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Appendix 1
Errors in Misformation
No. Name Regularization Archi
Form
Alternating
form
Total
Of Errors Verb To Be
1. Calvin - 8A 6 - - - 6
2. Nur Fauzi - 8A 2 - 1 1 4
3. Ainaya - 8A 3 - 3 3 9
4. Lukman - 8A - - 1 2 3
5. Prakoso - 8A 1 - 1 1 3
6. Fetrofani - 8A 3 - - 1 4
7. Wahyu - 8A - 2 - 2 4
8. Fauzan - 8A - - 1 - 1
9. M.Mashela - 8A 6 - - 5 11
10. Bangun A.- 8A 4 1 1 4 10
11. Ersyam - 8A
12. Rama - 8A 1 - 1 - 2
13. A.Renata - 8A 4 - - - 4
14. Nanda - 8A 1 - - - 1
15. L.Auefia - 8B 3 - 1 4
16. Abid - 8B 2 - 1 3 6
17. Putri R. - 8B - - 1 1
18. Afrian - 8B 2 - - - 2
19. Fajar - 8B 4 - - 4 8
20. A.Afiyanto - 8B 2 - - 1 3
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21. Riska - 8B 2 - - 1 3
22. Adam - 8B 2 - 3 2 7
23. F.Kusuma - 8B 3 - 1 3 7
24. Rendi - 8B 4 - 3 13 20
25. David Dwi - 8B 3 3 - - 6
26. Imamara - 8B - 3 - 5 8
27. Bela P. - 8B 2 - 1 2 5
28. Lutfiyana - 8B 3 - - 1 4
29. R.Putriana - 8B 5 - - 10 15
30. R.Putriani - 8B 7 - 2 12 21
31. Malita - 8B 3 - - 7 10
32. Ristiyar - 8B 7 - - - 7
33. Bagas - 8B 4 - - 7 11
34. Bagus - 8B 3 1 2 5 11
35. Saddam - 8B 5 2 1 2 10
TOTAL 97 12 23 99 231
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Appendix 2
Errors in Omission
No.
Abs. General Article
Miss-
spelling
Plural/
Singular
Prep-
position
Punc-
tuation
Con-
junction
To
Be Verb Noun Modal
Relat.
Pronoun
Posses.
Pronoun
1. 1 3 3 - - - - - - - - - -
2. - - 1 1 1 3 - - - - - - -
3. - 1 - - 2 1 - - - - - - -
4. - - - - - 2 - - - - - - -
5. - - 2 - - 4 1 - - - - - -
6. - - - - - - - - - - - - -
7. - 5 - - 2 4 2 4 - - - - -
8. - - - - - - - - - - - - -
9. 2 - - - - 2 - - 1 - - - -
10. - 2 - - - - - - - 2 - - -
11.
12. - - 1 - - 1 - - - - - -
13. - - 2 - 2 2 - - 1 - 1 - -
14. - - - - - - - - 1 - - - -
15. - 1 - - 1 6 2 1 2 - - -
16. 1 1 - - 1 4 - - 1 1 - - -
17. - 1 - - - 1 - - 1 1 - - -
18. - - 1 - - 1 - - 1 - - - -
19. 1 1 2 - 1 3 1 - - - - - 1
20. 1 2 - - 6 - - - - - - -
21. - 1 - - 2 - - - - 2 - - -
22. 3 - - - 1 - 1 - 1 - 3 - 1
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23. - 1 - - 4 4 - - 2 - 1 - -
24. - 2 - - 3 3 3 - 3 1 - -
25. - - - - - - - - - - - - -
26. - - - - - - - - - 1 - - -
27. - 2 - - 1 2 - - - - - - -
28. - 2 - - 1 4 - - - - - - -
29. 1 1 2 - 2 5 1 2 - - - 1 -
30. 2 3 - - 1 - 3 - 4 2 - 1 -
31. 1 - - - - - - - 1 - 1 -
32. - - - - - - 1 1 1 3 - - -
33. 1 1 - - - 1 - 1 2 - - - -
34. - - 1 - 1 - - - 2 1 3 - -
35. 1 1 - 2 - 2 - - - - - - -
TOTAL 15 29 17 3 26 61 15 8 19 19 9 3 2
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Appendix 3
Total students made error in Omission.
No. Name Total of errors
in Omission
1. Calvin - 8A 7
2. Nur Fauzi - 8A 6
3. Ainaya - 8A 4
4. Lukman - 8A 2
5. Prakoso - 8A 7
6. Fetrofani - 8A -
7. Wahyu - 8A 17
8. Fauzan - 8A -
9. M.Mashela - 8A 5
10. Bangun Ari - 8A 4
11. Ersyam - 8A
12. Rama - 8A 2
13. A.Renata - 8A 8
14. Nanda - 8A 1
15. L.Auefia - 8B 13
16. Abid - 8B 9
17. Putri Rahma - 8B 4
18. Afrian - 8B 3
19. Fajar - 8B 10
20. A.Afiyanto - 8B 9
21. Riska - 8B 5
22. Adam - 8B 10
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23. F.Kusuma - 8B 12
24. Rendi - 8B 15
25. David Dwi - 8B -
26. Imamara - 8B 1
27. Bela Puspita - 8B 5
28. Lutfiyana - 8B 7
29. R.Putriana - 8B 16
30. R.Putriani - 8B 16
31. Malita - 8B 3
32. Ristiyar - 8B 5
33. Bagas - 8B 6
34. Bagus - 8B 9
35. Saddam - 8B 6
TOTAL 227
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Appendix 4
Table of Addition Errors
No Name Double
Marking
Regu-
larization
Simple Addition Total of
Errors General Punctuation Preposition
1. Calvin - 8A 6 - 6 - - 12
2. Nur Fauzi - 8A - - - - - -
3. Ainaya - 8A 1 - 4 1 - 6
4. Lukman - 8A - - - - 1 1
5. Prakoso - 8A - - 1 - - 1
6. Fetrofani - 8A - - 1 - - 1
7. Wahyu - 8A - 1 1 - - 2
8. Fauzan - 8A - - 2 - - 2
9. M.Mashela - 8A - - 6 - - 6
10. Bangun A.- 8A - 1 2 - - 3
11. Ersyam - 8A
12. Rama - 8A - - 1 - - 1
13. A.Renata - 8A - - 1 - - 1
14. Nanda - 8A 1 - - - - 1
15. L.Auefia - 8B - 1 3 - - 4
16. Abid - 8B 1 - 3 - - 4
17. Putri R. - 8B - - - - - -
18. Afrian - 8B - - 1 - - 1
19. Fajar - 8B - - 2 - - 2
20. A.Afiyanto - 8B - - 2 - - 2
21. Riska - 8B - - - - - -
22. Adam - 8B - - 4 - - 4
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23. F.Kusuma - 8B - - 3 - - 3
24. Rendi - 8B - - 3 - - 3
25. David Dwi - 8B - 1 - - - 1
26. Imamara - 8B - - 5 - - 5
27. Bela P. - 8B - - - - - -
28. Lutfiyana - 8B - - 2 - - 2
29. R.Putriana - 8B - - 5 - - 5
30. R.Putriani - 8B - - 3 - - 3
31. Malita - 8B - - - - - -
32. Ristiyar - 8B - - 1 - - 1
33. Bagas - 8B 1 - - - - 1
34. Bagus - 8B - - 1 - - 1
35. Saddam - 8B - - 5 - - 5
TOTAL 10 4 68 1 1 84
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Appendix 5
Errors in Misordering
No. Name Errors in
Misordering
1. Calvin - 8A 2
2. Nur Fauzi - 8A -
3. Ainaya - 8A 2
4. Lukman - 8A -
5. Prakoso - 8A -
6. Fetrofani - 8A -
7. Wahyu - 8A -
8. Fauzan - 8A -
9. M.Mashela - 8A 4
10. Bangun A.- 8A 4
11. Ersyam - 8A -
12. Rama - 8A -
13. A.Renata - 8A -
14. Nanda - 8A -
15. L.Auefia - 8B 4
16. Abid - 8B -
17. Putri R. - 8B -
