CHANGES IN MY TEASER TRAILER

BETWEEN DRAFT 1 AND DRAFT 2

The first change I made was instead of going straight into the clips, I added a common code and convention which was the production company at the start.

I then added the sundance film festival selection onto this clip so it made it more eye catching and it also made it a lot more professional looking.

I moved the from the director … text towards the end as I found that it was too early in the trailer for it to be displayed.

I took out the clip saying October 2009 as I didn’t like it and in the end had no room for it.

I also removed the text in this clip and took it out completely.

I again removed this text to the end because I felt it took away from the trailer clips.

A lot of the clips are switched about in this section and I added black outs in between to make the pace a lot faster and build the suspense.

I added the text into the clip as I felt it was bare around it.

Instead of having all these clips in one I separated them because it made it too cluttered.

I changed Eimear having an award to Aisling because I wanted it to seem like Eimear was a rising star because that is what is going to feature in my movie magazine.

I added the review to the end and after the panning shot which fades out.