book cover design
DESCRIPTION
...a re-design of Diop's "African Origin of Civilisation" knelson®TRANSCRIPT
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table of contents
project description / research.....................................................pages 3-6
thumbnails......................................................................................pages 7-10
type studies....................................................................................page 11-12
thumbnail revisions......................................................................page 13
roughs.............................................................................................page 14
digital roughs pt. 1.........................................................................page 15-17
revisions cont'd..............................................................................page 18-21
research pt.2..................................................................................page 22
digital roughs pt.2..........................................................................page 23-25
pre-final revisions...........................................................................page 26-28
Finals.................................................................................................page 29-32
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Project Description
Using design principles of color, unity, Gestalt, space, dominance, hierarchy, and balance , I will re-design a book cover using dominant typography.
Creative Brief
The design will be a full-color, wrap-around book cover of choice including the front and back covers, spine, and both flaps. The design solution will contain a title of a minimum of three words. Visuals will be used to enhance the design, but they will be secondary to the typography, which is the primary focus of this assignment.
Research
The choice of book (below) will be “The African Origin of Civilisation”
by Cheikh Anta Diop :
“In the intense and unrelenting struggle to establish scientifically the African foundations of Egyptian civilization, the late Senegalese scholar Dr. Cheikh Anta Diop remains a most fierce and ardent champion. Dr. Diop (1923-1986) was without a doubt the world's leading Egyptologist and held the position of Director of the Radiocarbon Laboratory at the Fundamental Institute of Black Africa in Dakar, Senegal. In stating the importance of the work, Diop noted emphatically and early on that, "The history of Black Africa will remain suspended in air and cannot be written correctly until African historians dare to connect it with the history of Egypt." ( http://www.cwo.com/~lucumi/diop.html )
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Dr. Diop!s book investigates and deconstructs the emergence of the African
diasporas along the river Nile. It is a volume translation from C.A. Diop!s previous
books , published in French (Nations Ne!gres et Culture & Ante!rioritee! des Civilisations Ne!gres) which profoundly influenced thinking about Africa around
the world. This book was translated from Dr. Diop!s main thesis, that historical,
archeological and anthropological evidence supports the theory that the
civilisation of ancient Egypt, of prior historical records, was actually Negroid in origin.
The author in his endeavour to reconstruct African history has a theory that there
is a basic global division of peoples into two kinds : the Southerners (or black
Africans) and the Aryans (inclusive of Caucasians, Semites, Mongoloids and
American Indians). Each grouping, according to Dr. Diop, has a cultural outlook based on response to sociological climate.
“The African Origin of Civilisation” seeks to dispel myths of the original African
society and attempts to simulate the reality of this civilization via various
illustrations, photographs of wall paintings as well as other arts and crafts of the early Egyptian and the wider African culture.
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For me, it is an interesting read and I thought the cover of such a book, being
relevant to any student interested in African studies, was poorly designed. I feel very compelled to explore options for the improvement this cover.
This book is paperback but using the information of the author and the preface, I
will design appropriate rear & front flaps to suit a hardcover version.
Image References
Since the book present strong arguments via Egyptology the following images
were researched :
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Web Resources
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ancient_Egyptian_religion
http://www.uponreflection.co.uk/hieroglyphics/hieroglyphic_alphabet.htm
Thumbnails
The following thumbnail were prepared based on four themes of expression :
Disclosure
Mystery
Novel
Controversial
Critiques
“I think I understood better what the book was about from your sketches than the original cover! That said, I did have to look up the ankh because I'd forgotten its connection to Egypt... I think the ones that use the Sphinx/Pyramid might be relying too much on the imagery rather than type…”- J.Davis
“…I like your first concept with the ankh. It gives the book a sense of mystery and intrigue, as opposed to a snapshot of well-known Egyptian landscapes…” - K. Rhodes
“…The use of hieroglyphics is a nice correlation between ancient writings and modern typography shown within the title. This form of graphic would also keep the title as a stronger focal point… “ - M. Cole
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Type Studies
Myriad PRO 18pt.
… the African Origin of Civilisation Myriad PRO bold 14pt.
Myth or Reality
Papyrus 18pt.
The African Origin of Civilisation Papyrus 14pt bold
Myth or Reality
Lithos pro 16pt.
the African Origin of civilisation
Trajan 24pt. the African Origin of civilisation
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Type Studies cont’d
Herculanum 24pt.
