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Author’s name- Author’s name- Victor (7918033) Sabrina (7918049) Illustrator’s name- Illustrator’s name- Victor (7918033) Sabrina (7918049) The year- The year- The year: 25 th , Dec. 2004 The Lost Precious Sword The Lost Precious Sword

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The Lost Precious Sword. Author’s name- Victor (7918033) Sabrina (7918049) Illustrator’s name- Victor (7918033) Sabrina (7918049) The year- The year: 25 th , Dec. 2004. Timeline. Preparation classify out story into fairy tales. - PowerPoint PPT Presentation

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• Author’s name-Author’s name- Victor (7918033) Sabrina (7918049)• Illustrator’s name- Illustrator’s name- Victor (7918033) Sabrina (7918049)• The year-The year- The year: 25th, Dec. 2004

The Lost Precious SwordThe Lost Precious Sword

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TimelinTimelinee

11-15~11-1911-15~11-19 PreparationPreparation1.1. classify out story into fairy tales.classify out story into fairy tales.2.2. Decide a direction that how to create a story.Decide a direction that how to create a story.3.3. Write a outline our story.Write a outline our story.4.4. Describe the characteristic of the main rolesDescribe the characteristic of the main roles.

11-22~11-2611-22~11-26 IncubationIncubation1. Start to write the plot.1. Start to write the plot.2. Do PowerPoint.2. Do PowerPoint.

11-29~12-311-29~12-3 Illumination Illumination 1.1. To give backings.To give backings.2.2. Write a preface to a story. Ex. Background culture.Write a preface to a story. Ex. Background culture.3.3. To add pictures.To add pictures.

12-6~12-1812-6~12-18 VerificationVerification1.1. Revising the content.Revising the content.2.2. Revising PowerPoint.Revising PowerPoint.3.3. Determine the Determine the

content.content.4.4. Checking the Checking the

PowerPointPowerPoint..

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CharactersCharacters

The teenager’s name is Lance. He is kindhearted

and loves to explore.

One of the villager’s name is Oscar. He is

scared easily and doesn't believe

anyone.

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Characters

The grandmother’s name is Matilda. She lives alone in the mountainside. She has

not laughed for a long time.

The monster’s name is Gaby. It endangers to village. It is so short-tempered and likes to

destroy everything in the world.

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FriendsFriends

They want to help the They want to help the grandmother.grandmother. EnemyEnemy

Her son was eaten by monsterHer son was eaten by monster

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The Lost Precious The Lost Precious SwordSword

There are many wars and pestilences happThere are many wars and pestilences happen in castle where in Europe in the century of en in castle where in Europe in the century of medieval times.….. One day a teenager is walmedieval times.….. One day a teenager is walking on the street and glance at the bulletin bking on the street and glance at the bulletin board which says, “oard which says, “We need the brave man to lWe need the brave man to look for the lost precious sword to rescue our cook for the lost precious sword to rescue our countryountry”. ”.

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Lance stands here and considers how to persLance stands here and considers how to pers

uade his mother to approve this activity. After geuade his mother to approve this activity. After ge

tting his mother’s agreement, he starts to prepartting his mother’s agreement, he starts to prepar

e himself for his trip. e himself for his trip.

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According to the map, he sets out on a daring adventure According to the map, he sets out on a daring adventure

by himself. First day, he comes into the village that every by himself. First day, he comes into the village that every

villager can’t believe everyone even his family. When he villager can’t believe everyone even his family. When he

asks someone about how to get the precious sword,asks someone about how to get the precious sword,

everyone avoids meeting him. everyone avoids meeting him.

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Suddenly, he sees the young man with fireSuddenly, he sees the young man with fire

wood on his back and seems very heavy. wood on his back and seems very heavy.

As he passed by him, he hears the young man seAs he passed by him, he hears the young man se

eking for help.eking for help.

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Is anyone can help

me? It’s too heavy to carry by myself.

Hey, guy. Do you need help?

Uh~~! I……

Do you have any

problem?

If you help me, you can not get

any benefit.

Certainly, I never want to get any benefits. I just

want to help you. Really? That’s okay.

After getting along with Lance for few days, he starts to believe him. After getting along with Lance for few days, he starts to believe him. Besides, Oscar also knows that Lance is going to achieve the mission and he is glad to go with him.Besides, Oscar also knows that Lance is going to achieve the mission and he is glad to go with him.

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You intrude into my place

without permission.

I’m sorry I just pass by.

You should’t come here~~ you

should’t come here~~~.

The grandmother turns around and goes home.

Do you think this

grandmother is strange, don’t you?

So do I. Why do we follow her seeking

the truth?

That’s a good idea. Let’s go.

When they follow her track, they find that the grand mother holds the picture.When they follow her track, they find that the grand mother holds the picture.

When grandmother holds the picture in her hand, she cries. When grandmother holds the picture in her hand, she cries. The two mans feel very confused and then ask the grandmother.The two mans feel very confused and then ask the grandmother.

what happened with you?

Please don’t cry!

my son….my son…..my son…..was missing.

why?

Two weeks ago, he hunted in the forest

and never came back. It is said that there is

a monster living in the top of the

mountain. There are so many villagers was

eaten by it.

uh…..

I’m sorry to hear that! Maybe we should kill the

infamous monster.

This matter

should not be

delayed. Let’s

go!

you don’t worry about it, grandmother. We will rescue

your son.

Could you tell me how to find the

monster?

