Pain and Desire By Ben Pearce

Fade in:We can see a view of the whole town. There are cars and people walking on the road.

THE CAMERA:Gets closer and closer to the town.

CUT TO:A nice light up sign that says “Welcome to Indiana, Pennsylvania”

CUT TO:People are walking on the streets. We see a boy, about 19 years old with short brown hair, he is in the snow.

THE BUS stops about fifty feet in front of him.

THE KID looks in front of him and sees his bus taking off already.

BoyGreat, I missed the bus again.

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INT- Room 23- Early morning

The boy is walking up to the door. He stops about five feet in front of it and sees the teacher standing at his desk turned around facing the chalk board. The boy slowly walks up to the door and slowly opens it. A drop of sweat drips off of his face and hits the floor.

INT- In room 23- early morning

The boy walks in, he doesn’t shut the door, the teacher might hear him. The boy slowly walks over to his seat and sits in it.

TeacherYou’re late again, Mr. Parker. That’s three lates.

ParkerSorry, Mr. Vincent

VincentGreg Parker, I’ll have to give you a detention slip now. Do you know how many detentions that is?

GregUm… I think that’s three, sir.

Mr. VincentThat’s right. I’ll let this detention go, but if you’re late again… I’ll---

GregMr. Vincent… My bus skipped me. It was early.

Mr. Vincent

Oh, well… let’s forget about it, I’m sorry. I should have listened.

GregThanks.

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Greg’s face, he is proud of himself… telling the teacher off. The kid next to him leans over to him.

FriendNice, Greg.

GregWhat, Jim… it was true.

JimSure it was.

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JimHey… did you see the new girl?

GregJim, you know I hate new kids.

JimI’m sure you won’t hate this one.

GregWhat do you mean.

JimJust… I’ll show you at lunch.

GregWhatever. I hate new---

Mr. VincentGreg, is there something you’d like to share with the whole class?

GregDo you want me to be honest?

Mr. VincentSort of.

GregOk, my friend told me there was a new kid in class. (He stands up.) And… I wanted to see the new

kid. But I told my friend to wait after class.

Jim’s face:Jim looks up at Greg and gives him a mean look.

GregThat IS the truth.

Mr. VincentWell, you can talk to her after class.

Greg gives Mr. Vincent thumbs up, winks at him and smiles.

GregSure thing, Mr. V

Greg sits down in his chair. He looks over at Jim; Jim is giving him a mean look.

GregWhat’s your problem?

Mr. VincentToday, we’ll be learning what to do if you get bit by a snake. You suck the venom from the blood

immediately and---

GregThis is stupid. When will I ever use this?

JimI’m not a nerd or a geek, but you MIGHT have to.

GregWhatever.

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INT- Cafeteria--- Noon

Greg walks into the cafeteria; he is looking around for Jim. He can’t find him anywhere.

Greg (to himself)He’s probably eating lunch in the bathroom again.

Greg walks. His tray is bouncing up and down; he looks at his food and continues to walk.

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He gets to “table 3” and looks in front of him and sees “The New Girl” dressed in pink, red hair, blue eyes… and very pretty. Greg slowly walks past her and turns his head. He keeps looking at her and… He knocks over a teacher. Greg turns his head and looks at the teacher.

GregOh my god. I’m sorry.

Greg is trying to hide his face so “the new girl” doesn’t see him. He tries to walk away but the teacher lets out a big howl.

TeacherGREG PARKER!

Greg drops his head in shame and walks out the cafeteria and into the halls.

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He walks down the halls and opens a door that says “Principal”

INT- Principal’s office--- Afternoon

PrincipalGreg, how many times is this?

GregIt’s not because of the lates.

PrincipalWhat for?

GregI accidentally bumped into Mr. Carl and he dropped his tray.

PrincipalThat’s it?

GregYeah.

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INT- DETENTION, room 132--- Afternoon

Greg is sitting in a room with a bunch of smelly dirties. He is looking around and looking at all of the retards. One person is picking his nose. A person with a bull cut is playing his “Game boy”. A blond haired girl, looks fine… is sitting in the back seat.Greg looks at the teacher and sees that the teacher that is watching the “Bad Kids” is sleeping. Greg grabs his books and slowly walks over to the blond. Greg slams his books down and the teacher moves around in her sleep… but then she starts to snore. Greg takes a seat next to the girl.

GregHi, Casey.

CaseyHi, Greg… what are you doing in here? I didn’t even see you in here.

GregI did something really, really bad.

CaseyWhat?

GregI knocked over Mr. Carol’s lunch tray.

Casey (sarcastic)Oh, that’s really bad.

GregExactly!

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CLOSE UP ON THE TEACHER as she wakes up and looks around and sees Greg, and a bunch of other kids. She doesn’t see anything wrong. She gets up and walks to the door.

TeacherI’m going to the Faculty… I’ll be back in ten minutes.

She walks out of the room.

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Greg turns his head and looks at Casey.

GregHi Casey.

CaseyHi

GregI think the new girl is---

CaseyForget it. I’m a girl and think she’s the hottest thing going. She is probably already taken. Plus… you

wouldn’t want to hang around with her.

GregWhy?

CaseyShe’s just really weird. She draws these really strange pictures.

GregSo, just ask her if she’s available.

CaseyNo, Greg!

GregCasey, you have to… she’s hot.

CaseySo.

GregI need to at least talk to her.

CaseyYou think you’re so cool… go talk to her yourself.

Greg

But… hey, maybe I can. Thanks.

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INT- Greg’s house--- Night

Greg is looking for his best shirts. He is rummaging through closets and baskets for clothes. He opens his dresser and finds a button up shirt and some nice church pants. He grabs them and throws them on his dresser.

GregMOM! GOODNIGHT!!!!!!

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INT- Science, room 143--- Morning

Greg is sitting behind the girl of his dreams. Greg is just looking at the back of her head.

TeacherOk… people, get your books and turn to page seventy five.

Greg isn’t listening. He is just enjoying the back of the girl’s head. He snaps out of it and looks around and sees that everyone has their books open to page seventy five. Greg gets his science book open and turns the page. He gets to page seventy five and just looks at the back of the girls head again.

TeacherOk, I’m going to pass you back some papers… and you WILL write me a story, “What is Science”

The class boos and moans. But not the girl in front of Greg. Greg looks at her head.

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The teacher walks over to the paper box and grabs papers.

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Greg is still watching the girl.

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The Teacher starts to hand papers to each row.

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Greg is enjoying her head.

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His row gets the papers.

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Greg is off in his own little world.

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The girl turns around and hands Greg the papers. The girl sees him looking at her.

GirlAre you alright?

Greg snaps out of it and looks around. He notices that she knows he likes her.

GregWhat?

GirlHere are the papers.

GregOh, ok.

She hands him the papers and he passes them back and forgets to take one for himself.

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INT- Cafeteria--- Noon

Greg is walking in line… he is about two people away from the girl he likes. Greg turns his head and looks at Jim.

GregI think I’m going to sit with her today.

JimWho?

Greg (pointing)Her

Jim turns his head and looks at the girl.

JimYeah right.

GregDude, I’m going to do it.

JimI doubt it.

GregI’ll bet you twenty bucks I will.

JimI’ll bet you fifty you won’t.

GregDeal.

JimDeal.

Greg and Jim shake hands.

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Greg is walking down the long row of tables. He comes up to the girl he likes. He walks up to her and…

GregCan I sit here?

GirlSure, I guess.

Greg turns his head and looks at Jim as he sits down with her. Greg puts up five fingers.

GregSo, do you have any friends yet?

GirlNope.

GregWhat’s your name?

GirlIt’s---

A fire alarm goes off.

GirlMeet me at my house… the big old mansion.

GregIt’s a date?

GirlYou’ll see.

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INT- Parking lot- Noon

Greg is standing in front of a nice car. He is looking around for the girl. He can only see two hundred people standing around looking around to see if there is a fire or if it’s a drill.Greg keeps looking and notices that there is smoke coming out of a window. Greg walks up to the window and looks inside and sees a huge fire.

Voice

GET OVER HERE!!!

Greg snaps out of it and looks around. He sees a black man running over to him. Greg starts to walk back over to the grass and down the hill. The black man grabs his shirt and starts shaking him.

Black manWhy did you do that?

GregI saw smoke!

Black manGo stand with your friends.

Greg walks down the hill more and walks over to Jim.

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JimWhat was that all about?

GregMr. A** told me not to do anything.

JimBummer, so… how did it go with the girl?

GregI’m meeting her at her house tonight.

JimSure.

GregI’m sure!

JimI’ll tell you what… I’ll come over tonight---

GregYou don’t even know where she lives.

JimIn the old mansion.

GregOk, go on.

JimI’ll come over and see you two… just to talk and tell you stuff or something and I’ll go.

GregJust don’t stay there too long.

Jim

If I’m out past 10 o’clock… my dad will slit my throat with a comb.

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INT- Road--- Night

Greg is walking down the road looking for the big mansion. He is nervous and is cold. He continues to walk for a few minutes… he sees a small house, a donut shop, a gas station, and a long road that leads to a driveway to the mansion.

GregOk, here I go.

Greg stops and looks down the driveway. He sighs and starts to walk down the driveway.

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INT- Front door--- Night

Greg walks up to the front door and is about to ring the doorbell… but stops and thinks about what he is going to say.

GregFirst of all… what is her name?

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INT- Inside--- Night

The girl is walking down the stairs.

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GregExcuse me, but what is your name?

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The girl reached the bottom step.

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Greg is looking through the window to see if her parents are there.

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The girl is about ten feet from the door. Then the---

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Greg pushes the door bell.

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The girl turns the knob and---

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Greg turns around to the door and sees her open the door.

GirlHi, would you like to come in.

GregOf co---

GirlGreat… come in.

Greg is confused. He doesn’t know why, but he senses something wrong about her already. Greg walks inside and shuts the door. He looks around, it is a huge place.

GregYou have a nice place.

GirlI know. Would you like something to eat?

GregSure.

GirlGreat… I’ll be right in… you stay here.

Greg sits in the couch behind him. He takes off his coat and throws it on the floor. He pulls a stick of Juicy Fruit out of his pocket and puts it in his mouth. He is chewing and looking around.

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INT- KITCHEN- Night

The girl is cooking some beef barley… she reaches up into the cupboard and grabs something… we can’t see what it says… but she pours it all into the barley.