18. Afrian - 8B -
19. Fajar - 8B -
20. A.Afiyanto - 8B 1
21. Riska - 8B 5
22. Adam - 8B 3
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23. F.Kusuma - 8B 2
24. Rendi - 8B 2
25. David Dwi - 8B -
26. Imamara - 8B 3
27. Bela P. - 8B -
28. Lutfiyana - 8B 1
29. R.Putriana - 8B 3
30. R.Putriani - 8B 3
31. Malita - 8B 6
32. Ristiyar - 8B 2
33. Bagas - 8B 4
34. Bagus - 8B 2
35. Saddam - 8B 1
TOTAL 54
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Appendix 6
Other Errors
No. Name Capital
Letter Deletion
Miss-
spelling
False
Friend
Total
of
Errors
1. Calvin - 8A 1 1 - - 2
2. Nur Fauzi - 8A 2 - - - 2
3. Ainaya - 8A 3 - - 1 4
4. Lukman - 8A - - 1 1 2
5. Prakoso - 8A 5 - 1 - 6
6. Fetrofani - 8A 1 - - - 1
7. Wahyu - 8A 8 1 - 2 11
8. Fauzan - 8A 2 3 - - 5
9. M.Mashela - 8A - 3 - - 3
10. Bangun A.- 8A - 3 - - 3
11. Ersyam - 8A
12. Rama - 8A 3 - - - 3
13. A.Renata - 8A 1 - - - 1
14. Nanda - 8A 1 - - - 1
15. L.Auefia - 8B 1 1 - 2 4
16. Abid - 8B 1 - - - 1
17. Putri R. - 8B 1 - - - 1
18. Afrian - 8B 8 - - - 8
19. Fajar - 8B 4 - - - 4
20. A.Afiyanto - 8B 1 - - 1 2
21. Riska - 8B 1 - - - 1
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22. Adam - 8B 1 1 - 2 4
23. F.Kusuma - 8B - - - 1 1
24. Rendi - 8B 2 2 - 1 5
25. David Dwi - 8B 9 - - - 9
26. Imamara - 8B - - - - -
27. Bela P. - 8B 1 2 - - 3
28. Lutfiyana - 8B 1 - - - 1
29. R.Putriana - 8B - 2 - 2 4
30. R.Putriani - 8B 1 4 2 2 9
31. Malita - 8B 3 4 - - 7
32. Ristiyar - 8B - - - 2 2
33. Bagas - 8B - 2 - - 2
34. Bagus - 8B 1 2 - - 3
35. Saddam - 8B 4 2 - - 6
TOTAL 67 33 4 17 121
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Appendix 7
Table Source of Errors
No. Name
Source of Errors Total of
Errors Interlingual
Error
Intralingual
Error
1. Calvin - 8A 6 2 8
2. Nur Fauzi - 8A 3 1 4
3. Ainaya - 8A 5 5 10
4. Lukman - 8A 2 1 3
5. Prakoso - 8A 1 2 3
6. Fetrofani - 8A - 4 4
7. Wahyu - 8A 2 4 6
8. Fauzan - 8A 1 2 3
9. M.Mashela - 8A 8 - 8
10. Bangun A.- 8A 10 - 10
11. Ersyam - 8A
12. Rama - 8A - 3 3
13. A.Renata - 8A 2 4 6
14. Nanda - 8A - 3 3
15. L.Auefia - 8B 7 1 8
16. Abid - 8B 6 - 6
17. Putri R. - 8B - 3 3
18. Afrian - 8B - 3 3
19. Fajar - 8B 8 - 8
20. A.Afiyanto - 8B 1 3 4
21. Riska - 8B 4 - 4
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22. Adam - 8B 7 - 7
23. F.Kusuma - 8B 6 - 6
24. Rendi - 8B 10 - 10
25. David Dwi - 8B - 1 1
26. Imamara - 8B 4 2 6
27. Bela P. - 8B 4 - 4
28. Lutfiyana - 8B 3 - 3
29. R.Putriana - 8B 9 3 12
30. R.Putriani - 8B 10 3 12
31. Malita - 8B 8 1 9
32. Ristiyar - 8B 7 - 7
33. Bagas - 8B 8 - 8
34. Bagus - 8B 9 - 9
35. Saddam - 8B 2 8 10
TOTAL 153 59 211
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Appendix 8
“The Results”
Table 4.1
Table of Errors in Surface Strategy Taxonomy
No. Surface Strategy
Taxonomy Component
Total
of Errors
Percentage
(%)
1. Omission 227 38.08%
2. Addition Double Marking 10 1.68%
Regularization 4 0.67%
Simple Addition 70 11.74%
TOTAL 84 14.09%
3. Misformation Regularization 109 18.28%
Archi-form 23 3.86%
Alternating form 99 16.61%
TOTAL 231 38.75%
4. Misordering 54 9.06%
TOTAL 596 100%
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Table 4.2
Table Other of Errors
No. Other
Errors
Total of
Errors
Percentage
(%)
1. Capital Letter 67 55.37%
2. Deletion 33 27.27%
4. Miss-spelling 4 3.30%
5. False Friend 17 14.05%
TOTAL 121 100%
Table 4.3
Table Source of Errors
No. Source of Errors Frequency
of Errors
Percentage
(%)
1. Interlingual
Transfer 153 72.51%
2. Intralingual
Transfer 59 27.96%
TOTAL 211 100%
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No. Name Identification of Errors Errors Classification Reconstruction of Errors
1. Calvin - 8A One day, I was eat a my friend.
I a was eat my friend, happy birthday party 14th.
I and friend _afternoon_ eat together.
I was eat at 08.00 p.m.
after was eat, I and may friend was
tok _ moment
that my friend to take leave to return and I was
accompeany _ to _ house.
Everyone. After that, I the clean the table from dirt.
At last, I and my friend eat gether.
DM
S.A, DM, Misfor: Reg. (verb), Misordering
Omission, Om: artc, Misordering, Misfor : Reg. (verb)
DM, Misfor : Reg. (verb)
CL, DM, Misfor : Reg., S.A , DM,
Om: misspell, Om: artc
Deletion, DM
S.A, Om, Om: art.
S.A, S.A, Misfor : Reg., S.A
Om: misspell, Misfor: Reg., Om:misspell
One day, I ate with my friend. I ate with my
friend in birthday party.
In the afternoon, I and friend ate together. I ate
at 08.00 p.m.
After ate, me and my friend took a moment
and I accompany her/him to the house.
After that, I cleaned the table. And the last, I
and my friend ate together.
Total Errors:
a. Misformation total: 6 Reg. Verb: 6
b. Omission total: 7
General: 1
Article: 3
Misspelling: 3
c. Addition total: 12
Double Marking: 6
Simple Addition: 6
d. Misordering: 2
Others:
a. Capital Letter : 1
b. Deletion: 1
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 6
b. Intralingual: 2
2. Nur Fauzi -
8A
On my last holiday, my family and I went to visit my
grandparents wo lived in solo _
we went from Semarang on 10th September 2014 by
Om: misspell, CL, Om: punc.
