Climb

Revised Storyboard

March 19, 2006

Low wind. Soft wheel squeaking, louder.

Wheels very loud. Hand dropped and digs into dirt.

Climbers slowly ascend the hill.

A climber loses his grip.Sound of wheels squeaking loudly.

Climber falls and disappears. Other looks back.Sound of clawing at dirt and wheels squeaking soften.

Sound of footsteps louder.Climbers look to above-right.

Runner ascend the hill.

Runner hops away tauntingly.

Sound of footsteps soften.

Climber continues.

Sound of wheels groaning painfully.

SNAP! BREAK! (thud)

Sound of footsteps (barely audible)

Climber’s torso dragging.Runner in the distance.

Sound of footsteps louder.

Runners ascend the hill.

Sound of footsteps soften.Sound of wind and wheels squeaking louder.

Sound of wheels continuous.Hand digs into dirt.

Sound of wind louder.Pan up the hill with the Climber.

Pan over the edge of the hill. Zoom in.

Zoom over Climber’s shoulder.

Zoom towards the ground.

Climber inches forward.

Sound of wheels squeaking soft and irregular.Sound of wind blowing loudly.

Proposed Revision

Grass thins toward top of the cliff.

Sound of footsteps soften.Sound of wind and wheels squeaking louder.

Sound of wheels continuous.Hand digs into dirt.

Sound of wind louder.Pan up the hill with the Climber.

Pan over the edge of the hill. Zoom in.

Zoom over Climber’s shoulder.

Zoom towards the ground.

Climber inches forward.

Sound of wheels squeaking soft and irregular.Sound of wind blowing loudly.