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Controversy Over High-Tech Swim SuitsJayne Glanton

October 16, 2013


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Introduction:

In the beginning of the sport competitive swimming, people didnt wear any kind

of suit when competing. They found that any clothing worn would slow them down. But

as the years went by and people became more conservative with their bodies, they started

wearing dresses and full body suits so that nothing could be seen by anyone. They went

so far as to put weights into the skirts of women so that they wouldnt float up in the

water and reveal anything that wasnt to be seen. When the Olympics started in 1896,

new suits and fabrics that made it easier to swim and didnt hinder the swimmer during

the race (Deborah Durbin). They were trying to replicate the feeling of swimming naked

while keeping the modesty of the swimmers intact. As years went by and technology

evolved they kept coming up with new ways to get fabric to replicate the way that human

skin repels water. After the suit that was created for the 1992 Olympics, Speedo has made

a new suit with new technology for every single Olympics since then (Durbin).

Most recently the swimming community has made huge advances in the

development of high-tech suits or other wise known as competition suits. These suits are

built to smooth over parts of your body that can cause drag and slow you down, cover

large portions of your body and repel water. They come in all sorts of styles, from

covering ankle to wrist or just knee to shoulders. Some people complained that these suits

caused an unfair advantage in the sport.

I have swam competitively for twelve year and have worn six different types of

racing suits, the Fastskin LZR Racer, the LZR Pro, the Fastskin II Pro, the Fastskin, the

Aquablade, and the Nike Performance suit. You may ask why I have so many of these

really expensive suits and the answer is that they wear out easily so you can only wear

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them to one maybe two meets. Usually you get a new race suit every season. I would get

a new one for every short course season ending meet. In my personal experience, I prefer

the Speedo brand suits because they are better fitting and they also have an advantage

over every other company by being the one who gets the most research and money to

make the best suits.

I believe that high tech suits do give somewhat of an advantage to the swimmer

but their main purpose. Just like track shoes with spikes give runners instead of just a

plain running shoe. I believe the high-tech racing suits do need to have restrictions but

they shouldnt be banned for a few tenths of a second difference in time. So my stance is

that they should be allowed to be used because they are there to help the sport of

swimming become more competitive and harder for the champions to be found, which

makes people work harder. Sometimes, mentally the way they make you feel, gives you

that extra confidence boost you need to push you through the race. But most of all, you

wait all season to get it on and they cost several hundred dollars. The sport maybe rapidly

becoming more and more competitive but sometimes things need to be pushed.

Literature Review

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