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  • 8/10/2019 Charlie Serafini - Creative Partnership Archived

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    Creative Partnership Archived

    Messages from Myself to Rebecca:

    Love 52 and 54! Looks really mysterious, great page of thumbnails!

    Look forward to seeing some more!

    Love these, number 65 and 66 look great! Also really like 74!

    Look forward to seeing more.

    Colours are great on the top one! Adds so much more depth.

    Good job.

    Love the top 4, they look like they could work really well together. The colours are still really nice,

    awesome stuff.

    Really like 98 and 99, Love the tones in 99, looks really cool!

    Love how these are looking. I really like number 2, the colours really bring it to life.

    those mountains have a nice texture, I love your style. For me 2 and 5 on the flags, 5 is definitely my

    favourite.

    that could be your low angle as you get a sense of how tall everything is. It looks great, the colours

    are working really well, I love all of the flags.

    The colours are working really well, I love the atmosphere you're getting in there as well.

    It does kind of still look like a village, maybe you could add more structures in the distance to show

    that it is actually a vast space.

    Messages from Rebecca to Me:

    Good load of thumbnails, especially liked Phyllis 4 and 9, Zenobia 7 and 14, Zirma 8 and 12. Would

    be good to see these ones more in-depth especially with some colour. keep it up :)

    Really like your colour choices and well done for fading that background out nicely, ha.

    Messages from Myself to Dan:

    Hey Dan,

    I like the bottom 4 on this page, 2nd one from the left looks really nice. Could you possibly number

    the next batch so its easier to discuss them?

    Look forward to seeing more!

    Really like 3 and 15! agree with Phil the colour literally caught my eye from a mile off. Maybe try

    some more abstract stuff just as an experiment?

    Look forward to seeing more.

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    I really like 1 and 4 on this page, they're looking great. Can't wait to see you start takingthem further!

    Really like 10 and 16 from these!

    I like 20 and 22 from the sketchbook page, I can see you moving them forward!

    I like 3 and 6 from these, I think the gate/arch in number 6 looks nice.

    The colour makes it jump off the page, love the composition, I'm drawn straight to the tower

    in the distance.

    Good job

    Messages from Dan to Myself:

    Hi Charlie. I really like the Isaura thumbnails. They are all consistent and have a simple, but

    effective style that looks great. Maybe, add colour to see how that works, but they all lookgreat! Keep it up! :)

    I really like number 4 too. It has very good use of perspective and it can look great with

    more detail. Keep it up, mate! :)

    Messages from Myself to Tyler:

    I love the extreme angle on the low shot, that'll look really cool when it's done.