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INT- LIVING ROOM- Night

Greg is roaming through the living room. He is looking at the vases and mirrors and expensive stuff. A NOISE is heard in the closet. GREG TURNS HIS HEAD and looks at the door.

Greg (To girl)Excuse me, you have something in your closet!

GirlDon’t worry… it’s probably just my cat.

Greg walks over to the door and twists the doorknob and---

The girl grabs his shoulder. He turns around and sees her holding soup for him.

GregWell… thank you.

GirlNo problem. Eat it before it gets cold.

Greg looks inside the soup, it smells delicious to him. He takes the spoon and puts it in the soup and takes a bite. He enjoys it. He has another, and another, and another.

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INT- KITCHEN- Night

GregAnd I just had a bad time the other day when the last thing that---

GirlThat’s nice… do you want a soda, or a beer?

GregI don’t drink… uh…

Greg is getting dizzy. He is seeing colors. He is looking around the room and it is shiny and hurts his eyes. He looks over at the girl. She pulls a small bottle out of her pocket… It’s sleeping pills. She gets an evil smile on her face as he passes out.

FADE OUT

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INT- BATHROOM- Night

Greg wakes up and looks around. He is lying on the floor, he has a bruise on his head. He looks around, it is a big bathroom… about thirty feet long and twenty feed wide.Greg is looking around the bathroom. He gets up slowly, he realizes that he is in that girls house. He looks at the door, which is about ten feet away. He gets up quicker and walks over to the door and twists the doorknob… but it’s locked. She locked him in the bathroom.

GregHELLO!!! HELP! I’M LOCKED IN!!!

Girl (voice)I know.

GregWhy am I locked in here?

Girl (voice)Because…

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OUTSIDE BATHROOM- 9:56 PM

GirlI locked you in there because… I’m---

Greg (voice)Crazy?

GirlYep… I’m crazy. And there is nothing you can do about it. You are in MY HOUSE, and in---

Greg (voice)Your house?

GirlOh, my parents are dead. They are in the closet. Don’t worry, if you want to… you can join them.

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INT- INSIDE BATHROOM- Night

GregWhy can’t you let me go? What did I do?

Girl (voice)You did nothing wrong… I just think that all of the boys at my old school needed to be taught a

lesson, so… I---

GregDid you cause the fire at school today?

Girl (Voice)Maybe.

GregAnd the two little girls last night?

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GirlI might have had something to do with it.

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GregWell… why do you want me.

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GirlYou are obsessed with me.

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GregI was not!

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GirlGreg… I saw---

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GregHOW DO YOU KNOW MY NAME?

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GirlI know everything about you.

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GregHave you been stalking me?

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GirlWhat are you going to do if I say yes?

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GregI’ll kill you when I get out.

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GirlWho said you are leaving?

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GregJust let me go… and I won’t say a thing. Please let me out.

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GirlI doubt it, Greg. You will go on with your life and tell your friends about me and tell them about me.

And I don’t want that, Greg.

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GregWell my friend will---

The doorbell rings. Greg looks around and then starts pounding on the door. He is yelling and kicking and punching the door.

GregJim! Jim, HELP ME!!!

The door opens, the girl walks in and pulls out a dart gun and shoots Greg in the foot. Greg looks at his foot and starts to run. He pushes the girl. She just stands there. Greg runs out of the bathroom.

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INT- OUTSIDE--- Night

Jim is standing there in the cold. He is waiting for the girl to answer the door.

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Greg is limping toward the front door. He starts to loose support in both of his legs… he falls to his knees and starts to crawl. Greg starts to get dizzy---

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Jim is standing outside waiting and waiting. Jim looks in the window… but the window is too foggy to see through.

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Greg stops crawling and falls asleep. The girl walks out into the living room and grabs his feet and pulls him into the closet. There are two other people in there, but they are bloody and dead. She puts him int here and shuts the door.

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Jim is looking through the window as… the door opens and the Girl smiles.

GirlHi.

JimHello… Uh, your name?

GirlWell… why are you here?

JimMy friend… Greg is here and I was just wandering if he was here---

GirlYeah, he’s here.

The girl pulls out a shotgun from the closet beside her and aims it at Jim’s chest.

JimWow, please… stop!

GirlI swear to god if you make one move I’ll fill your lungs with rock salt.

JimRock salt?

GirlNow, slowly come inside and shut and lock the door behind you.

JimBut---

GirlI said fu**ing do it now or I’ll shoot you.

Jim slowly walks inside with his hands in the air. He slams the door shut and locks the door with the key that is already in the keyhole. Jim is starting to sweat, tears start to form in his eyes… but he’s not crying yet.

GirlGet over on the couch and sit down. If you make one little move I’ll blow your da** head off.

Jim just sits there and covers his head as…CUT TO

CLOSET- NIGHT

Greg wakes up… he is inside a dark closet. WE CAN’T SEE anything. But then a light comes on.

GregHELP ME!!!

Jim is pounding on the door. He can smell something. He sniffs louder and turns his head a few inches and sees two dead people, a man and a woman… lying on the ground.

GregPLEASE LET ME OUT!!!

Jim (voice)Greg?

GregJim?! Jim, what are you doing here?

Jim (voice)I came to see your girl friend… yeah, she’s really nice.

GregJim, this is no time for jokes! We need to ge---

Jim (voice)She’s coming!

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OUTSIDE CLOSET- Night

The girl walks over to the closet and pulls out a skeleton key and turns the lock… the door opens as…

Greg kicks the girl in the stomach. She falls to the ground. Jim gets up and runs over to the front door. Jim turns the knob… but it won’t budge. Jim gets up off the couch and runs over to help Greg. They both struggle to open the door.

Girl (voice)Get over here now.

There is a moment of silence.

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The crazed girl’s face.

GirlI SAID GET OVER HERE BEFORE I BLOW YOU TWO AWAY!!!

Jim and Greg turn around and see that she has the shotgun of rock salt in her hands.

GregListen, we want to leave. I don’t think you are

GirlI Said get over here and sit on the couch!

GregFine!

Jim and Greg slowly start walking toward the couch.

JimBy the way, Miss… I love your costume… where did you get it, Goodwill?

The girl shoots the gun up toward the ceiling. Jim’s eyes widen even more.

JimSorry. Just, don’t shoot… please!

GirlNow, sit.

The two sit on the couch.

GregWho are you?

JimDon’t say that to her.

GirlGet up, Greg.

Greg slowly gets up. He just stands there for a moment.

Jim

Why does Greg get to get up?!

GirlShut your da** mouth before I blow it off!

JimOk! Why do you holler at me, Greg’s the one who kicked you.

GirlYou and I are going to have a lot of fun together, Jim.

JimThat sounds really nice.

Greg is standing there with his hands over his head.

GirlMove toward the room to your left.

GregExcuse me?

GirlYou heard me, now move!

Greg slowly walks toward the room. He is trying not to cry, but it’s to scary for him. He slowly turns his head.

GregWould you just---

GirlSHUT UP AND MOVE!

Greg keeps moving toward the door.

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INSIDE THE ROOM- Night

The door opens and Greg looks inside and sees it is a regular room with a king sized bed, a bathroom… and a… A WINDOW!!

GirlGet In there and I don’t want to hear another word from you until I come in to get you!

GregYes mother.

The girl pushes Greg into the room. Greg lands on his face. He gets up and his nose is bleeding. He turns around and the girl shuts the door on him and locks it.

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THE WINDOW- Night

Greg walks over to the window with a smile on his face. He walks to the window and tries to open it… but it’s locked.

Greg (whispers) [Sarcastic]That Evil girl…

Greg walks over to the coat hanger and picks it up and holds it like a baseball bat at the window.

Greg (whispers)Like I can’t break the window.

Greg swings the coat hanger and the glass shatters, makes a shrieking noise. An alarm went off.

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LIVING ROOM- Night

The girl looks at the room. She pulls a dart gun out of her breasts and shoots Jim in the neck. Jim screams in pain and then goes to sleep.

The girl runs over to the cabinet and grabs a .22 rifle with a scope on it. She opens the door andCUT TO

FIELD- NIGHT

Greg is running through the field, he is running through deep snow going to the woods. He stops at the woods, like he isn’t going to make it. He turns around and about three hundred yards behind him, is The crazy girl holding a rifle and has it aimed perfectly at his head. Jim turns his head and starts to run but… a gunshot goes off and a tree about half an inch beside him… bark comes off the tree.

GregWHAT DO YOU WANT!!!

GirlI WANT YOU TO SLOWLY WALK BACK HERE!!!

GregAND IF I DON’T!?

GirlI HAVE A PRETTY GOOD AIM AT YOUR HEAD RIGHT NOW!!!

GregOK!!! JUST DON’T SHOOT ME!!

Greg starts to walk back to the house. There is a barn and behind the barn is an electric fence… where the crazy girl is standing. Greg slowly starts to talk for the barn. He swallows and closes his eyes. He starts walking toward the barn.

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The girl is looking at him and sees him walking towards the barn.

Girl (to herself)Where does he think he’s going?

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Greg is almost at the barn door. He is walking toward it. He is about ten feet away.

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Girl (to herself)I’ll give him four seconds.

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Greg is one inch away from the doorknob. He turns it and…

CLOSE UP ON HIS FACE AS…

Girl (voice)Where do you think you’re going!??

Greg opens his eyes wider and lets out the first word.

GregLeave me alone!

Greg opens the door and leaps inside as a gunshot goes off.

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INSIDE BARN- Night

As Greg hits the barn floor, on the wall beside him… a hole appears, and another, and another. Greg runs over into a garbage can and jumps inside it.

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GARBAGE CAN- Night

Greg looks around and sees rats and mouse guts and all decayed rat puss. Greg slowly crawls out of the garbage can and looks around. Then he looks behind him again and sees the girl standing there with the gun, not two inches from his forehead.

GirlGet back in the house.

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UPSTAIRS ROOM- Night

Greg gets thrown inside the room. He looks around and sees nothing… it looks like the same room as the other one. Greg walks over to the window and looks down and sees a pond of glass and rocks.

GregGod Da** it!

Greg looks around outside and looks beside him and sees a porch. And above it, at the level he is at… is the roof of the porch.

GregHell yes.

Grew opens the window and looks down… the girl is walking outside… she looks at Greg.

GirlHi, Greg.

Greg (angry)Hi, bit**.

