colonial holidays - mr lovett's 5th grade - mr. lovett's...
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EDITING KEY: Journal Entries Daily Paragraph Editing
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Colonial Holidaysnovember 27< 1726= A
Dear DiaryA
This is our second thanksgiving in Boston. Mamahave = ^
keriA nellie and I -has- been cooking for two days NellieE AE A ^ ©and I are in charge of shelling the clams and mussels
for the shellfish chowder keri is shucking the corn© =
and shelling lima beans for succotash. Mama, of course^her pumpkin '
is bakinq -his- delicious pumkin pie_®
MONDAY
Diarydear Dairy,
WEEK 16
december 24^1726= A
isThe whole family -epe- working hard in preparation
for our Christmas festivities Papa has decorated all ofour = ® .
hour windows with everqreen branches meanwhileA keri.y ®E AE A
nellia and I have been stringing cranberries. Mama and= A neighbormrs Helik our next-door nerhbor are preparing ourE®A A AChristmas feastE ©
TUESDAY WEEK 16
Error Summary
Capitalization 5
Language Usage 2
Punctuation:
Comma 6
Period 3
Spelling 1
Error Summary
Capitalization 8
Language Usage 1
Punctuation:
Comma 6
Period U
Other 1
Spelling 3
72 EMC 2728 • Daily Paragraph Editing, Grade 5 • ©2004 by Evan-Moor Corp.
EDITING KEY:Journal Entries Daily Paragraph Editing
January 5, 1727
Dear diary?= A isTwelfth niqht my favorite holiday ore- tomorrow.
All the grown-ups put on their best clothes and dance
to merry musicThis year, mama papa and keri my© = A= A = Aare
older sister -fs- going to the twelfth night ball. I amA E E =
too young to go Keri promised to tell me everything.©
I can hardly wait to grow up but I know I must
WEDNESDAY WEEK 16
April 1CJ?/1727
dear Diary/= A
I have spent days hunting for the biggest eggs
I can find. I only have seven but easter is tomorrow.A = A
so that will have to do. Nellie, my younger sister madeA ' ' A
dye for the eggs she used tree bark onion skins, beet
juice and spinach water, keri -ope- cutting out patterns.
I, meanwhile am waiting to dye the eggs
THURSDAY WEEK 16
Error Summary
Capitalization 9
Language Usage 2
Punctuation:
Comma 8
Period 3
Other 1
Error Summary
Capitalization U
Language Usage 1
Punctuation:
Comma 10
Period 2
74 EMC 2728 • Daily Paragraph Editing, Grade 5 • ©2004 by Evan-Moor Corp.