On my last holiday, my family and I went to
visit my grandparents who lived in Solo. We
went from Semarang on September 10th, 2014
used car driven by father.
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using a car driven by father. Although _ the travel was
quite far but for me it was an enjoyable trip because
this was my first experience to go to my village using
a car. After spending _
2 day trip _ me finally arrived and my grandparents
house. My grandmother was very happy to know we
were coming.
CL
Om: punc.
Misfor: Reg.(verb), Omission: Prep.
Om: plural, Om: punc., Altern, Archi
Misfor : Reg. (verb)
Although, the travel was quite far but for me it
was an enjoyable trip. Because this was my
first experience to go to my village using a
car. After spent for 2 days trip, I finally
arrived in my grandparent’s house. My
grandmother was very happy to know that we
were come.
Total errors:
a. Misformation total: 4
Reg. Verb: 2
Archi: 1
Altern: 1
b. Omission total: 6
Misspell: 1
Plural/singular: 1
Prep: 1
Punct: 3
Others:
Capital Letter: 2
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 1
b. Intralingual: 3
3. Ainaya - 8A Holiday to Selo
Last holiday, I and my aunt goes to Grandmother
home . In Selo _ Boyolali.
We went left to 06.00 Am. Hour until Grandmother
home. We break for ate.
after _we went to _ field for prossess arable land until
afternoon day.
we to compare sholat dzuhur.
After _ we to walk to Selo market until afternoon day
at 17.00 p.m.
We went to Grandmother home to squeezej _milk
cow.
Misfor: Reg. (verb), Archi
S.A, Om: Punc.
DM, Misordering, Archi
Altern
CL, Om: Prep., Om: Conj., Altern
CL, Altern, CL
Om: Prep., Misfor : Regularization
Archi, S.A
Holiday to Selo
Last holiday, I and my aunty went to
Grandmother’s house in Selo, Boyolali. We
went to grandmother’s house at 06.00 a.m. We
took a rest for eating.
After that, we went to farming the field until
afternoon day then we prayed Dhuhur.
Next, we went to Selo Market until 5 p.m. We
were back to the home to squeeze the cow. It
will be carried to cheese factory for
processing. We arrived at home at 20.15 p.m.
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After we _(blank)_ milk cow to chese factory. After
we went to home. Until home at 20.15 p.m.
S.A, Misordering,
S.A, Misfor: Reg., S.A
Types of Errors:
a. Misformation total: 9
Reg. Verb: 3
Archi: 3
Altern: 3
b. Omission total: 4
Article: 1
Preposition: 2
Punctuation: 1
c. Addition total: 6
Double Marking: 1
Simple Addition: 5
d. Misordering : 2
Others :
a. Capital Letter : 3
b. False Friend: 1
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 5
b. Intralingual: 5
4. Lukman - 8A Holiday to Tawangmangu
On my last holiday, I went to in Tawangmangu. We
went from Tawangmangu on 28th mart 2017 by using
a motorcycle. I and a Tasya we saw in mountain and
cemara’s me _it was an enjoyable trip because this
was my first experience to go to Tawangmangu _
S. A
Altern, Mispell
Altern
Archi, Om: Punct.
Om: Punc.
Holiday to Tawangmangu
On my last holiday, I went to Tawangmangu.
We went to Tawangmangu on March, 28th
2017 by using motorcycle. I and Tasya saw a
mountain and Cemara tree. It was an
enjoyable trip because it was my first
experience went to Tawangmangu.
Types of errors:
a. Misformation total: 3
Archi: 1
Altern: 2
b. Omission total: 2
Punctuation: 2
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 1
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 2
b. Intralingual: 1
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Others:
a. Misspell: 1
b. False Friend: 1
5. Prakoso – 8A Visiting my grandparents
last week, on my last holiday. my family and I went
to visit my grandparent who lived in Sumberlawang
_ we went from njuangi on 28 march 2017 by using a
car driven by my father.
although _ the travel was quite far but for me it was
an enjoyable trip because this was my firs experience
to go to my village using a car. On our way to
Sumberlawang _ all I did was only sleep in the car.
While my little brother seemed enthusiastic to see the
scenery from the car.
Afthe spending one day trip, we finally
arrived at my grandparent house.
CL
CL
Om: Punc.
Om: Punc., CL, CL
CL, Om: Punc.
Om: misspell
Om: Punc., Altern
Misspell, Misfor : Reg. (verb), S. A
Archi
Visiting my Grandparents
Last week, on my last holiday, my family and
I went to visit my grandparents who lived in
Sumberlawang. We went from Njuangi on
march 28th, 2017 by using a car driven by my
father. Although, the travel was quite far but
for me it was an enjoyable trip because it was
my first experience went to my village using a
car. On the way to Sumberlawang, I just slept
in the car. While my little brother seemed
enthusiastic to see the scenery from the car.
After spent for one day, we finally arrived at
my grandparents’ house.
Types of errors:
a. Misformation total: 3
Reg. Verb: 1
Archi: 1
Altern: 1
b. Omission total: 7
Misspell: 2
Punctuation: 4
Conjunction: 1
c. Addition:
Simple Addition: 1
Others:
a. Capital letter: 5
b. Misspelling: 1
Source of Errors:
Intralingual: 2
6. Fetrofani –
8A
Holiday in the home
Last holiday was my worst holiday because I did not
go anywhere. I just stayed in the home. In the
morning, I woke up and had a breakfast. After that, I
played with my friends, we playing together and
happy together. In the afternoon, I had lunch and after
Altern
Misfor : Reg. (verb)
Holiday in the house
Last holiday was my worst holiday because I
did not go anywhere. I just stayed in the home.
In the morning, I woke up and had a breakfast.
Then, I played with my friends, we played
together and happy together. In the afternoon,
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that, I took a nap. In the evening, I watched television
untill I felt boring. After that, I study with sister. After
that I sleeping. My daily activities were like that
during the holiday. so, I was sure last holiday was my
worst holiday.
S.A, Misfor : Reg. (verb)
Misfor : Reg. (verb)
CL
I had a lunch and next, I took a nap.
In the evening, I watched television until I felt
boring.
After that, I studied with sister. And then I
slept. My daily activities were like that during
the holiday. So, I was sure last holiday was
my worst holiday.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 4
Reg. Verb: 3
Altern: 1
b. Addition
Simple Addition: 1
Others:
Capital Letter: 1
Source of Errors:
Intralingual: 4
7. Wahyu – 8A Jogja
last week I went to jogja. I went to jogja
to gether _ friend. I went to jogja by motor cycle.
Jogja was amazing city, I shoped _ T-shirt and _
sourvenir in Malioboro. We
_ tired _ we ate gudeg in Vredeburg pastell.
last we went to parangtritis, paris
_ beautiful beach _ we payed ball and sand _
my Friend ates coon and arank coconut _ we went to
Solo in _ afternoon.
We _ tired but we_ very happy _ that were
_ amazing holiday_
CL, CL
S.A, Om: Prep., CL
Misfor : Reg., Misfor : Reg (verb), Om: Artc, Om: Artc
Om: To Be, Om: Punc., Altern, False Friend
CL, Om: Conj., C L, CL
Om: To Be, Om: artc., Om: Punc., Om: Conj.
CL, S.A, Deletion, Om: Prep., Altern
Om: Artc
Om: To Be, Om: To Be, Om: Punc,.CL, Misfor : Reg. (To Be),
Om: Artc., Om: Punc.
Jogja
Last week, I went to Jogja with my friend. I
went to Jogja by driving a motorcycle. Jogja is
an amazing city. I shopped a T-shirt and a
souvenir at Malioboro. Because we were tired,
we ate gudeng at Vredeburg castle.