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OUTSIDE PORCH- Night

The girl starts cutting down the porch roof with a saw.

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Greg looks at her in despair and lowers his head and shuts the window.

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UPSTAIRS ROOM- MORNING

Greg wakes up.

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CLOSET- Morning

Jim wakes up.

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Greg stands up and walks over to the door.

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Jim stands up and turns the door knob.

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The door is locked. Greg walks over to the bathroom and shuts the door.

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The door is locked to Jim’s closet. Jim looks around and turns on a light. He looks around… nothing.

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Greg comes out of the bathroom and looks around. The windows are barred shut. Greg stares at the window in horror.

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Jim kicks open the door and looks around. There is nobody there.

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Greg is banging on the big metal door.

GregHelp me! Somebody help me please!

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Jim hears Greg screaming. Jim turns around and looks up the stairs. Jim walks over to the closet and shuts it so if the girl comes back… she’ll think they’re in there. Jim walks over to the stairs

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THE TOP OF THE STAIRS- Morning

Jim is at the top of the stairs. Jim looks around.

JimGreg?

Greg (voice)JIM!?? WHERE ARE YOU?!!

JimI’m in the hall, keep yelling so I can find the room you’re in.

Greg (voice)We really need to get out of here!

JimI know… you really have bad taste in women.

Greg (voice)Thank you. How did you get out?

JimI was in the closet and---

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OUTSIDE- Morning

The girl is walking down the drive way. She has the mail in her hands.

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Greg hears crunching snow. Greg runs over to the window and looks outside. The crazy girl is walking up the porch stairs. Greg runs over to the door and---

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HALLWAY- Morning

Greg (voice)Jim! Hurry up and hide! She’s coming!

Greg turns his head and looks down the stairs and over to the front door, the screen door opens. Jim turns around and runs into the nearest room. He shuts the door and---

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FRONT DOOR- Morning

The girl walks in the “big door” and takes off her coat. She walks over into the first closet and---

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INSIDE CLOSET- Morning

She throws her coat on her dead parents.

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ROOM- Morning

Jim looks around, he is about to get out into another room… but---

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STAIRS- Morning

The girl starts to walk up the stairs, making loud foot steps.

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Jim looks around, all that’s in the room is a bathroom, a bed to hide under… and a closet. He starts for the closet but---

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TOP OF STEPS- Morning

The girl walks up to the top of the steps and turns down the hallway. She turns to the first door and---

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Jim leaps behind the bed as the door to the room opens. He crawls under the bed, hoping she won’t see him.

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GREG’S ROOM- Morning

Greg is looking for a way out of the room. He is looking around and he is hurrying so he can get and call the police. He looks up and sees an air vent… but it’s twenty feet high.

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THE GIRL’S ROOM- Morning

The girl walks over to the bathroom and takes off her sweater.

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UNDER BED- Morning

Jim is looking around for her. He turns his head and sees her---

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Take her short sleeve shirt off. She has a bra on now. She walks over to the tub and turns on the tub. She takes off her braw and---

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Jim is watching. But then he snaps out of it and looks for a way out.

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The girl takes her pants off and is in a G-String.

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Jim crawls out from under the bed and slowly walks toward the door as the girl gets in the tub behind him in the background. Jim looks on her dresser. He looks over at the bathroom as she is in the shower now with shampoo in her eyes. Jim walks over to her dresser and looks at a doll in the metal cage on her dresser, It looks exactly like Greg. Jim looks beside Greg’s doll and sees his is in progress… he isn’t stitched the whole way up yet though. Jim looks above the cage and sees a book that says “Voodoo” on it. Jim’s eyes widen and reaches for the book, but…

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INSIDE SHOWER- Morning

BIRD’S EYE VIEW of the girl in the shower, she washes the shampoo out of her eyes and turns her head and looks around. She turns off the water and…

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Jim turns his head and sees the shower door open. Jim turns around and opens the door and runs out the door before she sees him.

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GREG’S ROOM- morning

Greg is looking through “his” dresser drawer. He looks over behind the braw in the drawer and sees a screw.

GregOh my god, that’s it.

Greg picks up the screw and runs over to the door and starts picking at the wooden part of the door. Greg is thinking “this isn’t going to work” so he drops the screw, but then he bends over and picks it up. He puts the screw in his pocket. Grew walks over into the…

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INSIDE BATHROOM- Morning

… bathroom and looks all around the place. He walks over to the sink and looks under the cabinet and sees nothing. He turns around and walks over to a… toolbox in the bathroom?

GregWhat the fu**?

Greg walks over to the toolbox and tries to open it… but it’s locked.

GregDa** it!

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GIRL’S ROOM- Morning

She heard Greg, she walks over to the wall and hits the door.

GirlDo you need some help in there?

Greg (voice)No.

GirlOk.

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Greg pulls the screwdriver out of his pocket and starts to pick at the lock to the toolbox. He keeps turning and twisting at the lock, but nothing is happening. Greg stops and rests his arm for a moment. He takes a deep breath and looks around the room, and then he looks over at the door to make sure nobody is coming in. He turns his head again and starts picking at the toolbox lock. Greg is getting frustrated after about thirty seconds of it… he thinks he can’t do it but, the bar falls down and Greg looks over at the toolbox.

Greg (whisper, to himself)

Yes.

Greg puts the screw back in his pocket and opens the tool box. He looks and sees, a hammer, a screwdriver, a hacksaw, a stapler, and a air hammer.

Greg (to himself)Ooook. Now… lets get the---

Greg reaches in and grabs the screwdriver. He shuts the tool box and takes the lock and just sets it beside the tool box.

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KITCHEN- Morning

Jim is looking up at the ceiling. He can hear music playing, some strange voodoo music. Jim mumbles something to himself. Then he walks over to a door, he opens the door and… A HUGE DOG jumps on him. Jim screams and starts to fight the dog, it’s a big black and white wolf-type dog. It bites sit arm, and then his finger, Jim kicks the dog off of him and turns around and runs into the living room. Jim jumps over the couch, the dog jumps over the couch. The dog jumps on him and starts trying to bite him in the stomach. Jim is screaming. Jim turns around and lies on his stomach and tries to crawl for the door. The dog bites his neck, not hard, just bit some skin off. Jim turns around and kicks the dog off. Jim gets up, but then he slips---

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GIRL’S ROOM- Morning

The girl turns her head and listens to the ruckus downstairs. She walks over to the door and…

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… out into the hall and walks over to the…

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… landing and walks down the stairs and…

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… turns the corner and steps into the living room and---

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The dog is still attacking Jim. Him has a bloody arm, a bloody leg, and a bloody back. Jim grabs the dog’s hair and throws it off of him. He gets up and is three feet from the closet. He jumps to the closet and opens the door and runs inside. CLAWS go through the door. Jim looks at them and… THE CLOSET DOOR OPENS.

GirlYou ruined my door! You broke my door! How could you.

The girl grabs Jim by the hair and aims a dart gun at his neck.

Jim

What will you do, put me to sleep?

GirlYou think I’m this nice girl you can mess around with? Well I’m not. I’m a mean girl and I’ve killed many people. People used to call me “The devil’s daughter” at my old school. And… if you fight me, I’ll kill you slower. The more you mess… the more you get. I’ll kill you in two seconds. So, you want

to know what’s in this gun? Just a little something I made.

JimWhat’s in---

GirlI’m getting to that, Drano.

JimYou are going to shoot me with a dart of Drano?

GirlIf you don’t start moving… move!

JimOk. JESUS!

Jim starts walking toward the kitchen. Jim starts to look around for a window he could jump out of. But all of the windows have jail bars on them.

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BASEMENT DOOR- Morning

In the blackness, a door opens and the girl pushes Jim down the stairs.

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BASEMENT FLOOR- Morning

Jim tumbles down the stairs and falls on the floor. Jim gets up and runs back up the stairs… but the girl shuts the door and locks it. A light turns on down in the basement. It’s a dim light, Jim looks around, nothing.

JimHoly sh**.

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GREG’S BEDROOM- Morning

Greg is listening through the door. He has his ear pressed up against the door. He slowly moves his head away from the door. Greg pulls out the screw driver and turns to the hinges on the door and starts slowly unscrewing the hinges.

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BASEMENT- Morning

Jim is looking into the dim light over in the corner of the basement. Jim slowly walks toward the light. He walks and…

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DARK CORNER IN THE BASEMENT

Something is waiting for Jim in the corner of the basement. It starts to…

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Jim hears a growling noise.

JimOh my god.

Jim slowly backs away as…

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The vision of the thing in the corner runs out at Jim.

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Jim sees a big white dog running for him. Jim turns around and looks around, he sees a file cabinet. Jim runs over to the cabinet and leaps on top of it.

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The dog smashes into the cabinet with it’s head.

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Jim almost looses his balance. But Jim manages to get up on top and hold his balance.

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The dog growls at Jim and then lies down and makes a bed right in front of the cabinet.

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Jim looks down at the dog and then takes a deep breath and rolls his eyes.

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LIVING ROOM- Morning

The crazy girl is walking into the living room. She walks over to a dresser and takes something out of there.

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GREG’S BEDROOM- Morning

Greg is on the last hinge. Greg twists and turns at the screw… and, the screw is stripped.

GregOh, god… please don’t. Not now. IT’S THE LAST ONE!!

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The girl hears him. She turns her head and looks up the stairs… she starts to walk toward the stairs.

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Greg hears footsteps. Greg’s eyes open far and Greg turns around and picks up screw # 1 and starts screwing it into the hinge.

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The girl is half way up the stairs. She turns the corner and

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Greg is on screw #4… in the middle hinge.

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The girl walks down the hall and

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Greg is on hinge # 5

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The girl is still walking in the hall. She is two rooms from Greg’s room.

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Greg is on the last screw. He puts it in the screw hole and

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She is one door away

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Greg drops the screw and it rolls over to the heater and down it.

GregSh**! Sh**! Sh**!

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The girl walks up to the door and…

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Greg runs over to the heater and looks down and sees it is about one foot down.

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The girl pulls out the key---

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Greg runs into the bathroom

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The girl drops the key.

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Greg runs out of the bathroom with a screw.

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The girl stands up and puts the key in the key hole.

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Greg got the last screw in. Greg shoves the screwdriver into his pocket and runs over to the bed.

