composition workshop
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COMPOSITION WORKSHOPCOMPOSITION WORKSHOPCOMPOSITION WORKSHOPCOMPOSITION WORKSHOPUniversity of the Sacred HeartUniversity of the Sacred Heart
Department of HumanitiesDepartment of Humanities
Center for Language Development Center for Language Development Across the DisciplinesAcross the Disciplines
LADLAD
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Objective
To help the student write effective and organized essays and papers
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Choose a Topic
• Select a topic that you like or that is familiar to you
• See if there is enough information on your chosen topic
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Brainstorming
• Select a topic• Write down what comes to your
mind• Group the ideas that are related• Choose the group of ideas that
interests you and are related to the topic
• Organize your notes into an outline
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Do Some Research…
…on the topic by asking the –wh questions:
who, what, when, why and how
…use the library, Internet, TV broadcasts, newspapers, magazines, etc…
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Prepare an Outline
• Introduction• Thesis statement (topic sentence)
• Body• Main idea
• Supporting ideas (details)
• Main idea• Supporting ideas (transition to next
paragraph)
• Conclusion
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Starting Your First Starting Your First DraftDraft
Starting Your First Starting Your First DraftDraft
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Paper Format
centralize
the title
1” margins
double-spaced
textindent each
paragraph
1” margins
Recommended font: Courier or Times New Roman
justifiedmargins
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Essay Content
• Make sure to include the thesis statement in your introduction
• Develop your ideas according to the outline
• Close your argument with a conclusion
»Summarize information from the previous paragraphs
»Do introduce new information in the conclusion
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Writing TechniquesWriting TechniquesWriting TechniquesWriting Techniques
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• In structure (use of compound and complex sentences)
Example: I went to Baskin Robbins, and
I ate a sundae. (compound sentence)
Sentence Variety
• By using expansions (adjectives, adverbs, verbal and prepositional phrases and appositives)
Example: Mary has a long, red skirt.
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Sentence Variety
• In structure – complex sentenceExample: I saw the woman, who
was killing the cockroach, scream crazily.
• In sentence arrangementExample: In the middle of the
desert, Will Smith punched the alien.
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Other Techniques
• Achieve unity
• Use correct word order for emphasis
• Use occasional questions, exclamations, or commands
• Use connectives (and, but, therefore…)
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Also Remember• Writing purpose
– Narrate– Describe– Compare / Contrast– Persuade
• The tone (sad, humorous, serious, concerned…)
• Your audience (formal / informal)
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Avoid the Following
• Breaking one idea into short, monotonous sentences
• Including sentences with unrelated or illogical details
• Using too many details even though related
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Avoid the Following
• Redundancy
• Unnecessary changes in point of view
• Run-ons (A run-on sentence has at least two sentences. Each one should be written separately.)
Incorrect: Do you see the man in the car he is my father.
Correct: Do you see the man in the car? He is my father.
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Citation
• Short quotations (three lines or less) should be enclosed in quotation marks
Example: “Don’t ask what your country can do for you, but ask what you can do for your
country.” – John F. Kennedy
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Citation• On a new line, indent longer quotations (four or more
lines), and set off in single space without quotation marks. Return to the original margin when you finish the quote.
Always identify the source using APA or MLA style
My country, ‘tis of thee,Sweet land of liberty,Of thee I sing:Land where my fathers died,Land of the pilgrims’ pride,From every mountainsideLet freedom ring.
-America, by Samuel Francis Smith
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Plagiarism
• When you use someone’s ideas without citing, you receive credit for someone else’s intellectual effort
• To avoid plagiarism, make sure to identify and document all your quotes, cites, and reference sources
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Save Your Work
• If you use a computer or word processor, make sure you save your work
• Make more than one copy !
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Go to the LAD Center!
•Proofread•Check grammar•Check work format•Check essay outline•Check quotations and
citations
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Prepare Your Second Draft…
…and go back to the LAD Center for a
second opinion
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Preparing Your Final Paper
Make sure to include the following:
• Cover page with your name, student number, the title of your work, course and section, professor’s last name, and date
• Reference list at the end of your work
• Revise quotations and citations
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References Capital Community College Library.
Available at http://webster.commnet.edu Purdue University Online Writing Lab.
Available at http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/research/r_mla.html
The Research Paper. Available at http://www.wsu.edu:8080/~brians/general_handouts/research_guide.html
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Questions?Questions?
Prepared by: Thalia N. Nazario-SantiagoPrepared by: Thalia N. Nazario-Santiago Coordinator for the Center for Languages and Culture Coordinator for the Center for Languages and Culture
Center for Language Development Across the Disciplines (LAD)Center for Language Development Across the Disciplines (LAD) February 2003February 2003 Revised by: Patricia Kidd Revised by: Patricia Kidd August 2004August 2004 Revised by: Prof. Delia SerranoRevised by: Prof. Delia Serrano January 2005January 2005