And the last, we went to Parangtritis Beach.
Parangtritis is a beautiful beach. We played
ball and sand. My friend ate coconut then we
went back to the home in the afternoon. We
were tired but we were very happy. That was
an amazing holiday.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 4
Reg. To Be: 2
Altern: 2
b. Omission total: 17
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 4
b. Intralingual: 2
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Article: 5
Preposition: 2
Punctuation: 4
Conjunction: 2
To Be: 4
c. Addition total: 2
Reg.: 1
Simple Addition: 1
Others:
a. Capital Letter: 8
b. Deletion: 1
c. False Friend: 2
8. Fauzan – 8A Went to Grandmother house
On my last holiday, my family and I went to my
grandmother house _ who lived in karanganyar. We
went to karanganyar on 28th March 2017 by using a
motorcycle driven by my father. Although the travel
was quite far it is really near but for me it was an
enjoyable trip because this whas my first experience
when I was holiday to go to my village using a
motorcycle by self.
Altern,
Archi, CL
CL
Deletion
S.A, Deletion
Deletion
Went to Grandmother’s house
On my last holiday, my family and I went to
my grandmother house that lived in
Karanganyar. We went to Karanganyar on
March 28th, 2017 by using motorcycle driven
by my father.
Although the travel was quite far but for me it
was an enjoyable trip because it was my first
experience went to my village using
motorcycle.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation
Archi: 1
b. Addition
Simple Addition: 2
Others:
a. Capital Letter: 2
b. Deletion: 3
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 2
b. Intralingual: 1
9. Mido
Mashela – 8
A
Holiday at Ayam Resto
On Tuesday date, 28th March 2017 .
I am and my friends childhood mosque
go to Ayam Resto.
S.A, Misordering,
S.A, Misordering, S.A
Misfor : Reg. (verb), Om: Punc.
Holiday at Ayam Resto
On Tuesday, March 28th, 2017, I and my
childhood friends went to Ayam resto. We
went there between 08.00 a.m. – 08.30 a.m.
I went there with my friends from TPQ
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we go to in time between a 08.00 am- 08.30 am.
_ go to in Ayam Resto together
_ Adulthood TPQ Mosque Al- Ghofur After to come
in place.
We to come in Ayam Resto and straight go to _
swimming, we cleaning own and
go to a couple of eat together.
after we eat _ we go to a to return _ and pray together
in mosque al- Ghofur
and go to return to go home.
CL, Misfor : Reg. (verb), Altern, S.A, S.A
Omission, Misfor : Reg. (verb), Altern
Omission, Misordering, Deletion
Altern, Altern, Omission,
Altern
Deletion, Misfor : Reg.(verb)
CL, Misfor : Reg.(verb), Om: Punc., Misfor : Reg.(verb), S.A,\
Misordering
Deletion
Mosque Al-Ghofur.
We arrived at Ayam Resto and started to go
swimming; we changed our clothes and ate
together.
After finished eating, we went back to our
home and prayed in Al- Ghofur mushola .
Types of errors :
a. Misformation total: 11
Reg. Verb: 6
Altern: 5
b. Omission total: 5
General: 2
Punctuation: 2
Verb: 1
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 6
d. Misordering: 4
Others:
Deletion: 3
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 8
10. Bangun Ari –
8A
Reading _
One day I was reading a book. _ Books
I read a book entitled adalah the hafida.
The book contains biographers.
Family reles, how to introduce and nourishing love
for the Qur’an. Adults who memorize the Qur’an as
much as 30 chapters was _ incredible.
Om: noun
Misfor: Reg. (verb), Om: artc, S.A: reg.
Deletion, Misordering Form
Misfor: Reg. (verb), Archi
Misordering Form
Reading a book
One day, I read a book. The book entitled The
Hafida. It contained of Hafida’s biography.
It was about family rules, how to introduced
and nourished from Al- Qur’a in human being.
Adult person who memorized Qur’an as much
as 30 chapters is an incredible, moreover to
children.
It was an amazing book. I hope I can be like
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However was incredible. However a small child who
was not yet 10 years old it was incredible.
Extraordinary and special when I realized the book I
was very amazed _ hopefully I can be like them.
Amiin
Misordering Form, S.A, Misfor: Reg. (verb)
Misfor : Reg. (To Be), Om: article
Deletion, Misordering Form
Altern
Deletion
Altern, Misfor: Reg.(verb), Om: noun, Altern,
S.A
them.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 10
Reg. Verb: 4
Reg. To Be: 1
Archi: 1
Altern: 4
b. Omission total: 4
Article: 2
Noun: 2
c. Addition total: 3
Reg.: 1
Simple Addition: 2
d. Misordering: 4
Others:
Deletion: 3
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 10
11. Ersyam – 8A
(UNABLE
TO READ)
Adolescene
last night I read article about adooscence in a
magazing.
12. Rama – 8A Visiting my grandparents
on my last holiday, my family and I went to visit my
grandparents wo lived in Solo _ we went from
Semarang on 10th September 2014.
by using a car by my father. Although the travel was
quite far but for me it was an enjoyable trip because
this was my first experience to go to my village using
a car. After spending 2 days trip, we finally arrived at
my grandparents house. My grandmother was very
CL
CL
Om: misspell, Om: punc., CL
Misfor: Reg. (verb)
Archi
Visiting my Grandparents
On my last holiday, my family and I went to
visit my grandparents who lived in Solo. We
went to Semarang on September 10thm 2014
by using a motorcycle driven by my father.
Although the travel was quite far but for me it
was an enjoyable trip because it was my first
experience went to my village using a car.
After spend for 2 days trip, we finally arrived
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happy to know we were coming. They looked so
surprised because we did not tell them before.
S.A
at my grandparents’ house.
My Grandmother was very happy to know we
were coming. They looked surprised because
we did not tell them before.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total:
Reg. Verb: 1
Archi: 1
b. Omission total: 2
Misspelling: 1
Punctuation: 1
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 1
Others:
Capital Letter: 3
Source of Errors:
Intralingual: 3
13. Aisyah
Renata – 8A
Holiday in Balekambang
Last week, my parents, sister, brother and I went to
the balekambang park. We went there for _
recreation. We left at 10 a.m and arrived there at 9.30
a.m. The park is about twenty-five kilometers from
my house.
Arriving there, we saw that there were a lot of people
_ fishing at the fish pond. Some of them were just
relaxing under sady trees and enjoying their meals.
Luckily we got a shady place. Then _ we extend our
mat and take out our food and drink. My sister and
my brother, and I_ hide a seek. After a while, we
enjoy our land around _ 2 p.m we went home.
CL, Om: modal
S.A
Misfor: Reg.(verb)
Om: prep.
Om: misspell
Om: punc., Misfor: Reg.(verb),
Misfor: Reg.(verb)
Om: Verb, Om: misspell
Misfor: Reg. (verb), Om: prep.
Holiday in Balekambang
Last week, my parents, sister, brother and I
went to Balekambang Park. We went there for
having recreation. We left at 10 a.m and
arrived at 9.30 a.m. The park is about twenty
five kilometers from my house.
When we got there, we saw a lot of people
were fishing at the fish pond. Some of them
were just relaxing under shady trees and
enjoying their meals.
Luckily, we got a shady place. Then, we
extended out mat and took out our food and
drink. My sister, brother and I played hide and
seek.