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The girl stops for a minute… barking from the dog is heard. She smiles and---

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Greg looks into the bathroom and sees the toolbox open. He looks at the door as---

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The girl opens the door and---

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The girl walks in. Greg walks over to the bathroom as The girl pulls out a dart gun. Greg is walking backwards.

GregHi.

GirlHi.

GregIf you don’t mind… I have to go to the bathroom quick. I’ll be---

GirlThat’s why I came in here.

Greg

You have to use the bathroom?

GirlNo, silly. I have a toolbox in there… I was fixing a pipe. I’ll just go in and get it. Greg turns his head

and looks at the toolbox and sees that there are tools and nails everywhere.The girl walks toward the bathroom and…

GregYou know what, I’ll get it for you. Right after I go to the bathroom.

GirlOk.

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BATHROOM- Morning

Greg walks in and slams the door shut and locks it. Greg runs over to the toolbox and starts throwing the nails in it.

Girl (voice)You are probably really mad at me for doing this to you.

GregWhy am I mad?

GirlWell…

GregI know!

Greg stops putting the nails in.

GregWhy won’t you let us go?

Girl (voice)Because you’ll tell. And Do I look that stupid?

GregWell…

GirlShut up.

GregSo, what’s on the menu for today.

GirlI was thinking of cooking you two---

Greg starts putting the hammers and nails back in.

Greg

Nothing to make us sleep? Right?

GirlNope, not today.

GregWhat’s in the gun?

GirlDrano.

GregDrano?

The girl laughs.

GirlYeah.

GregYou must be really messed up.

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Greg opens the bathroom door. He hands her the toolbox. The toolbox is to big. She tries to get it, but… she drops the gun! Greg looks down and looks back at the girl, the girl is mad and with her eyes wide open. Greg turns around and runs out the door, the girl whistles.

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STAIRS- Morning

Greg is running down the stairs. He hears the whistle echo of the girl. Greg stops and looks up the stairs…a big white wolf/dog stops at the top of the stairs.

GregI can’t believe this.

Greg turns around and runs down the stairs. The dog chases him.

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LIVING ROOM- morning

Greg runs into the living room. So does the dog. The dog jumps on Greg. Greg turns around and pushes the dog off. The dog rolls off him. Greg stands up and runs for the front door. He twists and turns the doorknob… but the door will not open. Greg turns around and the dog leaps at him. Greg moves and the dog jumps into the door.

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KITCHEN- Morning

Greg runs into the kitchen. Greg runs over to the kitchen window and picks up a chair and throws it at the window. The window breaks… but there are bars on the outside. Greg turns his head and sees the

dog jump at him. The dog tackles him. Greg is wrestling the dog. They fight for more than thirty seconds. FINALLY… Greg manages to get up. Greg turns around and opens the basement door… he looks down and sees the same type of dog lying on the floor. Greg looks at Jim, on top of the cabinet. Greg leaves the door open for Jim. Greg turns around and sees the dog jumping for him, again. Greg kicks the dog while it’s in the air. The dog falls. Greg turns around and grabs a kitchen knife and steps over the dog… he raises the knife and…

A voice from behind him starts

Girl (voice)If you touch my dog I’ll blow your fu**ing head off!

Greg raises his hands and puts them on his head.

GregOk, just don’t shoot!

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BASEMENT- morning

Jim is on the counter. He is looking up at the basement door. It was left wide open. He is waiting for the girl to come and close it. But all he hears are footsteps walking up the stairs. Jim looks around the room to find a way out without waking the dog. He looks up at the door. Jim turns his head and looks down at the dog, the dog is sleeping. Greg lifts his right foot and brings it over the cabinet. He looks down at the dog to see if it woke up yet. The dog is sleeping like a baby. Jim raises his left foot and brings it over the cabinet. He has both of his feet over the cabinet. He slowly brings himself down. But his hands are sweaty. He slips off of the counter and lands on his back. Jim quickly gets up and runs to the top of the stairs. He reaches the front door and… It slams shut.

Girl (Voice)You actually thought I thought the door was shut?

JimDa** you!

Girl (Voice)We’ve all been there.

The girl walks out of the kitchen.

Jim looks down the stairs. The dog is still sleeping. Jim slowly walks down the stairs. He reaches the bottom step and looks around. Jim looks into the basement. The basement must have been at least one mile long. Jim starts walking down through the basement.

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BATHROOM- Morning

The girl kicks Greg onto the toilet. Greg looks up as she walks toward him. She sits on his lap.

GregWhat do you want you crazy bit**?!

Girl

I just want to see you suffer.

GregWhat is your name!?

GirlWhy the hell would I tell you that?

GregWell… we WERE on a date and I just want to know who the crazy bit** is that I’m dating.

GirlIf I hear that out of your mouth again, I’m going to slit your throat.

GregGo ahead!

GirlWhy are you suck a Dic*?.

GregYou are acting like I’m the bad guy! You are the one who kidnapped me! You shot me I don’t know

how many times, you make your dog---

GirlGreg, shut up!

GregI don’t even know why I came.

GirlSpeaking of that, Do you know why you’re here?

GregWhat did you do now you cra---

GirlThat’s what I thought, now. Have you ever heard of voodoo? Good, now you know why you’re here. You boys all think I was only here for a few days, don’t you? Well… I’ve been spying on all of you

guys for quite a while. See, I move from district to district and try to find a perv to torture.

GregSo you HAVE been spying on me.

GirlYou aren’t any different! I’ve seen you, days after days you will just stare at me like I’m a dog or

something. Well… you picked on the wrong girl to mess with. I’ll kill you, and I’ll do it slow, I like to see boys suffer… It’s so beautiful.

GregBut, why did you invite me over?

GirlWell… I am a master in the practice of voodoo. And---

GregVoodoo!?

GirlYeah, you have a problem with my religion?

GregUh, so anyway… about this voodoo.

GirlI used the voodoo on you. I got you to like me. I wanted you to come. And soon… I’ll have most of

the boys.

GregWait a fu**ing second! Are you involved in the Purchase Line massacre?

GirlMaybe.

GregBut all of those poor elementary kids. When was that?

GirlI think back in 2001.

GregWhy would you do that to little kids?!

GirlIt was so fun and the children were so helpless. You should have been there and watched them scream

like lambs. They were running all through the school. I wouldn’t let them out. I got a chance to capture some of them. And I studied them, and I made a voodoo doll of them. And I let them run and

hide. But it was funny. I love the little shrill of the little kids. It’s just really funny. Anyway, I used the voodoo on them. I just didn’t use dolls. I used my voodoo hand book. I used it to bring children to me

so I could make dolls of them. You should of heard this one little girl, she was all (little kid voice) “Why are you doing this to me?” (kid voice) You know… it’s like in the movies. (mocking) “Please don’t do that to me.” “Why are you doing this?” (End Mocking) And anyway, about the girl, I used the voodoo and stepped on her doll. The funniest thing was… that she screamed and screamed, and she was crying blood. That was so cool. She was crying and bleeding out of the eyes. I didn’t even

touch the kids. So, I’m not a bad guy. And here’s were the action took place… when the cops came. They threw up when they saw all of those brats mangled. They looked at me. I had a chance to say my spell and turn the guards on themselves. They were shooting, guts and brains were flying everywhere.

It was so beautiful. Anyway… It would have been better if I video taped the whole thing.

Greg is just staring at the crazy girl. A tear starts in Greg’s eyes. But he doesn’t cry. He is just shocked at what he heard. And… The girl aims the gun of Drano at Greg’s neck.

GirlI’m not going to kill YOU though. For some reason… I like you better than all of the others.

The girl gets up and walks out of the bathroom door. She slams the door shut. Greg just sits there and looks at the floor… still shocked at what he just heard.

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LONG TUNNEL IN BASEMENT- Noon

Jim is slowly walking in the tunnel. It is starting to get dark. Jim starts to turn around. He turns around and looks on an old dresser, and there is a flash light.

JimThank you god.

Jim walks over to the flash light and grabs it. He turns it on. It’s about as bright as a regular light. Jim starts walking down the Tunnel.

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BATHROOM- Morning

Greg is still sitting there. Greg looks up at the door. IT’S WOODEN! Greg sighs and runs over to the door. He pulls out a screw and starts picking at the door, chipping the door.

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Jim is still walking down the tunnel. Jim looks around… it is nothing but a narrow tunnel, no doors, no old furniture. Nothing, just a long tunnel.

JimWhat’s this?

Jim keeps walking.

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Greg is picking at the door. He is almost to the point where he can turn the lock and get. It is all metal.

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Jim is still walking down the tunnel. He hears a fast clicking noise. He turns around and points his flash light in the direction where he came… A HUGE DOG is running down the cave. Greg’s eyes widen and his mouth drops. He turns around and starts running. He is running.

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The dog is behind him!

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Jim keeps running. Jim trips. But he quickly gets up and starts running.

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BATHROOM- noon

Greg got to the lock. The screw is dull. Greg puts the screw in his pocket and starts trying to turn the lock.

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BASEMENT CAVE- noon

Jim is running. Jim looks in front of him and sees a light at the end of the tunnel. Jim jumps over a hole and runs toward the light. The dog is right behind him.

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Greg twists and turns and… The door unlocks. Greg looks around the room. Then he stands up and opens the door.

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BASEMENT- Noon

Jim is fifty feet from the light. The dog is gaining on him. The dog is only about a foot away. Him runs and… he trips on a hole. He turns around and the dog jumps on him and starts biting him on the neck and elbow. Jim screams. Jim turns around and sees the light. He turns around and kicks the dog into the wall. Jim walks over to the dog… but the dog gets up to quickly. Jim turns around and runs for the Metal door with the light on the other side.

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HALLWAY- noon

Greg is walking down the middle of the hallway. He is looking around. He sees nobody. He walks to the balcony and looks down, it’s about twenty feet down.

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BASEMENT- noon

Jim runs and leaps inside the room and kicks the door shut. The dog starts scratching at the metal, making a screechy noise.

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TOP OF STAIRS- noon

Greg starts walking down the stairs, then he starts to run. He reaches the bottom step. He looks around for the dog. He sees nothing. He turns around and see the basement door is shut. Greg walks into the kitchen and starts looking around.

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ROOM IN CAVE - noon

Jim looks around the room. It is just a bunch of metal tables, and orange carpet on the floor. Jim stands up and looks around. On all of the tables… there is a corpse lying with a surgical pin in them. They are bleeding.

JimOh my god!

