Class Review

EW2-047

121695Tei Min UmBIOTECH

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Gary's encouragement and the thing which makes Gary unhappy.

How your MXM result was graded by Gary.

Next blog post1) What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing?

2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing?

Please post on your blog by 23:59 Sat. Oct. 31st.Please email me your comments to three other students by 23:59 Mon. Nov. 2nd.

Gary's encouragement and the thing which makes Gary unhappy.

MXM forms only 18% of total grade.

Do not ignore advices your friend wrote on your para-graph.

Topic sen-tence

It's, in a word, 'make people eager to read your paragraph!'

The meaning of interesting is attracting reader's peep with an attrac-tive topic.

The meaning of informative is providing you with useful or helpful Idea.

△Tei Min is good at running.Not informative but also interesting.

Nobody wonders I am good at running and, nobody gets any benefit from my running ability.

Maxium point5

Needs to be interesting and informative.

Supproting sentence

You can make paragraph credible by using outside opinion.

You can classify It into 2 parts, expert and close with expert.

Expert : result of research, Professor's opinion, expert‘s and special-ist's advice etc...

Close with expert: Travel opinion of Someone who has experienced over 30 countries.

☆Gary think Incheon International Airport is best airport in the world.

★Gary who has visited 30 different countries think Incheon Interna-tional Airport is best airport in the world.

Which is more credible?Maximum point 12

Needs to clear, specific, de-tail, and concise, in addition, Gary emphasizes on credibil-ity of your supporting sen-tence.

Supproting sentence

Minimum is minimum.If you are asked to use at least one opinion in supporting sentences, Gary will be looking for more and, of course, you deserve to get lower grade than someone who suggest more than two outside opin-ion.

It means 'minimum is minimum!'

Maximum point 12

Needs to clear, specific, de-tail, and concise, in addition, Gary emphasizes on credibil-ity of your supporting sen-tence.

Concluding sentence

Do not add like 'Thank you for reading my paragraph' on the end of paragraph. It's not proper on reasons and examples paragraph but a letter.

If you got two points out of concluding sentence grade, doubt that your concluding sentence has played a role as a final supporting sen-tence.

Maximum point 3

clearly ends

the paragraph with the

writer’s final thoughts.

Writing

If your paragraph is composed of only simple sentence, or com-pound, It may be against to variety, make readers bored during read-ing yours.

Also, you should use a variety of vocabulary to make readers inter-ested in yours.

If you couldn’t get Maximum point, doubt that you miss punctuation error.

Maximum point 10

There are few errors in grammar, and a variety of simple, compound, complex sentences, and interesting vocabulary.

Visual ele-ments

Don't forget Gary refer that There is at least one reference to an out-side source (not an image)

The title and/or subtitles are catchy and interesting.

We can notice the difference between what is not attractive title and what is attractive on page 7, 81, 116 by comparing each other.

Maximum point 10

The paragraph follows proper paragraph form, including a properly formatted title, properly used citations, foot notes, etc...

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