After a while, we enjoyed our land. Around
about 2 p.m, we went home.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation
Reg. Verb: 4
b. Omission total: 8
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 2
b. Intralingual: 4
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Misspelling: 2
Preposition: 2
Punctuation: 2
Verb: 1
Modal: 1
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 1
Others:
Capital Letter: 1
14. Nanda – 8A Visiting my grandparents
On my last holiday, my family and I went to visit my
grandparents who lived in Solo. We went from
Sukoharjo on 28th March 2017 by using a
motorcycle_ by my father. Although the travel was
quite far but for me it was an enjoyable trip because
this was my first experience to go to my village using
a motorcycle. On our way to Sukoharjo, all I did was
only sleep in the car while my little brother seemed
enthusiastic to see the scenery from the car. After
spending 2 days trip, we finally arrived at my
grandparent’s house. My grandmother was very
happy to know we were coming. They looked
surprised because we did not tell them before.
CL,
Om: verb
D.M
Misfor: Reg. (verb)
Visiting my Grandparents
On my last holiday, my family and I went to
visit my grandparents who lived in Solo. We
went from Sukoharjo on March 28th, 2017 by
using a motorcycle driven by my father.
Although the travel was quite far but for me it
was an enjoyable trip because it was my first
experience went to my village using a car. On
our way to Sukoharjo, all I did only sleep in
the car, while my little brother seemed
enthusiastic to see the scenery from the car.
After spent 2 days trip, we finally arrived at
my grandparents’ house. My grandmother was
very happy to know we were coming. They
looked surprised because we did not tell them
before.
Type of errors :
a. Misformation
Reg. Verb: 1
b. Omission
Verb: 1
c. Addition
Double Marking: 1
Others:
Capital Letter : 1
Source of Errors:
Intralingual: 3
15. Latiefah
auefia – 8B
Last week _ December 9th I went to Jogyakarta
together _ big My family _
Om: Punc.
Om: Conj., Misordering, Om: Punc.
Last week, on December 9th, I went to
Jogyakarta together with my big family. I
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I am we went motor is car.
In the trip _ _situations _busy _
_ eat together _ family _
After swimming _ Drini Beach and selfie together _ is
10.000 am – 03.00 pm. Drini beach situations ramai.
After buying fish. After _ dinner together is bakso and
mie ayam and after in the house _
Misordering
Om: Punc., Om: Artc, S.A, Omission, Om: Punc.
Omission, Misfor: Reg., Om: Conj., Om: Punc.
Om: Prep., S.A, Om: noun, Misfor: Reg. (verb),
Misordering
Deletion, S.A, Misfor: Reg., Misordering,
S.A, CL, Altern, Om: Punc.
went there by using a car.
On the trip, the situation was busy. I ate
together with family. After swimming at Drini
Beach, we took a selfie moment together. It
was around about 10.00 a.m – 03.00 p.m. We
had dinner together with meatballs and
chicken noodles. After that we went home.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 4
Reg. Verb: 3
Altern: 1
b. Omission total: 13
Article: 1
Preposition: 1
Punctuation: 6
Conjunction: 2
Verb: 1
Noun: 2
c. Addition total: 4
Reg.: 1
Simple Addition: 3
d. Misordering: 4
Others:
a. Capital Letter: 1
b. Deletion: 1
c. False Friend: 2
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 7
b. Intralingual: 1
16. Abid – 8B Yesterday _ I and friends went to manahan. I went tto
Manahan at 08.30 am used _bike.
in there _ I played and retell my storyes.
I’m very happy and _ I whit friends
_ back to home around _ 12.30 p.m.
Om: punc., CL, S.A
D.M, Om: artc
Omission, Om: punc, Misfor: Reg, S.A
Misfor: Reg (To Be), S.A, Om: punc, Altern
Om: verb, Om: prep.
Yesterday, I and friends went to Manahan. I
went to Manahan at 08.30 a.m. by using a
bicycle. When I got there, I played and retold
my stories. I was very happy. I with my
friends went back to home around about 12.30
p.m. After that, I and friends went to Ikhsan’s
house and we were praying. At 02.00 p.m, I
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After that _ I & friends in Ikhsan house & _ praying.
At 02.00 p.m I & friends _ back to home each whit
safe.
Om: punc, Altern, Archi
Om: noun, Misfor: Reg (verb), Om: verb, Altern
and friends went back to the home each other
with safe.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 6
Reg. Verb: 1
Reg. To Be: 1
Archi: 1
Altern: 3
b. Omission total: 9
General: 1
Aricle: 1
Preposition: 1
Punctuation: 4
Verb: 1
Noun: 1
c. Addition total: 4
Double Marking:1
General: 3
Others: Capital Letter: 1
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 6
17. Putri Rahma –
8B
Some activities on Sunday
On Sunday, my mother went shopping at the local
supermarket to buy daily needs while my father and I
did the housework together. I usually washed my
clothes using washing machine. When it finished, I
hang the clothes out to _ dry. While I was washing _
_ my father always did gardening.
he loved to plant flower in the garden even though he
liked to gardening, he didn’t want to water the plant, I
was ordered to do that.
Om: verb, Om: artc., Om: noun,
Om: punc.
CL, Altern
Some activities on Sunday
On Sunday, my mother went shopping at the
local supermarket to buy daily needs while my
father and I did the housework together. I
usually washed my clothes using washing
machine. When it finished, I hang the clothes
out to get dry. While I was washing the
clothes, my father still did gardening. He
loved to plant flowers in the garden even
though; he didn’t want to water the plant. I
was ordered to do that.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation:
Altern: 1
Source of Errors:
Intralingual: 3
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b. Omission total: 4
General: 1
Punctuation: 1
Verb: 1
Noun: 1
Others:
Capital Letter: 1
18. Afrian – 8B My Holiday Experience in Jogjakarta
Last week, my family went to yogyakarta. We visited
many places there.
First, we visited prambanan temple. prambanan
temple was a beautiful temple. We took some photos
there. After that, we went to gembira loka zoo. We
saw many kids of animals there such as tiger, snakes,
collection, butterfly collection _ etc.
We looked around in that zoo and also took pictures
of those animals. After from gembira loka zoo, we
went to sahid raya hotel to take a rest. Sahid raya was
a famous hotel in jogjakarta, the facilities made me _
comfortable during I stayed there.
CL
CL, CL,
Misfor: Reg (verb)
CL
Om: Misspelling
S.A, Om: punc.
CL
CL, CL, Misfor: Reg.,
CL, Om: verb
My Holiday Experience in Jogjakatra
Last week, my family went to Yogyakarta. We
visited many places there. First, we visited
Prambanan Temple. Prambanan temple is a
beautiful temple. We took some photos there.
After that, we went to Gembira Loka Zoo. We
saw many kinds of animals, such as tiger,
snakes, collection of butterflies.
We looked around in that zoo and also took
pictures of those animals. After from Gembira
Loka Zoo, we went to Sahid Raya Hotel to
take a rest. Sahid Raya is a famous hotel in
Jogjakarta, the facilities made me feel
comfortable during I stayed there.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation
Reg. Verb: 2
b. Omission total: 3
Misspelling: 1
Punctuation: 1
Verb: 1
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 1
Others:
Capital Letter: 8
Source of Errors:
Intralingual: 3
19. Fajar – 8B Yesterday _ I’m holiday wit may sister and her
friend.
We went to _ beach. we depart at 7 a.m_ on the way
Om: Punc., Misfor: Reg., Om: misspelling, S.A
Om: Article, Altern, Om: Punc., CL,
Yesterday, I had holiday with my sister and
her friend. We went to the beach. We went
there at 7 a.m. On the way to the beach, we
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_ , we have stop to wait her friend.
After some minuts her friend to come and we depart
together. after some hours we to come to Sundak
Beach. we arrived _ 11 a.m _ _ we all
went playing water in the beach to come at 02.30 p.m.
after that, we all to changed _ shirt and we went
home. We arrived at home at 07.00 p.m.