Jim walks around the tables. He looks at them all one by one to see if any of them are alive. He steps up to one of the bodies and it twitches… bit it’s dead. Jim screams and jumps back onto one of the other tables, knocking a body off of the table and landing on his legs.

JimSh**. HELP!

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KITCHEN- noon

Greg is walking through the kitchen. There is nothing. He looks into the living room. He starts to walk to the front door.

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LIVING ROOM- noon

Greg walks into the living room. He just stares at the door. He knows it’s a locked metal door… but he wants to see if it’s unlocked. Greg runs toward the door. Then a body falls out of the closet beside him. A bloody corpse falls right beside Greg. Greg looks down a the corpse and tries not to throw up. Greg keeps walking toward the door. Greg turns the doorknob, it twists! It turns! The door opens!

GregYES! THANK YOU!

Greg opens the door and looks out on the porch. The girl is sitting there with her rock salt gun. She is petting one of her dogs. Greg backs away. He turns around.

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ROOM IN BASEMENT- noon

Jim pushes the body off of him. He gets up and looks around. He looks at a body he recognizes. He runs over to the body… it’s stomach is ripped open. Jim walks up to the guy and… THE GUY OPENS HIS EYES!

JimHoley sh**! Frank?

FrankH…E..L….P.

JimWhat did she do to you?

FrankShe, kil…led my… mom… and… then… my… rest of my… family… and now… me.

JimWhat did she do to you?

Frank closes his eyes and dies. Jim looks around for a blanket… he runs over to a bed sheet and covers Frank with it. Jim looks over at the door to the basement… IT’S OPEN!

JimOh, Great.

Jim gets on his knees. Jim is looking around for the dog. Jim gets on his arms and starts to crawl. He starts to crawl. He crawls for about ten feet and then he looks under the cabinet onto the other side of it and sees two white paws walking around. Jim’s eyes open. Jim looks at his arm and sees it’ bleeding really bad from when the dogs bit him. He looks over at the paws again. Then he starts to crawl.

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The dog is walking on the other side of the counter. The dog is trying to sniff out Jim. The dog crawls around the corner and…

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Jim is on the other side of the counter. Jim looks under the counter and sees the paws walking slowly toward where he just was. Jim looks around. He sees nothing, then he looks in front of him… the door is twenty feet away. Jim looks under the counter and the feet are gone. Jim looks around and sees nothing. Then Jim stands up and starts to run for the door. In back of him on the table, the dog jumps off the table and starts barking and running after him. Jim turns his head as he runs and sees the dog running after him. Jim turns around and starts to scream. Jim looks at the door, he sees a white figure running from the other side of him… the other dog is running down the cave after him. Jim turns around and falls to the ground as the dog jumps over him. Jim gets up and starts running for the other side of the room. He sees a glass door that leads upstairs back to the house. Jim turns his head and sees the two dogs running for him. Jim runs inside the room and slams the door shut. The dog jumps up against the glass and the glass cracks. Jim looks around and sees another door. He runs to it and opens the door and…

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KITCHEN- noon

Jim walks into the other side of the kitchen. Jim looks around for the girl. There is nobody there. Jim slowly shuts the door. He walks to the kitchen and out into---

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LIVING ROOM- noon

The living room. Jim looks in front of him and sees Greg standing by the closet.

JimGreg?

Greg turns his head and sees Jim all bloody and bite marks all over him.

GregJim!

Greg runs over to Jim. Greg stands by him as… The front door opens. Greg grabs Jim and run to the closet.

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The girl shuts the door. She takes out a key and puts it in the lock and locks the door and walks out into the kitchen.

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CLOSET- noon

JimGreg… we need to get that key!

GregI know. But we have to be careful. And we need to find a place to hide.

JimShe’ll still know we got out of our rooms.

GregI’d take her, but she has that da** Drano gun with her all the time.

JimOr the---

The closet door swings open. The girl is standing there with the rock salt gun. She just stands there for a few seconds. And then she walks up to Jim and shoves the Barrel into his stomach and pulls the trigger.

GregNO! You bast**d!

JimSh** sh** sh** sh**!!!

GirlI knew I’d have to do that.

GregFIX HIM! Give him cleaning stuff, he can’t take that pain!

GirlIt is better than me doing voodoo on him. Isn’t that right, Jim.

Jim is rolling around on the ground waiting for the pain to go away. Jim is screaming.

GirlOk, Greg… on the couch.

GregWhat?

GirlON THE COUCH NOW!!!

Greg walks out of the closet and walks over to the couch. The girl turns her head.

Girl

Ok, now you, Jim.

GregJim, You just shot Jim, you Crazy Bi… Girl, he can’t walk you stupid slut!

GirlGreg, shut your mouth before I blow it off. (to Jim) Get up now!

Jim slowly gets up. He falls back down.

GirlI can’t even think about how bad that hurts right now, but I DON’T CARE! GET UP AND WALK

OVER TO THE COUCH!

Jim gets up and leans against the wall. He walks over to the couch. Jim Lies down on the couch.

GirlNow that we’re all here. I’d like to set to you some ground rules.

GregYOU CAN’T DO THIS! What about the cops, I’m sure they’ll be looking for us soon. And how about our parents? They’ll ask everyone in town, go to every house! What will you do then? You can’t keep

us locked up here forever!

GirlWho said I can’t?

JimWhy… did you… kill… Frank… Bonnet?

GregWhat?

JimYeah… in… the… basement… she… has… over… twenty bodies… down… there.

Greg(to the girl)

Frank Bonnet the Football player from our school?

GirlEveryone who talks to me, except the teachers… will get killed.

GregWell then kill me! I don’t want to have to go through this.

JimNothing… even… happened bad… to… you… yet.

GirlYou think, attacked by dogs and just locked up in here with me is bad? This is only the beginning.

Unluckily for Jimmy-Boy if he keeps acting like that, the beginning for you will be the end for him. Jim has already gone through a world of hell.

Jim

That’s… right.

GirlNow, Let me set to you some ground rules. No trying to escape. If I see you out of another room

again, I’ll kill you.

GregYou mean that? Hey Jim, she’s responsible for the massacre at Purchase Line!

JimWhat… are… you… talking about?

GirlAnd that isn’t as bad as what I’m going to do to you!

GregYou are a crazy bit**.

The girl gets an angry look on her face.

GirlTHAT’S IT!!! UP TO THE ROOM!

Greg turns around and starts walking up the stairs.

GirlNo, you know what, better yet… SIT DOWN IN THAT METAL CHAIR IN THE CORNER!

Greg rolls his eyes and walks over to the seat. He sits down.

GirlNow put your arms behind the seat.

GregWhat?

GirlNOW!!!

Greg gives her his arms. She pulls out a guitar string and starts tying his arms not behind the chair, but with one arm through the chair and the other on the outside of the chair. Then she walks in front of him and ties his legs to the chair.

GregJust tell me your name.

GirlWhy do you want to know my name.

GregWell---

GirlYou want to tell on me. I bet you’ll tell if you’ll ever get out. Which I doubt. If you get, you will tell

the cops who I am and where I lived. Ad you might say to them about the murders at PL. Well… that’s why I ain’t going to tell you my name.

Greg rolls his eyes and then shuts them.

FADE OUT

LIBRARY- noon

Three kids are sitting around a table. The are Greg and Jim’s friends.

BrentI wasn’t going to say anything… but I haven’t seen Greg or Jim in five days.

KyleThey DO skip school a lot. But… I’m sure they’re fine.

BrentBut what if they were kidnapped?

LeonThey couldn’t of been kidnapped. Unless they’re stupid enough to go to a stranger’s house.

Brent stands up and starts to walk for the door.

LeonBrent, wait.

Leon pulls out his chair and gets up and runs for the door. Kyle just sits there and starts reading.

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OUTSIDE LIBRARY- noon

Brent walks out of the door. And not far behind, Leon comes out. And after Leon, Kyle comes out.

LeonWhere are you going, Brent?

BrentI’m going to the police.

KyleFor a missing person? We don’t even know if he’s missing yet!

BrentListen, Kyle… I know he’s missing. If he was gone for more than three hours after midnight, his

mother would kill him. And I wander why his mom didn’t even report him yet.

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FRONT DOOR OF HOUSE- noon

The girl opens the door. She walks in with a few bags of food.

GirlGreg, I got a surprise for you.

GregThat’s nice. What are you going to do, take out my liver?

GirlNo, That’s later. I’d like to show you something.

GregWhatever.

The girl steps outside for a few moments. Greg is staring at the door. The girl brings in a lady. Her arms and legs are tied up and her mouth is tapped shut.

GregMOM! MOM! LET HER GO, YOU BIT**!

GirlWhat did I say about that? Just for that, I’m going to teach you a lesson. (To his mom) and you for not

teaching him manners!

The girl pulls a dart gun out of her back and it has Drano in it. She pulls the trigger and shoots it into her back.

GregWhat was that!

GirlDrano.

GregMOM! MOM! FIX HER! HELP HER! I’ll do anything! I’ll… I’ll do anything! Don’t let her die!

His mom closes her eyes and dies. Greg’s eyes open widely.

GirlMaybe that will teach you about what you say to me.

Greg (mumble)You bit**.

FADE OUT

POLICE STATION- noon

Kyle, Brent, and Leon are in the police station.

BrentI don’t know… he’s about five foot four. About one hundred and ten pounds. Ad brown hair.

CopWell, are you sure he isn’t sick?

BrentI’m sure, his mom didn’t even answer the phone. I went over to there house and no one was home.

CopAre they on vacation?

LeonNo. We saw him a few days ago. Nobody in school has seen him.

CopOk. We’ll look out for him.

BrentHe was with that new girl the other day.

CopWhich new girl?

LeonOh yeah. There is this new girl who lives in that mansion. Maybe he is there.

CopI’ll go check it out.

LeonBring him back, his mom was kind of worried.

CopI will.

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LIVING ROOM- noon

There is no one in the room. Greg and Jim are tied to the chair. Greg’s mom is sitting right in front of him, dead.

GregJim.

No answer.

GregJim?

JimW.. what?

GregWe need to get out of here.

JimThat’s what I’ve been thinking.

GregI can’t

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Greg’s arms are tied together with Guitar string. His hands are blue from the circulation not getting to his hands.

Greg (con’t)Get the ---

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Suddenly, Greg hears a car.

GregDo you hear that?

JimW… What?

