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EDITING KEY: Journal Entries Daily Paragraph Editing Preview the 4 daily lessons to ensure you review or introduce skills that may be unfamiliar to students. Colonial Holidays november 27< 1726 = A Dear Diary A This is our second thanksgiving in Boston. Mama have = ^ keriA nellie and I -has- been cooking for two days Nellie E AE A ^ © and I are in charge of shelling the clams and mussels for the shellfish chowder keri is shucking the corn ©= and shelling lima beans for succotash. Mama, of course^ her pumpkin ' is bakinq -his- delicious pumkin pie_ ® MONDAY Diary dear Dairy, WEEK 16 december 24^1726 = A is The whole family -epe- working hard in preparation for our Christmas festivities Papa has decorated all of our = ® . hour windows with everqreen branches meanwhileA keri. y ®E AE A nellia and I have been stringing cranberries. Mama and = A neighbor mrs Helik our next-door nerhbor are preparing our E®A A A Christmas feast E © TUESDAY WEEK 16 Error Summary Capitalization 5 Language Usage 2 Punctuation: Comma 6 Period 3 Spelling 1 Error Summary Capitalization 8 Language Usage 1 Punctuation: Comma 6 Period U Other 1 Spelling 3 72 EMC 2728 • Daily Paragraph Editing, Grade 5 • ©2004 by Evan-Moor Corp.

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EDITING KEY: Journal Entries Daily Paragraph Editing

Preview the 4 daily lessons to ensure you review or introduce skills that may be unfamiliar to students.

Colonial Holidaysnovember 27< 1726= A

Dear DiaryA

This is our second thanksgiving in Boston. Mamahave = ^

keriA nellie and I -has- been cooking for two days NellieE AE A ^ ©and I are in charge of shelling the clams and mussels

for the shellfish chowder keri is shucking the corn© =

and shelling lima beans for succotash. Mama, of course^her pumpkin '

is bakinq -his- delicious pumkin pie_®

MONDAY

Diarydear Dairy,

WEEK 16

december 24^1726= A

isThe whole family -epe- working hard in preparation

for our Christmas festivities Papa has decorated all ofour = ® .

hour windows with everqreen branches meanwhileA keri.y ®E AE A

nellia and I have been stringing cranberries. Mama and= A neighbormrs Helik our next-door nerhbor are preparing ourE®A A AChristmas feastE ©

TUESDAY WEEK 16

Error Summary

Capitalization 5

Language Usage 2

Punctuation:

Comma 6

Period 3

Spelling 1

Error Summary

Capitalization 8

Language Usage 1

Punctuation:

Comma 6

Period U

Other 1

Spelling 3

72 EMC 2728 • Daily Paragraph Editing, Grade 5 • ©2004 by Evan-Moor Corp.

EDITING KEY:Journal Entries Daily Paragraph Editing

January 5, 1727

Dear diary?= A isTwelfth niqht my favorite holiday ore- tomorrow.

All the grown-ups put on their best clothes and dance

to merry musicThis year, mama papa and keri my© = A= A = Aare

older sister -fs- going to the twelfth night ball. I amA E E =

too young to go Keri promised to tell me everything.©

I can hardly wait to grow up but I know I must

WEDNESDAY WEEK 16

April 1CJ?/1727

dear Diary/= A

I have spent days hunting for the biggest eggs

I can find. I only have seven but easter is tomorrow.A = A

so that will have to do. Nellie, my younger sister madeA ' ' A

dye for the eggs she used tree bark onion skins, beet

juice and spinach water, keri -ope- cutting out patterns.

I, meanwhile am waiting to dye the eggs

THURSDAY WEEK 16

Error Summary

Capitalization 9

Language Usage 2

Punctuation:

Comma 8

Period 3

Other 1

Error Summary

Capitalization U

Language Usage 1

Punctuation:

Comma 10

Period 2

74 EMC 2728 • Daily Paragraph Editing, Grade 5 • ©2004 by Evan-Moor Corp.