There has a map can give you the right direction and the

sword may help to fight the monster. On the way, you

may get into some troubles in the

future. Be careful!

Thanks! We have to

challenge the new mission.

In this process, they overcome a lot of tough questions. In this process, they overcome a lot of tough questions. For these reasons, they become more courageousFor these reasons, they become more courageous Finally, they find the monster’s dwelling place in the end.Finally, they find the monster’s dwelling place in the end.

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ZZZzzZzz

In this process, they overcome a lot of tough questions. In this process, they overcome a lot of tough questions. For these reasons, they become more courageous.For these reasons, they become more courageous. Finally, they find the monster’s dwelling place in the end. Finally, they find the monster’s dwelling place in the end. The monster is sleeping. “It is a good chance” Lance whisperedThe monster is sleeping. “It is a good chance” Lance whispered..

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Oh YA…

ZZZzzZzz

See! You do the good job.

who is a blasted idiot to bother

my break time?

During the time, they discuss the methods how to kill the monster. During the time, they discuss the methods how to kill the monster. Then Oscar runs behind of the monster and shouts…..Then Oscar runs behind of the monster and shouts…..

Stupid guy, you think you are so strong. I’m not afraid of you at all.

Do you want to try?

Of course….comes on.

In this time the monster attacks Oscar, he forgets there has another man here.In this time the monster attacks Oscar, he forgets there has another man here.Suddenly…. Suddenly…. Lance pulls out his sword to slaughter the monster.Lance pulls out his sword to slaughter the monster.

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A magic thing happened that Lance finds the disappeared villagers in the monster tripe.A magic thing happened that Lance finds the disappeared villagers in the monster tripe.

They are still alive. All the villagers are appreciated to the young men. The two young men They are still alive. All the villagers are appreciated to the young men. The two young men

try to find the grandmother’s son and take him home. try to find the grandmother’s son and take him home.

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Following indication of the map, they walk into the muster’s cave.Following indication of the map, they walk into the muster’s cave.

See, there is a light. What’s

that?

It would be the precious sword that

we’re looking for, why not

taking a look? Ok. Let’s go.

Woo, I got it, but I can’t pull it out. Maybe only the brave man can own it. Do you want to try? certainl

y.

Finally he pulls out the sword and rescues the country. Finally he pulls out the sword and rescues the country. In order to thank for Lance, the king betroth the Princess to him. In order to thank for Lance, the king betroth the Princess to him. Since then they will live happily ever after.Since then they will live happily ever after.

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http://www.lucifer.hoolan.org/swords/castle/castal/newpage1.htm--> This site contains pictures of castle.> This site contains pictures of castle.http://tw.search.yahoo.com/search/images?p=%A5P%B9%D2http://tw.search.yahoo.com/search/images?p=%A5P%B9%D2%B6%C7%BB%A1+%AAZ%BE%B9--> This site contains pictur%B6%C7%BB%A1+%AAZ%BE%B9--> This site contains pictures of sword.es of sword.http://tw.search.yahoo.com/search/images?p=%E5%A5%B6http://tw.search.yahoo.com/search/images?p=%E5%A5%B6%E5%A5%B6&ei=UTF-8&fl=0&b=13--> This site contains pictu%E5%A5%B6&ei=UTF-8&fl=0&b=13--> This site contains pictures of rolesres of roleshttp://www.lucifer.hoolan.org/index.php?go=http://www.luchttp://www.lucifer.hoolan.org/index.php?go=http://www.lucifer.hoolan.org/lotr/06pics/pics02.htm--> This site contains piifer.hoolan.org/lotr/06pics/pics02.htm--> This site contains pictures of cave.ctures of cave.http://ms1.ctjh.tpc.edu.tw/%7Est90971/m3.htm--> This site chttp://ms1.ctjh.tpc.edu.tw/%7Est90971/m3.htm--> This site contains pictures of scenery.ontains pictures of scenery.bunbun.websitehk.com/home/bg.htmbunbun.websitehk.com/home/bg.htm This site contains picThis site contains pictures of backdrop and roles.tures of backdrop and roles.

References:

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Problems

1. We didn't know how to

cut the picture.

2. School’s and home’s office

were different, and it made

us feel puzzled.

Solutions

When editing the story, we started to do the PowerPoint. The first problem was that it was so difficult to cut the pictures. We found it again and again, but we still didn't solve the problem. Finally, we asked our classmate what to do it. Then we got the way to solve it.

I just spent a lot of time to finish it in school.

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InspirationInspiration

When I started to create the story, I tried to reWhen I started to create the story, I tried to recall all fairy tales I read in my childhood. Then I ccall all fairy tales I read in my childhood. Then I combined several characters to create my roles and ombined several characters to create my roles and actions. My partner and I had been discussed manactions. My partner and I had been discussed many times and provided more inspiration to write it.y times and provided more inspiration to write it.

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Tips for create story writingTips for create story writing

1. If you read a lot of stories, you would get more inspiration and know how to write and create a story.

2. You also can use your life experience to rewrite a story.

3. When you haven’t no ideas to continue your writing, you can stop thinking and go out to find inspiration.

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DATE

GATEGORY

11/1 12/1 12/8

12/15

Creativity 2 3 4 4Title page 3 3 4 4Title 3 3 4 4Characters 2 3 4 4Setting 2 3 3 4Action 1 2 3 4Problem/conflict

1 2 3 3

Dialogue 2 3 3 4 Requirements 1 2 3 4

Self- Evaluation Sheet

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