple and compound sentences variety in sentence length and type
Assessing Writing
Independent Practice
Assess
Discuss
Highlight key words on the rubric Silently read the piece of writing Use the rubric to score the piece in all six
categories Repeat for each piece of writing
Discuss your results with colleagues Provide reasons/evidence for your score
Compare Compare your results to the
annotated papers
Trait Score Comments
Ideas 4 Clear, focused, interesting Holds reader’s attention Carefully selected details enhance the main idea
Organization
4
Beginning hooks reader Logical sequencing; easy to follow Ideas clearly connected Ending is appropriate & effective (though underdeveloped)
Sentence Fluency
3+ Sentence structure usually controlled (e.g. last sentence) Effectively uses simple & compound sentences Some variation in sentence length & beginning
Word Choice
4
Specific & accurate word choices Descriptive words used effectively & creatively Vocabulary is natural, effective & appropriate Word choices enhance meaning
Voice 4 Individual & unique Appropriate to audience & purpose Engages reader
Language Conventions
4
Most words spelled correctly Conventional end punctuation & capitalization usually
correct Errors sometimes affect clarity
Grade 3 - Expository
A New Class Pet
Trait Score Comments
Ideas 3 Clear main idea/topic Details are general & straightforward; support main idea
Organization
3
Beginning clearly introduces main idea Sequencing is sound; generally easy to follow Most ideas are connected but some connections are
unclear
Sentence Fluency
3 Sentence structure usually controlled Simple & compound sentences present Some variety in sentence beginning
Word Choice
3 Familiar words are used correctly Descriptive words used accurately Word choices support meaning
Voice 3 Appropriate to audience & purpose Writer connects to audience
Language Conventions
3
Many familiar words spelled correctly Conventional end punctuation & capitalization usually
correct Errors sometimes affect clarity
Grade 3 - Expository
My Class Pet
Trait Score Comments
Ideas 2 Topic beginning to be defined Recognizable main idea (underdeveloped) Details are few
Organization
1 Beginning provides little information; no ending present Sequencing is confusing Connections between ideas are missing/unclear
Sentence Fluency
1 Sentence structure impedes meaning Little variation in sentence type, length or beginning Simple and compound sentences present
Word Choice
2 Language is functional Words & expressions are simplistic Word choices support meaning
Voice 2 Some awareness of audience but limited connection Hints of a voice present
Language Conventions
1
Spelling is generally phonetic; some words difficult to discern
Inconsistent use of punctuation & capitalization Little sense of standard conventions Errors interfere with clarity
Grade 3 - Expository
A Rabbit
Trait Score Comments
Ideas 2+ Topic is clear Recognizable main idea Details are few
Organization
2 Recognizable beginning & ending Writing is generally easy to follow Connections between ideas are vague
Sentence Fluency
3 Sentence structure is consistently controlled Some variation in sentence type, length or beginning Simple and compound sentences present
Word Choice
2 Language is functional Words & expressions are simplistic Word choices support meaning
Voice 2 Some awareness of audience but limited connection Hints of a voice present
Language Conventions
4 Most words spelled correctly End punctuation & capitalization used correctly
Grade 3 - Expository
Hamster
Trait Score Comments
Ideas 3 Topic is general but consistent Ideas are appropriate Details are general; support main idea
Organization
2+ Clear & appropriate beginning Writing is generally easy to follow Ending is predictable (underdeveloped)
Sentence Fluency
2
Sentence structure sometimes lacks control; impedes meaning
Some variation in sentence length & beginning
Word Choice
3
Words & expressions are specific; enhance voice Language choices evoke clear images Vocabulary clarifies meaning; appropriate for intended
audience
Voice 3 Appropriate to topic, purpose & audience Reflects interest in & commitment to topic Writer engages audience
Language Conventions
2 Spelling is inconsistent but readable Inconsistent use of capitals & punctuation Errors occasionally reduce clarity & interrupt flow
Grade 6 - Persuasive
Softball
Trait Score Comments
Ideas 4 Topic is general but consistent Ideas are appropriate Details are general; support main idea
Organization
4 Clear & appropriate beginning Writing is generally easy to follow Ending is predictable (underdeveloped)
Sentence Fluency
4
Sentence structure sometimes lacks control; impedes meaning
Some variation in sentence length & beginning
Word Choice
4
Words & expressions are specific; enhance voice Language choices evoke clear images Vocabulary clarifies meaning; appropriate for intended
audience
Voice 4 Appropriate to topic, purpose & audience Reflects interest in & commitment to topic Writer engages audience
Language Conventions
4 Spelling is inconsistent but readable Inconsistent use of capitals & punctuation Errors occasionally reduce clarity & interrupt flow
Grade 6 - Persuasive
Let’s Go Swim
Trait Score Comments
Ideas 1 Topic is general but consistent Ideas are appropriate Details are general; support main idea
Organization
1 Clear & appropriate beginning Writing is generally easy to follow Ending is predictable (underdeveloped)
Sentence Fluency
1
Sentence structure sometimes lacks control; impedes meaning
Some variation in sentence length & beginning
Word Choice
2
Words & expressions are specific; enhance voice Language choices evoke clear images Vocabulary clarifies meaning; appropriate for intended
audience
Voice 2 Appropriate to topic, purpose & audience Reflects interest in & commitment to topic Writer engages audience
Language Conventions
1 Spelling is inconsistent but readable Inconsistent use of capitals & punctuation Errors occasionally reduce clarity & interrupt flow
Grade 6 - Persuasive
Soccer
Setting Goals
Writing Across All Subject Areas
Setting Goals
Culture