Myth or Reality
Helvetica 18 pt
Myth or Reality
Helvetica 36 bold pt
The African Origin of Civilisation
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Revisions
…your peers advice what seem to be working are symbols that remind us of that period. Here's an idea, you don't need to put apple in the middle of the page to say it's apple. Try to pull reminiscence of imagery along with typography to form your message. The idea of Egyptian glyphs could possible marry with western typography to form a message... think of the Gestalt Principles when developing your book cover…. http://graphicdesign.spokanefalls.edu/tutorials/process/gestaltprinciples/gestaltprinc.htm
- Professor Henry
The following sketches were based on Gestalt theory :
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Roughs
In an attempt to apply Gestalt theory to the design, the following roughs were generated :
The following roughs digitally represent various sections of the cover :
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back
front flap
front
back flap spine
Cheikh Anta Diop (1923-1986)
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Lithos / Bookmank.nelson | typography studio 1 | project 2| book cover
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Cheikh Anta Diop was a Senegalese
historian,anthropologist,physicist and politicianwho studied the human
race's origins andpre-colonial African
culture.He has been considered
one of the greatestAfrican historians of the
20th century.In 1951, Diop submitted
a Ph.D. thesis at theUniversity of Paris inwhich he argued that
ancient Egypt had been aBlack African culture.
The thesis was rejected.
Over the next nine years,Diop reworked the thesis,
adding stronger evidentiary support. In 1960,
he succeeded in the defenseof his thesis and was
awarded the Ph.D. degree.
“...a great read....”- Jamaica Gleaner,
“..finallly, the truth...” - The Public Defender
Cheikh Anta Diop
edited byMercer Cook
lawrencehill books
DiopCook
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Revisions cont’d
More Comments
…theconceptsin#1and#2havegoodpotential,andthecolorsaregood,althoughtheycouldbericher,especiallyon#2…Iwouldencourageyoutogofurtherwithyourexplorations,inbothtypeandimagechoices.Trytodelvedeeperintothemessageofthebooktoarriveatacompellingdesign….–E.Ehlenbeck
…Ithinkyourideasarestillfairlysoftwhenconsideringyourdesignattemptfortheintendedbook.Atthemoment,theimagerywithinbothideasareelementaryandverystaticagainstthepage.Typographically,thearrangementsofyourbodycopyalongtheflapsaretoobigandtheformatofyourcopyneedstobemassagedfurther…Iamnotsurewhichgestaltyouarereferringto…submitoremailmetwobookcoversthatyouthinkaredonewelltypographicallyandcouldpossiblebeofsomeinspiration…
‐ProfessorHenry
More thumbnails
More research was done (see below) after the professor’s critique, the following thumbnails were generated in effort to fully reflect the objectives of the assignment.
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Revisions (digital roughs)
Another set of roughs (following) were created to elicit the comments below
"...the images and colors still seem a bit flat to me, but I think you're getting somewhere with the very last comp (F). There is starting to be a richer quality to that one. I like the emphasis put on the "t/symbol" in the word reality. I definitely think this version has potential.."- M.Coyle
"...I think is starting to show some strong thoughts. In terms of a typographic approach there are some excitement happening. However, I don't think the entire book should have this treatment but it's a clever approach...perhaps you think simpler and less! This will clean up the design and give it a more refine and uniform composition..."- Professor Henry
"...The third does have some nice potential. These suggestions for adding some value changes to your solid black background are a good idea too. You could create some variation, possibly and hopefully some directional movement throughout your artwork as well..." - A.Phillips
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(Research part 2)
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(1) typographicaldesign via manipulation of k e r n i n g & highlight
(2) typographicaldesign via
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(3) typographicaldesign viablockquote withbold san serif type
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Revisions (pre-final)
After viewing the YouTube video (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JWIoIOegZHE ) adjustments were made to enforce direction and cohesion. The decorative lines to move the viewer objectively into each block of text. The ankh was featured prominently on the front cover to attract the first view that takes the spectator into the decorative line to read the balance of the cover. An ankh was placed on the back flap as well to break up space leading from the decorative line. The ankh was chosen fas part of the motif based on the book's content that featured arguments from an Egyptologists' perspective.
"...this is coming along nicely. I like the cover, it's working well. I would run a test print to make sure that brown on the back flap doesn't get lost on the black of the background..."- A.Brock
See the following results :
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front flap
front
back flap spine
Revision (pre-final)
back
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back front flapfrontback flapspine
Revision cont'd - print layout
Finals
In rendering the final book cover a gradient of black and brown was created to add dimension to the background. The ankh on the back flap was rendered to recede in the background as well to emphasise mystery and contribute to depth. I was indecisive on the retaining the American spelling of "civilization" but decided to use International English instead as part of my proposal of a new design and a re-publishing of this fine history book.
The following documents reflect the final rendering of "The African Origin of Civilisation - Myth or Reality " by Cheikh Anta Diop
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front flap
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panel designs
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panel layout
back front flapfrontback flapspine
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print FINAL
back front flapfrontback flap spine