GregListen. I hear a… A CAR!

JimHELP US!

GregPLEASE HELP!

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COP CAR- night

The cop drives up to the driveway. The cop gets out of the car and looks at the house.

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Greg is trying to untie the string.

Suddenly, A hand grabs his mouth. And he looks up and it’s the girl. She raises a needle and sticks it into his skin.

JimSTOP IT. HELP!

The girl turns her head and shoots a dart into his leg.

JimH.. elp… us.

Jim falls asleep.

There is a knock at the door.

GirlCOME IN!

The door opens and the cop looks at the girl.

CopWhat are you doing?

GirlTake one more step and I pump this into his neck!

CopBe Calm lady.

GirlDon’t (pulls out the rock salt gun) tell me to be calm.

The girl shoots the cop and he flies out the door and rolls down the steps.

GirlWait right here.

GregHELP US!!!

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The cop is crawling for the car. Behind him. The girl shoots him in the thy with a gun. The cop turns around and looks at the words on the dart. “Drano.”

The cop looks up at the girl and pulls out his gun. The girl jumps on the cop and pulls out a pencil and stabs him repeating in the face. The cop dies.

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EDGE OF CLIFF- night

The girl pushes the car off of the cliff. It falls off and explodes on impact. The girl laughs and skips back to the house.

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LIVING ROOM- night

The girl is wearing nothing but some snake type braw and panties, just enough to cover her private parts. She walks over to the stereo and turns it on.

GregWhat are you doing.

JimDude. Shut up. Do you know what Rock salt feels like?

Greg

I’m just ask---

GirlShut up and listen to the song and watch me.

GregWhat else is there to do?

SongI’m not the one who’s so Far away, when I fell the snakebite enter my veins. Never did I want to be

here again, and I don’t remember why I came.

The girl walks over to the stereo and pauses the song.

GirlDid you hear that first part Greg? Well, so far it sound a lot like you. Doesn’t it?

The girl turns up the music. She starts to dance. “Voodoo” by God smack starts to play. The girl starts to dance around the living room. She is doing some type of voodoo dance. With her arms in the air, just before the words, she starts swaying her body back and forth. Like pole dancing. And then the words start.

SongCandles raise my desire

Why I'm so far awayNo more meaning to my life

No more reason to stayFreezing feeling, breathe in - breathe in

I'm coming back again

The girl continues to Dance. She dances over to Greg and sits on his lap and starts putting up her arms trying to seduce him.

JimStop it, stop it.

GregDon’t worry, Jim. It won’t work on me. I don’t even---

GirlShut up and watch.

The girl stands up and continues to dance in a strange voodoo way.

SongI'm not the one who's so far away

When I feel the snake bite into my veinsNever did I wanna be here again

And I don't remember why I came

Then the song starts up again and she starts dancing in a sexy way.

GirlKeep watching.

Greg turns his head to Jim.

JimGreg, she’s trying to do voodoo on us.

GregI know. But we have to fight it. Don’t pay attention to her.

JimIt’s like she’s making me pay attention or something. I can’t take my eyes off her.

GregFight it man.

SongHazing clouds rain on my head

Empty thoughts fill my earsFind my shade by the moon lightWhy my thoughts aren't so clear

Demons dreaming, breathe in - breathe inI’m coming back again.

GregI think the wires are cutting my circulation.

JimThe rock salt is burning.

GregLook around Jim, This is hell.

JimI’m too young to die. I’m only 18. I have a life.

GregWe’ll get out of this.

SongI'm not the one who's so far away

When I feel the snake bite into my veinsNever did I wanna be here again

And I don't remember why I came

GregWe WILL get out of here. And---

Girl (voice)Shut up.

Greg turns his head and watches her. But he isn’t paying attention. He is focusing on a window in the back that isn’t barred shut.

SongVoodoo, voodoo, voodoo, voodoo, voodoo, voodoo.

I'm not the oneWho's so far away

I'm not the oneWho's so far away

I'm not the oneWho's so far away

GirlNow you know what kind of world I live in.

GregListen.

GirlWhat?

GregUmm… I’ve got to go to the bathroom.

GirlReally?

GregYeah.

GirlWell… Ok.

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BATHROOM- Morning

The girl throws him in there and shuts the door.

Girl (voice)I’ll be in, in a while… I’ve got to go get some stuff at the market. They’re selling some voodoo and

witch craft at the store.

GregGood for you. Bye.

Footsteps are heard. The footsteps lead to a opening door. And then the opening door slams shut. Greg runs over to the window and sees the girl get in her jeep and drive down the big driveway. Greg looks around and then runs over to the door. He pulls the screw out of his pocket and starts picking at the lock.

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Jim is sitting there. He is bleeding badly. He is trying to look behind him to see the door. But, he can’t turn his head to far. Jim looks over at the bathroom door.

JimGreg?

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GregWhat?

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JimWhat was up with that dance thing?

Greg (voice)I have no Idea.

JimWe need to get to our voodoo dolls.

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Greg stops picking at the lock.

GregOUR voodoo dolls?

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JimYeah, she has a bunch of them. She might have fifty of them.

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Greg starts picking at the lock again.

GregWe have to find out how to destroy them.

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JimThere was a big book on her dresser. It said something about voodoo. We need do get that book.

Greg (voice)You think?

JimDude, I’m serious. She could use it at any---

Suddenly, Jim screams in pain. Jim turns his head and looks at his shoulder. It’s dislocated. Jim looks up and starts screaming.

Greg (voice)What’s wrong?

JimI tried to lift my arms over the chair, and it hurts so bad!

Greg (voice)Hold on. I’ll be out in a minute.

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Greg is twisting and turning at the locks. And he finally gets it. He opens the door and runs over to Jim.

JimUntie me, quick!

Greg starts trying to untie him. But the wire is to tight.

GregHold on.

Greg runs out into…

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KITCHEN- Morning

… the kitchen and opens a drawer and grabs a pair of scissors. He runs back into the…

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LIVING ROOM

…living room and runs behind Jim and starts cutting at the wire. He cuts the wire and Jim’s hands are free.

GregAre you ok?

JimNo. My shoulder is dis---

Greg punches Jim’s shoulder. Jim screams.

JimWhy did you do that?

GregBecause look.

Jim looks at his shoulder. It’s back in place.

JimThank god.

GregNo, thank me. Now… we need to get out of here. But first, I need some food.

Jim

How can you think about food at a time like this?

GregDo you know how long we’ve gone without food?

JimI don’t know---

GregWell, I’m starving. I need food.

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KITCHEN- Morning

Jim runs over to the fridge and opens it and…A snake jumps out at him. It bites his arm.

JimOuch! Da** it! Oh my god. GREG!

GregSh**. What kind of snake.

JimOuch. I can’t see.

GregHold on, Jim… I’ll come back for you.

Greg runs over to the cabinet and opens it. He looks around and sees a first aid kit. He stops and looks at Jim. Then he realizes something. He remembered what Mr. Vincent said about snake bites.

GregJim.

JimW… What?

GregRemember what Mr. V said?

JimOh yeah!

Jim puts his mouth over his arm and starts sucking the blood from it.

JimHey, I’m getting a little better.

GregGood, Keep doing it.

JimGreg.

GregWhat?

JimI have to show you something.

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ROOM IN BASEMENT- Morning

Jim and Greg walk into the autopsy room and look around. They look at all of the dead bodies.

GregWhat is this woman?

JimA crazy bit**.

GregWe NEED to get out of here.

JimGreg, what’s that?

Greg turns his head and sees something running down the cave.

GregIt’s the dogs!

JimHow many does she have?

Greg walks over to a light switch and sees three dogs running down the cave after them.

GregRUN!

Jim and Greg turn around and run back into the office.

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KITCHEN- Morning

Jim and Greg open the door and slam it shut. Jim runs over to the other basement door and slams it shut.

JimLook, a window!

Greg runs over and looks down. There is a huge pit that leads back into the basement. It is thirty feet in radius.

GregShe’s crazy!

JimWhen did you figure that out?

GregCan you jump about twenty feet?

JimNope.

GregThen We’re screwed.

JimNo, We have to get out. There must be a way out.

GregNo… but we need those dolls.

JimLets get them.

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GIRL’S ROOM- Morning

Greg and Jim open the door and walk inside the room. They look around. Jim walk over to the dresser and grabs the dolls.

JimYou look in the book for a spell thing and I’ll hold the dolls.

Jim puts his doll on the desk. He picks up Greg’s doll and lifts his arm up.

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Greg’s arm goes up into the air.

GregWhat the fu—

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Jim throws the doll in the air and it drops on the floor. Greg falls to the ground.

GregSTOP IT! STOP IT!

JimSorry.

Jim puts the dolls down.

Greg opens to page 34 and… “HOW TO DESTROY VOODOO DOLLS” is on the top.

GregFound it.

JimWhat does it say?

Greg“to destroy a voodoo doll, you must take the clothes off of their body, to stop the person from being

injured. And you must boil the doll immediately.”

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KITCHEN- Noon

Greg drops the shirtless dolls in the boiled water.

JimNow it says some type of stupid voodoo word. I can’t pronounce it.

GregWell, Try!

JimFine! Uh… Hildoonoo. I don’t know.

Greg looks into the boiling pot of water.

GregHildoonoo!

Greg looks down at the pot and watches the water turn green. Greg looks over at the front window and sees the girl’s car coming down the long driveway.

GregSh**! Hurry, put everything away.

JimWhat?

Greg dumps the boiling pot of water into the sink. Greg runs over and throws the boiling pot of water in the cupboard. Jim is just looking around for something.

JimGREG! What’s wrong?

Greg points out the window. Jim turns his head and sees the car driving down the driveway.

JimSh**!

GregHurry, Sit in your seat!

Jim runs into…

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LIVING ROOM- Noon

… the living room. Jim sits in his seat.

GregWait, we can fight her this time. I’ve got an Idea.

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Greg runs over into the closet and looks down at her parents. Greg grabs a piece of wood. He closes the closet door and leans up against the side of the door.

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OUTSIDE- Noon

The girl opens the car door and walks into the backyard.

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JimGreg!

Greg (whisper)Shut up! What?

JimShe went around back.

GregHoly---

Suddenly, the basement door opens. Greg drops the piece of wood and runs as fast as he can into the bathroom. He turns the lock from the outside and shuts the bathroom door.

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The girl walks into the kitchen.