Omission, Misfor: Reg.
Om: misspelling, Misfor: Reg., Altern,
CL, Altern,
CL, Om: Prep., Om: Punct, Om: Conj.,
Misfor: Reg., Altern
CL, S.A, Om: Possessive pronoun
stopped to wait my sister’ friend.
After some minutes, her friend came and we
went together. After some hours, we arrived at
Sundak Beach. We arrived at 11 a.m. Then,
we played were playing water in the beach
until 02.30 p.m.
After that, we changed our shirt and we went
home. We arrived at home at 07.00 p.m.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 8
Reg. verb: 4
Altern: 4
b. Omission total:10
General: 1
Article: 1
Misspelling: 2
Preposition: 1
Punctuation: 3
Conjunction: 1
Possessive pronoun: 1
c. Addition:
Simple Addition: 1
Others:
Capital Letter: 4
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 8
20. Agil Afiyanto
– 8B
Yesterday _ I and My friends went to grandmother
house on Saturday, 16th April 2017. After that_ I and
my friend dhuhur pray and praying together.
After that _ I and my friends were launching together.
I and friends eat with vegetable and _ After that _ I
and my frinds _ back to hom each with
sefe _
Om: Punc., Archi,
Om: Punc.
CL, Misfor: Reg., Misordering, S.A
Om: Punc., Altern, False Friend,
Misfor: Reg., S.A, Om: Punc., Om: Punc.
Om: misspelling, Om: misspelling, Omission,
Altern, Om: Punc.
Yesterday, I and my friends went to the
grandmother’s house on Saturday, April 16th,
2017. After that, I and my friends prayed
Dhuhur together. Next, we had lunch together.
We ate vegetable. Then, we were back to the
home each other with safe.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 3
Reg. Verb: 2
Altern: 1
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 3
b. Intralingual: 1
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b. Omission total: 9
General: 1
Misspelling: 2
Punctuation: 6
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 2
d. Misordering: 1
Others:
a. Capital Letter: 1
b. False Friend: 1
21. Riska
Puspitasari –
8B
_ monday, I and _ younger sister buying _ HP
I and _ younger sister go to shop HP.
_ Moment acrossed are car pasted I too last I no
looked if car, nearly to clash car reason I no, look
right and left
Om: Prep., CL, Om: noun, Misfor: Reg. (verb), Om: Artc.
Om: noun, Misfor: Reg., Misordering
Om: prep., Misordering, Misordering
Misordering
Misordering, Altern
On Monday, I and my younger sister bought a
phone. We went to phone store. At that
moment, there was a car when we were
crossing the street. I did not notice it because I
did not look to the left and to the right before.
The car almost crashed us.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 3
Reg. verb: 2
Altern: 1
b. Omission total: 5
Article: 1
Preposition: 2
Noun: 2
c. Misordering: 5
Others:
Capital Letter : 1
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 4
22. Adam – 8B Holiday to House grandmother
on holiday I’m in the home grandmother. in the
sunday.
I arrived _ 08.30 afteer that I _ lunch in the
grandmother house afteer that I _ fishing so.
I go to grandmother house to _ bath after bath _ after
CL, Misordering, Archi
Misordering
Misordering
Om: Prep, S.A, Om: modal
Archi, S.A, Omission, S.A
Misfor: Reg, Archi, Om: verb
Holiday to Grandmother’s house
On Sunday, I spent my holiday in my
grandmother’s house. I arrived at 08.30 then; I
had lunch in grandmother’s house.
Next, I went fishing. I went back to the house
to take a bath then I changed my shirt so I
could until next morning.
On the next day, I woke up to take a bath after
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bath _ I substitute _ shirt so
I _ sleep until morning.
Were I wake up and I bath _
_ break fast
Deletion, Om: Conj., Altern, Om: poss. pronoun
Om: modal
S.A, Misfor: Reg., Altern, Om: modal,
Omission, Omission
that, I had breakfast.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 7
Reg. verb: 2
Archi: 3
Altern: 2
b. Omission total:
General: 3
Preposition: 1
Conjunction: 1
Verb: 1
Modal: 3
Possessive Pronoun: 1
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 4
d. Misordering 3
Others:
a. Capital Letter: 1
b. Deletion: 1
c. False Friend 2
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 7
23. Fina Kusuma
D – 8B
On the Monday date 17th april 2017 my family went
to grandmother house In Ngargoyoso. I to depart from
home _ 05.30 a.m arrived in there at 07.30 a.m.
After that _ I _ breakfast. _ Afternoon day _I _
fishing at _ river.
After that_ I _ _bath and ashar pray.
_ _ Night day I and all _ my family with watching tv.
S.A, Misordering
Archi, Altern
Om: Prep., Altern
Om: Punc., Om: modal, Om: Prep., S.A, Om: punc., Om: Verb.
Om: Article
Om: Punc., Om: Verb, Om: Article, Misordering, Misfor: Reg.
(verb)
Om: Prep., Om: Article, Om: Prep., S.A,
On Monday April 17th, 2017, my family went
to Grandmother’s house in Ngargoyoso. I
went from home at 05.30 a.m. then arrived to
my grandma’s house at 07.30 a.m. Then, I had
breakfast. On the afternoon, I went fishing at
the river.
After that, I took a bath and prayed Ashar. On
the night day, me and all of my family
watched tv then we slept together.
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After that _ sleeping _. Altern, Misfor : Reg (verb), Om: Punc., Misfor : Reg. (verb)
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 7
Reg. Verb: 3
Archi: 1
Altern: 3
b. Omission total: 12
Article: 1
Preposition: 4
Punctuation: 4
Verb: 2
Modal: 1
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 3
d. Misordering: 2
Others:
False Friend: 1
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 6
24. Rendi – 8B day _ Sunday I go to house grandmother in the
boyolali.
_ _ to house granmother
leave strike _ 06.00 a.m,
I leave from house _ ride _ motor cycle _
in the Journey I sy view very-very beautiful _ , I to in
house in house grand mother strike 07:30 a.m _ I to in
house grand mother.
I direct in invite to _ river after from river I return to
grand mother house for lunch.
after I _ lunch furthermore, I substitute
_ shirt I return _ _ home leave from house gran
mother clock
S.A, Om: Prep, Misfor : Reg., Misordering, Archi, S.A,
CL
Om: noun, Om: verb, Misordering, Archi,
altern, Om: Prep., Om: Punc.
Altern, Omission, Altern, Omission
Altern, Altern, Om: verb, Altern,
Deletion, Altern, Om: Conj., Deletion
Altern, Om: Artc., Altern, Misfor : Reg.,
Archi
CL, Om: modal, S.A, Altern
Om: noun, Altern, Om: Conj., Om: Prep., Altern
On Sunday, I went to grandmother’s house in
Boyolali. We went to her grandmother’s house
at 06.00 a.m. I went there by driving a
motorcycle.
When I was on the way to her house, I saw the
beautiful scenery. I arrived at 07.30 a.m.
I left to the river immediately then I went back
to the grandmother’s house for lunch.
After I had lunch, I changed my shirt and went
back to my house at 14.00 p.m. At 15.30 p.m.,
I arrived to my house then I slept until next
morning.
