Audience feedback:POSITIVE POINTS

Interesting/good storyline 20

Liked the music 18

Clear storyline/Could understand what it is about

20

Funny voiceover 11

Generally funny (i:e hitting locker) 13

Good lighting 17

NEGATIVE POINTS Could improve acting 17Not enough editing/ just cuts maybe fade ins could be added

8

Annoying voice over 9Bad shot/angles on stair scene 6Some shots are too long 4Music is too loud/speaking cannot always be heard

20