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Jim grabs the guitar wire from the ground and wraps it around his wrists lightly. Now it looks like his hands are tied. The girl walks out of the kitchen and over to Jim.

GirlSo, Have you been a good boy.

There is a Pause

GirlWell… tomorrow, I am starting my massacre.

Jim

What massacre?

GirlLike what I did to the students at PL.

JimNo, you cant!

GirlWatch me.

JimYou Bit**!

Jim lifts his arms and punches her in the mouth. She falls. Jim Runs over to the bathroom door. He unlocks it. Greg comes running out and stops,

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The girl is holding a real shot gun.

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Greg grabs Jim’s Hand and throws him in the bathroom. Greg runs in and shuts the door.

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BATHROOM- Noon

A huge hole appears in the door. The girl shot the gun. It’s a real shot gun!

JimGreg! Common!

Jim opens up an air vent in the ceiling. Jim climbs up into the vent. Greg turns his head and sees A SHOTGUN about twenty feet pointed at him. Greg jumps up and Jim grabs his hand. Greg lifts his feat as the bullets fly all through the bathroom. Greg crawls up into…

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AIRVENT- Noon

… the air vent. Greg starts to crawl down the long isle.

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BATHROOM- Noon

The girl opens the door and runs in. She looks up and starts shooting like a maniac.

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Jim looks behind him and sees bullets getting closer to them.

Jim

Greg, hurry.

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The girl climbs into the Air Vent.

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Jim looks behind him and sees her crawling toward them.

JimGreg, Go!

A gun shot goes off. Jim falls through the air vent and down onto the…

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KITCHEN- Noon

… kitchen floor. Jim screams and looks at his leg. It is shot. Jim looks up and sees a gun pointed at his face. Jim sits up as the gun shot goes off. The gunshot hits the floor and Jim stands up and starts to limp for the basement door.

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The girl shoots at him again.

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A bloody hole appears in Jim’s back. Jim falls to the ground and starts crawling pathetically.

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The girl shoots again.

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Jim looks beside him as a gaping hole appears in the floor. He reaches the door knob and opens the door.

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Greg smashes into the girl. They both tumble down onto

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The kitchen floor. Greg hits the gun out of her hand.

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Jim turns his head and looks at the two fighting on the floor. Jim looks about ten feet in front of him is the gun. Jim crawls and---

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The Girl and Greg are rolling around on the floor. Greg kicks the girl in the stomach. The girl falls back. Greg gets up and---

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Jim is about two feet away from the gun. And he turns his head and hears a hissing noise. He sees the big King Cobra beside him. The cobra strikes at his face, but misses. The cobra---A huge hole appears in the cobra.

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Greg is standing there with the gun. He shot the snake.

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From behind, the girl tackles him. Greg drops the gun and it rolls across the…

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… floor and rolls down the…

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… basement steps and rolls onto…

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… the basement floor.

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Greg turns around and punches the girl in the stomach. The girl grabs Greg’s hair and throws him into the sink.

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Jim is trying to stand up, but it hurts to much. Jim starts to crawl over to the two.

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Greg kicks the girl in the shins.

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Jim continues to crawl.

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The girl Falls. She gets up.

CUT TOJim grabs the girl.

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The girl grabs Jim and picks him up. She throws him onto the table.

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Greg jumps on her. She turns around and kicks him in the groin.

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Jim falls to the ground.

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The girl runs over to Greg and drop kicks him in the chest.

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Greg falls. Greg turns around to get up, but The girl punches him in the back.

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FRONT DOOR- Noon

There is a pause at the door, and then the doorbell rings.

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The girl and Greg stop what they’re doing. The two look at the door. Greg gets up and runs for the door. He is running.

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Jim is lying there in the kitchen floor.

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Greg reaches the doorknob and… He stops in his tracks and turns around and pulls a dart out of his back. Greg turns his head and looks at the girl. She shot him with some sleeping fluid. Greg drops to the ground.

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Jim is just staring at the front door. Jim starts to look around the kitchen. He sees a closet that is open. He starts to crawl for it and… Another dart goes in his kneecap. Jim looks down at it and screams.

JimYou bit**.

Jim faints.

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The girl lifts up Greg. She pulls him into a little room. She tosses him on the bed and then shuts the door. She walks over to the door and pulls out her skeleton key to the house. She twists the lock and opens the door. Behind her back is a 9mm.

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OUTSIDE ON PORCH- Afternoon

LeonHigh. My friends are here and we were just wondering if Greg was here.

BrentHe’s been missing for a few days.

GirlNo, I heard he was missing.

LeonCan we come in quick… it’s cold outside.

GirlSure.

The girl steps aside and lets them walk in. The girl looks down at the piece of wood. She leans down and picks it up. She walks toward Leon. He turns around and sees her run at him with the block of wood. Leon is about to scream… but she whacks the block across his head to fast. Leon falls to the ground and dies. Brent just looks at the body of Leon beside him. He looks at the girl and kneels down.

BrentPlease don’t hurt me. I’ll do whatever you want!

GirlWho else is here!?

BrentNo one, my other friend wouldn’t come!

GirlGood.

The girl pulls out the 9mm and shoots his stomach. Brent falls to the ground. He is alive, but barley. The girl lifts him up. She sets him on the couch. She walks away for a moment. Brent is just looking around. Brent turns his head and sees she’s back with an axe.

BrentWhat are you going to do with that.

GirlWatch.

The girl drops two bucks below his knees. She picks up the axe and swings at his legs. His foot from his ankle down falls off into a bucket. The reflexes cause Brent to jump. Brent Screams. He is screaming in a painful way. He won’t stop. The girl cuts off his right ankle and it falls into the bucket. Brent I still screaming. Now he starts to faint.

FADE OUT

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NEXT MORNING

Greg wakes up. He is on a chair, he is tied down so tight. Greg is looking around. He sees Jim in another room. The door is open. And right beside him is the body of Brent.

GregOh my god.

The girl walks in from the kitchen. She throws a metal ball thing at Greg. It hits Greg in the stomach. The wind is knocked out of Greg.

GirlNow, I am going to keep you in the room beside Jims. I’m going to school.

GregDon’t use the voodoo!!

GirlI will. And I saw what you did to your doll. And I was pissed at first. But why would I use it on you?

GregWhat are you going to do to the others?

GirlMy dogs don’t eat dog food. I think It’s time they’ve been fed.

GregDon’t!

The girl slides Greg into the room Jim’s in. She takes Jim out of the room. She sets him in the middle of the floor. In the chair.

GirlYou won’t be the first. Your friend is cut up pretty badly. They’ll get him first.

JimNo. DON’T!

GirlOh, I’ll be late. See yeah.

The girl runs to the kitchen and opens the basement door. Then she walks out into the living room to the front door and outside and into her jeep and off to school.Jim is sitting there in the middle of the floor. He can hear the dogs barking and running in the cave below him. Jim is trying to untie the barbwire that he is tied up in.

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Greg is trying to untie the rope he is tied up in. But it is triple knotted. He can’t untie it. He is looking around the little room. But there is nothing. Greg turns his head and looks down on the floor and sees a little candle.

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Jim and Brent can hear the dogs getting closer. Jim tips the chair backwards and the barbwire sticks into his skin. Jim screams in pain.

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Greg tips his chair backward. It hurts him, but he doesn’t scream. He looks right beside him about three inches and sees the candle. He slides over to the candle. The candle falls over and starts burning the covers.

GregSh**.

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Jim is trying to untie the barbwire. But he can’t.

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Greg slides over and lets the burning bed burn the rope. The rope burns and Greg’s hands are free.

GregYES!

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Jim can’t untie any more. His hands are weak. He has too many rusty barbwire spikes in him.

JimHELP!

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Greg puts out the fire. He can hear Jim calling for him. Greg kicks open the wooden door and sees Jim. Greg runs over to Jim and tips his chair up and looks at what he’s tied to.

JimHurry! They’re coming!

Greg unties the barbwire. But the spikes are still in Jim’s skin.

GregCommon!

Jim gets up and they run up the stairs.

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BASEMENT DOOR- Morning

The dogs come running into the kitchen like insects. They run over to Brent and start biting at his wounds. They are biting him really hard. But Brent is already dead. So he can’t feel a thing.

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Greg and Jim are running through the hallway upstairs. Jim stops and falls down quickly to take a rest.

GregHurry, Get up, those things are coming!

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The dogs heard what Greg just said. They start running up the stairs.

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Jim gets up and him and Greg start running. Greg falls down. He gets up and turns his head and sees the three dogs running up the stairs.

JimCommon, Greg!

Greg starts running. They get to the first room, It’s the bathroom. They run in there and shut the door.

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BATHROOM- Morning

Jim looks up and sees the air vent. Jim steps on the toilet and opens the door to the air vent. Greg helps Jim up. Then Greg jumps on the toilet.

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HALLWAY- Morning

The dogs are scratching at the door. One of the three dogs turn around and go down to the end of the hallway and starts running for the door. They run and Jump against the door and the door smashes into pieces and the dogs come running in the bathroom.

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AIR VENT- Morning

Jim and Greg are crawling away from the sounds of the dogs.

JimHow are we going to get out?

GregWe’re not leaving.

JimWhy? I don’t know about you, but I’m getting the fu** out of here.

GregWe have to stop her. If we don’t, not only will we be in here forever… but she’ll continue from school

to school killing all of those people.

JimWell… we should get out of here and go stop her there!

GregIt’s too late, I bet she has already started.

JimWell then lets go stop her!

GregNo. To tell you the truth, It’s probably better here than it is there.

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SCHOOL HALLWAY- Morning

The girl is walking down the hallway. She walks up to a locker and turns the combination and opens the locker. She reaches into her book bag and grabs a spell book. She opens it to page 54 D She looks inside the book and starts to say words.

GirlBoo Shoo ma li kie. Biship ma sloup me ke lo vu ka hil

The girl starts to walk down the hall, repeating the chant.

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ROOM 23- Morning

The girl walks in the middle of class on Mr. Vincent.

Mr. VincentExcuse me, woman… what are you doing here?

GirlI managed to make you something.

The girl drops her book bag and unzips it and starts rummaging around in the book bag.

CLOSE UP

ON MR. VINCENT’S FACE. He is annoyed that she is interrupting the class. But he doesn’t say anything.

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The girl pulls out a doll that looks exactly like Mr. Vincent.

Mr. VincentThat’s really creative. Is it for me?