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_ 14:00 pm_ to house at 15:30 pm
after to in house _ I sleep until next morning _
Om: Conj., Om: Punc., Altern
Altern, Misfor : Reg., Om: Punc.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 20
Reg. Verb: 4
Archi: 3
Altern: 13
b. Omission total: 15
Article: 2
Preposition: 3
Punctuation: 3
Conjunction: 3
Noun: 3
Modal: 1
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 3
d. Misordering: 2
Others:
a. Capital Letter: 2
b. Deletion: 2
c. False Friend:1
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 10
25. David Dwi
Julianto
My Holiday experience in Jogjakarta
Last week, my family went to Yogyakarta. We visited
many places there.
First, we visited Prambanan Temple. Prambanan
temple was a beautiful temple. We took some photos
there. After that, we went to Gembira Loka Zoo. We
saw many kinds of animals there such as tiger,
snakes’ collection, butterfly collection, etc. We
looked around in that zoo, and also took pictures of
those animals. After from gembira loka zoo we went
to sahid raya hotel to take a rest. sahid raya was a
famous hotel in Jogjakarta, the facilities made me
comfortable during I stayed there.
In the next day, we went to siung beach. Siung beach
CL
CL,
CL, CL, Misfor : Reg. (To Be)
CL
My Holiday Experience in Jogjakarta
Last week, my family went to Yogyakarta. We
visited many places there.
First, we visited Prambanan Temple.
Prambanan temple is a beautiful temple.
Prambanan temple is a beautiful temple. We
took some photos there. After that, we went to
Gembira Loka Zoo. We saw many kinds of
animals there such as tiger, snakes collection,
butterfly collection, etc. We looked around in
that zoo, and also took pictures of those
animals. After from Gembira Loka Zoo we
went to Sahid Raya Hotel to take a rest. Sahid
Raya is a famous hotel in Jogjakarta, the
facilities made me comfortable during I stayed
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was very beautiful. I played the white sands. I swam
there and I saw some people practiced rock climbing
there. Siung beach was in Gunung Kidul, about 2
hours from the center of Jogjakarta. I played for some
hours until I felt tired and decided to go back to our
car. After that, we went to malioboro to buy some
souvenirs, malioboro was about 30 minutes from
sahid raya hotel. Malioboro is a busy street, there
were many sellers who sold many kinds of souvenirs.
Then, we felt hungry, so we went to a chinese
restaurant. After finished our dinner, we decided to go
home.
Misfor : Reg., Addition : Reg.
Misfor : Reg.
Misfor : Reg. (To Be)
CL
CL, Misfor : Reg.
CL
Misfor : Reg.
CL
there.
On the next day, we went to Siung beach.
Siung beach is beautiful beach. I played with
the white sand. I swam there and I saw some
people were practicing rock climbing there.
Siung beach located in Gunung Kidul, is about
2 hours from the center of Jogjakarta. I played
for some hours until I felt tired and decided to
go back to our car. After that, we went to
Malioboro to buy some souvenirs; Malioboro
is about 30 minutes from Sahid Raya Hotel.
Malioboro is a busy street, there were many
sellers who sell many kinds of souvenirs.
Then, we felt hungry, so we went to a Chinese
restaurant. After finished our dinner, we
decided to go home.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 6
Reg. Verb: 3
Reg. To Be: 3
b. Addition
Reg.: 1
Others:
Capital Letter: 9
Source of Errors:
Intralingual: 1
26. Imamara Nisa
(8B)
Last week, I went to school because there is practice
to dance. I am practice dance golek Sri Rejeki. The
purpose of this exercise to be displayed on end events
AKIRUSSANAH class IX.
I practice school _ with my school friends.
then my friends and I will continue to exercise well
and successfully.
That’s just my experience sorry just a little. But that
was my story on last week’s holiday.
Misfor : Reg. (To Be),
Misfor : Reg., Misordering, Altern
Altern, Altern,
Misordering
Misfor: Reg., S.A, Om: noun, S.A
S.A, Altern,
Altern
Misordering, S.A,
S.A
Last week, I went to school because there was
a practice to dance. I practiced Sri Rejeki
Golek Dance. This practice aimed to be
showed in Akirussanah farewell event from
class IX.
I practiced it with my friends. We always
practiced it until got best performance.
That is just my little experience. But that was
my story on my last holiday.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 8
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 4
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Reg. To Be: 3
Altern: 5
b. Omission
Noun: 1
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 5
d. Misordering: 3
b. Intralingual: 2
27. Bela Puspita
Sari (8B)
On the Sunday, 23rd April 2017, I spent my holiday in
_ house. In the morning day I watching tv to arrive
daytime.
after that I eating and pray.
I and my sister went to uncle house for to fissinet.
Deletion, Om: Prep.,
Om : artc., Misfor : Reg. (verb), Altern, Om: artc.,
CL, Misfor : Reg.,
Archi Form, Deletion
On Sunday, April 23rd, 2017, I spent my
holiday in the house. In the morning, I
watched tv until a daytime.
After that I had lunch and prayed. Then, I and
my sister went to uncle’s house.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 5
Reg. Verb: 2
Archi: 1
Altern: 2
b. Omission total: 5
Article: 2
Preposition: 1
Punctuation: 2
Others:
a. Capital Letter: 1
b. Deletion: 2
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 4
28. Lutfiyana
(8B)
On the Monday, 17th April 2017 I spent my holiday in
the house. _ _ Morning day I watching TV to arrive
_ daytime,
after that _ I eating and pray ,
after finished _ I helped my mother the house to
arrive clean.
S.A,
Om: Prep., Om: Artc., S.A, Misfor : Reg., Misfor : Reg,
Om: Artc., Om: Punc.
CL, Om: Punc, Misfor: Reg., Om: Punc,
Altern, Om: Punc,., Misordering
On Monday, April 17th, 2017 I spent my
holiday in the house. On the morning, I
watched tv until the daytime. After that, I had
lunch and prayed.
Then, I helped my mother to clean the house.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 4
Reg. Verb: 3
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 3
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Altern: 1
b. Omission total: 7
Article: 2
Preposition: 1
Punctuation: 4
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 2
d. Misordering: 1
Others:
Capital Letter: 1
29. Ratih Putriana
(8B)
On the Sunday _ I with my Family and my friends. I
went to bathing Cokro.
I prepare my T-shirt For swimming. After that _ I and
my Friends with my family have ready _ .
at 10:30 a.m all my Friends and my Family in the car
and lets go. In my trip _ I and my Friends retell.
_ arrived in there at 12:00 p.m. I and my Friends _
dhuhur dhuhur pray ,
After _ dhuhur Pray I and my Friends changed a dress
so swimming togeter.
In there I and my old brother playing _ glidt I _ very
happy.
After swimming _ I changed a dress and eating
together _ my friends,
After eating all my Family and my Friends prepare
went _ home.
S.A, Om: Punc., S.A,
Misordering
Misfor : Reg., Om: Punc., Altern
Misfor : Reg., Omission
Altern, Misordering, Deletion,
Altern, Om: Punc., Altern
Om: Conj., S.A, Altern, Om: To Be,
S.A, Misordering, Om: Punc.
Om: rel. pronoun, Deletion, Altern, Altern, Altern,
Om: misspelling
S.A, Misfor : Reg., Om: Prep., Om: misspelling, Om: To Be
Om: Punc., Altern, Misfor : Reg.,
Om: Prep., Altern
Misfor : Reg., D.M,
Om: artc.
On Sunday, I with my family and my friends
went to Cokro Bathing place. I prepared my t-
shirt for swimming. After that, we were ready
to go there.
We went to that place at 10.30 a.m. On the
way to that place, I and my friends were
chatting to each other. We arrived at 12.00
p.m., and then we were praying Dhuhur. After
that we changed our clothes for swimming
together. I and my old brother played with the
glide board. I was very happy.