GirlNo, I just wanted to show you what it does.

The girl twists his leg all the way around on the doll.

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The class is frightened by Mr. Vincent’s scream.

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Mr. Vincent’s leg is twisted the whole way around and is hanging on by a thread of skin. Mr. Vincent is screaming louder than anything. Mr. Vincent drops to the floor and starts crawling for the door.

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The girl turns around and…

GirlVish ma dol ko.

And after she says that, a huge flame of fire drops from all of the lights. They start burning all of the people in the class room. The girl stands there and watches the people’s skin turn black.

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Mr. Vincent Reaches the door knob and…

GirlKill da see know be know

… Mr. Vincent explodes and body parts fly all over the room.

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AIR VENT- Morning

Greg and Jim are at the house still crawling through the air vent.

JimHey, What’s that?

Greg looks back and hears the clicking of claws on metal. Greg sighs and…

GregI hope it’s not what I think it is.

… one of the girl’s dogs is running through the air vent after them.

JimGO!

The dog stops and sees the two. It starts to bark. Greg looks back and sees it start running toward them. Jim keeps hitting Greg.

JimCrawl Faster.

GregGet in front of me.

Jim crawls over Greg. Greg turns around and sees the dog running for them. Greg lets the dog get in front of him. The dog leaps to attack and… Greg kicks the dog. Greg pulls out some barbwire from Jim’s “rope” and jumps on the dog and ties it around the dog’s neck. Then Greg starts to pull the dog toward him. The dog starts to cry. Greg stops and stomps on the air vent and now there is a hole leading to the living room. Greg pulls the dog over the whole and Greg ties it to a nail and kicks the dog off the air vent. The dog’s hair and skin start to get lifted up. The dog cries and then it stops.

GregJust go Jim. There are two more dogs!

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ROOM 304- Morning

The girl kicks open the door.

GirlHillo vo shall.

And in the room, electricity comes out of the plugs and start shocking all of the teens to a crisp. The girl walks out into the hallway.

GirlDu balle.

The fire alarm rings. All of the kids from the remaining room start walking out to go to there next class.

GirlHello people. Welcome to hell!

She opens her arms and all of the doors slam shut and the windows won’t open. One kid starts running to go to another class room. But a door opens up, smashing him into a pancake into the wall.

KidYou are a crazy---

The girl pulls out a doll, it looks just like that kid. She turns the dolls neck around the whole way and the kid’s neck twists and falls off. Then the girl laughs and walks down the hall.

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AIR VENT- Morning

Jim opens the door to the air vent and they drop down into a room upstairs. Jim falls to the floor, in pain.

GregJim, get up. There is still dogs after us.

JimYou can go. Just get out and get help.

GregNo, we have to stop her.

JimYou can go to the police and get help just as fast!

Suddenly… the barking of the two angry dogs start getting closer. Greg turns his head and sees that the door to the room is open. Greg runs up to the door and… A dog leaps on top of him.

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Jim’s eyes widen in terror. Jim turns around to go into the bathroom in the room. He gets up slowly.

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Greg kicks the dog out into the hallway and then slams the door shut.

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HALWAY- Morning

GirlHill ba shu ga vu.

And when the girl says that, all of the younger kids start dropping onto the floor. She turns around and sees a teacher running for her. But the girl…

GirlFri Ka loo

And when she says that, the teacher’s legs fall off.

The girl turns around and starts saying more crazy stuff.

Short kidWhy are you doing this?

The girl grabs his shirt and throws him into the other class room. She walks in.

GirlNo sklu ji vo u

And when she says that, the kid falls back and sits in a chair.

Short kidAre you magic?

GirlYep.

Short KidWhat kind?

The girl kicks him with her high heels.

Short kid

What do you want!?

The girl pulls out a weird shaped knife and stabs him in the face.

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OUTSIDE SCHOOL- Morning

The front doors open by them selves and the girl walks out. Then the doors shut behind her.

GirlBo, ma shaliie.

And when she says that, behind her, all of the windows turn green. And all of the screaming of the people stopped.

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ROOM- Noon

Greg turns his head and sees Jim lying on the floor. Greg gets up and walks over to Jim. Jim turns his head and sees that Greg is all right.

JimWe have to stop those dogs if you are going to take care of that girl yourself.

GregI know, Jim.

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HALLWAY- Noon

Greg opens the door. And he is holding the screw in his hand. It hurts for him to hold it because of his circulation was cut. But he manages to hold it. Greg turns his head and sees the dog running after him. Greg gets in the position and waits. The dog jumps at Greg. Greg sticks out the screw and the dog jumps into it. The dog falls and dies. Greg looks down and sees that the dog’s dead. But just to be sure, he kicks the dog. And then he stabs the dog in the stomach three more times. Greg stands up and looks around for the other dog. He starts to walk down the hall.Greg turns his head and hears barking. He looks down the dark hallway and sees nothing. So he keeps going straight. Greg opens the door to the Crazy girl’s room and… the dog jumps out at him. Greg lets go of the screw. The dog starts to bite Greg.

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Jim is limping through the hallway. Jim turns on the hall way light and sees the dog and Greg wrestling. Jim looks behind Greg and sees the screw. Jim limps over to the screw and picks it up. Jim turns around and jumps on the dog and stabs it in the back three times.

JimI hate that dog.

GregLets go.

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GIRL’S JEEP- Noon

The girl is pulling in the driveway.

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Greg reaches the bottom of the stairs.

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The girl turns off the jeep and takes the keys out.

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Jim is coming down the stairs.

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The girl opens the door to the jeep.

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Greg runs into the kitchen.

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The girl is getting out of the jeep.

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Jim walks over to the front door and grabs the piece of wood.

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The girl is twenty feet from the house.

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Greg looks out the window and sees the girl walking toward the house.

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The girl is ten feet from the house.

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Greg grabs the big butcher knife and runs out---

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The girl is walking up the porch steps.

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Greg opens the closet and gets in the closet and shuts the door.

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The girl is at the front door. She pulls out her keys .

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Jim is leaning against the wall by the door. Jim gets in the position to get ready.

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The girl turns the keys and opens the door.

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Jim hears the door open.

GirlHello, Greg. I’m h---

And a big block of wood hits her in the face.

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The girl hits the floor.

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Greg comes running out of the closet and stabs her in the arm.

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The girl screams. She kicks Greg off of her. She turns around and Jim throws the piece of wood at her face.

Greg stops and looks up the stairs.

GregKeep her busy!!

JimNo problem!

Jim picks up the piece of wood. He raises the wood in his arms and smashes her in the stomach.

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GIRL’S ROOM- Noon

Greg runs in and opens her dresser and finds… The girl’s own voodoo doll.

GregStupid bit**.

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Greg comes running down the stairs. Greg walks over beside Jim.

GirlI’ll kill you two.

The girl’s nose bleeds. The girl is all bloody.

GirlOh, Jim… for you.

The girl pulls out her 9mm and shoots him in the chest.

Jim falls backward and hits his head on the door.

GregDon’t move.

The girl stops and sees the doll she’s holding.

GirlWell… guess what.

The girl reaches into her bag and grabs his voodoo doll.

GirlYou drop it.

GregHow did---

GirlI made hundreds.

The girl twists his legs. Greg falls down. The girl stands up. Greg throws the voodoo doll into a wall. The girl falls. Her whole back is broken. Greg walks over to the girl and grabs the doll from her.

GregI should of never dated you!

GirlYou never were.

Greg pulls out his knife and jumps on her back and stabs her in the leg.

GirlI’ll kill you.

The girl gets up. Greg stabs her in the chest.

The girl falls backward onto the couch. She just looks at him. Greg drops the knife. Greg runs over and picks up the gun. Greg runs over to the front door and checks on Jim.

JimGreg, did we get her?

GregYes, Yes we did.

JimGood. Hey Greg, help me up.

GregYeah, sure.

Greg helps Jim up. Jim squeals in pain. Jim looks around.

JimWell… where is she?

GregRight on the---

Greg looks over at the couch, She’s not there.

GregWait right here.

Greg runs out into…

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KITCHEN- Noon

… the kitchen and sees nothing.

Jim (voice)Greg!!!!!!!!!!

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The girl shoots Jim with a shotgun. Jim falls back and dies.

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Greg turns around and…

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LIVING ROOM- Noon

… runs into the living room and sees that the girl Shot Jim. Greg turns around and the girl jumps on him. Greg kicks the gun out of her hands. Greg picks up the 9mm and shoots her three times in the chest. The girl doesn’t stop, Greg drops the gun and runs out into the kitchen. The girl runs right by him. Greg pulls out a kitchen knife and turns around and… Cuts her in the eye. The girl screams. The girl kicks Greg in the shins, Greg falls down and he grabs onto The girl and they both fall down. Greg starts to crawl with her on him. He grabs her hair and throws her off. Greg gets up and runs out into the living room. He grabs the voodoo doll and picks up the knife he dropped earlier. He raises the

knife and digs the knife into her doll. The girl’s chest opens up and pints of blood start pouring out of her chest. Greg drops the doll and walks over to her. He picks her up by the neck and jams the knife down her throat.

Greg (calm)You bit**.

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Greg walks out of the house and starts walking home.

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Greg is walking by the school. He turns his head and sees blood on the windows. Greg just turns his head and starts walking away.

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DRIVEWAY- Noon

Greg is walking down the girl’s driveway. He walks for a few minutes and…

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BASEMENT- Afternoon

Greg grabs two five gallons of gas from the basement.

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Greg grabs a pack of matches from the kitchen counter.

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Greg starts pouring lines of gas around the house. In the bathroom.

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Upstairs, he is pouring gas around up stairs in all of the rooms.

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In the kitchen

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The autopsy room

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The long cave in the basement.

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All over the front door.

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He dumps the rest of it all over the bloody corpse of the dead girl. Greg looks in her back pocket. Greg pulls the wallet and opens it. She has her driver’s License… On it… her name says “Alicia Wolf”

GregAlicia Wolf... You SUCK!

Greg puts the wallet in his pocket and walks over to Jim’s body He drags it outside on the driveway. He walks In and… Greg strikes the match on a wall. He walks out of the house and drops the gasoline and the whole house lights up in flames. The house, the dogs, the snake, and the girl’s body all burns in hell, where it belongs.

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“END CREDITS”

LIFE IN THE FAST LANE starts to play by THE EAGLES