After swimming, I changed my cloth and ate
together with my friends. After that, we
prepared to go back to the home.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 15
Reg. Verb: 5
Altern: 10
b. Omission total: 16
General: 1
Article: 1
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 9
b. Intralingual: 3
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Misspelling: 2
Preposition: 2
Punctuation: 5
Conjunction: 1
To Be: 2
Realtive Pronoun: 1
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 5
d. Misordering: 3
Others:
a. Deletion: 2
b. False Friend: 2
30. Ratih Putri
Ani (8B)
holiday is coming I and my friends holiday in cokro. I
went _ by _ _ car
I wen at 10.30.
In My trip I and My Friends _ retell
About me. I and My Friends in there at 12.00. So I
and My Friends dhuhur pray.
After dhuhur pray _ I and My Friends changed a
dress.
So swimming together. So wolk in down . after wolk
in down I and My Friend she is Sitta playing _ _
glidt.
After playing _ _ glidt _ I wolk to swimming pool
other.
I blid My Friends _ _ _ _
SD that is Jeliana and Jelita.
Then I and My Friends changed a dress. Then _
eathing together.
After _ I and my friends go home.
THE END
Deletion, Misordering, CL,
Omission, Om: verb, Om: Artc.
S.A
Altern, Om: verb, Altern
S.A, Altern, Altern, Altern,
Misfor : Reg., Misordering
Deletion, Omisssion, Altern, Archi,
Altern
Om: Conj., Misfor : Reg., Deletion
Deletion, Altern, Misfor : Reg, Om: verb, Om: conj., Om: artc.,
Misspelling
Om: Conj., Om: Artc., Misfor : Reg., Misordering
Misspelling, Om: Conj., Om: noun, Om: verb, Om: Prep.,
Altern, Misfor : Reg.
Altern, Archi, Altern, Om: noun,
Misfor : Reg.
Om: rel. pronoun, Altern, Misfor : Reg.
S.A
I spent my holiday with my friends in Cokro. I
went there by using a car at 10.30 a.m. On the
way to that place, I and my friends were
chatting. We arrived at 12.00 so, we prayed
Dhuhur. After that, we changed our dress then
we swam together.
Me and Sitta played with the glide board.
After playing with the glide board, I went to
another swimming pool.
I met with my friends when I was in
elementary school, there were Jeliana and
Jelita.
Then we changed our clothes then we ate
together. After that we went home.
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Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 21
Reg. Verb: 7
Archi: 2
Altern: 12
b. Omission total: 16
General: 2
Article: 3
Preposition: 1
Conjunction: 3
Verb: 4
Noun: 2
Relative Pronoun: 1
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 3
d. Misordering: 3
Others:
a. Capital Letter: 1
b. Deletion: 4
c. Misspelling: 2
d. False Friend: 2
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 10
b. Intralingual: 3
31. Malita (8B) On Saturday 15th April 2017, my Friends and I went
to the mosque to teach younger siblings to read iqro’
and Al-quran,
after a few minutes I returned
the younger, before sending my sister to give me a
prayer reading to be memorized and read together,
after _ reading with my brother and sister _ back and
greeting or saying good bye to the teenage mosque.
After that younger good bye, my friends and I go to
the back _(unclear word)_
to spoke at the same time adzan maghrib, after sam
the minutes time adzan magrib
I and _ Friends to come back to mosque to do sholat
maghrib.
After do sholat magrib I and friends each go to home.
CL,
CL, Altern,
Altern, Misordering, Misfor : Reg.
CL, Om: rel. prnoun., Deletion, Omission, Misordering,
Altern, Misordering
Altern, Deletion
Altern, Deletion, Misordering
Om: noun, Misfor : Reg., Altern
Altern, Deletion, Misordering, Misfor : Reg., Misordering,
On Saturday, April 15th, 2017 my friends and I
went to the mosque to teach younger siblings
to read Iqro’ and Al- Qur’an. After a few
minutes, I accompanied her to go back to her
house, but before that, she gave me a book for
praying. We read and memorized together.
After that, we said goodbye to others.
However, I and my friend were back to the
mosque to shout adzan Maghrib and we
prayed together.
And the last, we were back to our home
severally.
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Type of errors:
a. Misformation total:
Reg. Verb: 3
Archi: 7
Altern: 10
b. Omission total: 3
General: 1
Noun: 1
Relative Pronoun: 1
c. Misordering: 6
Others:
a. Capital Letter: 3
b. Deletion: 4
Source of Errors:
a. Interlingual: 8
b. Intralingual: 1
32. Ristiyar - 8B I and Friends goes to park Cerdas for playing.
I and Friends where open Youtube.
I looks to Danur. I _ very happy _ _can _ to _ friends.
After long time I and friends go to home.
I and My Friend that is Nanta goes to Melody _ to
buying Capucino Cincau and after that I and friends
goes to home self.
Misfor : Reg., Misordering
Misordering, Misfor : Reg.
Misfor : Reg, Om: To Be, Om: Conj., Om: noun, Om: verb,
Om: noun
Altern, Altern, Misfor : Reg. , S.A
Altern, Misfor : Reg., Om: noun,
Misfor : Reg., Altern,
Misfor : Reg., Altern
I and friends went to Cerdas park for playing.
When we were there, we opened Youtube. I
watched Danur. I was very happy can share to
my friends.
After a few hours, we went home. Me and
Nanta went to Melody Store to buy Capucino
Cincau after that we were back to our house.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation
Reg. Verb: 7
b. Omission total: 5
Conjunction: 1
To Be: 1
Verb: 1
Noun: 3
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 1
d. Misordering: 2
Others:
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 7
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False Friend: 2
33. Bagas (8B) In Day Freetime My To Play With Friend My.
My To Play With Very Glad.
After _ My To Play My And
Friend My _ Prayer Five Time A Day.
After _ My Prayer Five Time A day My To Return
And My To _ Bath.
After To Bath _ _ My To Learn And My Straight To
Sleep.
Misordering, Misfor : Reg., Misordering
Altern, Misfor : Reg., Altern
Misfor : Reg., Deletion
Misordering, Om: To Be, Misordering
Omission, Deletion, Altern, Altern,
S.A, Om: verb, Om: Artc.
Altern, Om: verb, Om: Punc., Altern, Misfor : Reg., Altern
In my free day, I played with my friend. I
played happily. After playing with my friend,
I prayed 5 times in a day. After that I went to
home and took a bath. Then, I studied and
went to sleep.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 11
Reg. Verb: 4
Altern: 7
b. Omission total: 6
General: 1
Article: 1
Punctuation: 1
To Be: 1
Verb: 2
c. Addition
Double Marking: 1
d. Misordering: 4
Others:
Deletion: 2
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 8
34. Bagus (8B) Holiday to house grand mother”
In holiday I ’m the home grand mother In the Friday.
I arrived _ 17.30 after I arrived I _ bath. after bath I
salat and pray.
after salat I work in round home grandmother. after I
work I _ diner.
Archi
Deletion, Misfor : Reg. , Archi , Misordering
Om: prep., Altern, Om: verb, Altern,
Misfor : Reg.
Altern, CL, Deletion,
Misfor : Reg., Om: modal
Holiday to Grandmother’s house
On Friday, I went to my grandmother’s house.
I arrived at 17.30 then I took a bath.
Then, I prayed and prepared to go to work. I
worked on around my grandmother’s house.
After working, I had dinner. Next, I went to
sleep. On tomorrow morning, I woke up, took
a bath then had a lunch. My mother and I got
ready to go home.
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After _diner I sleep.
where I wek up, _ bath and _ lunch. So
I and mother wet home.
Altern, Om: noun, Om: modal, Misfor : Reg.
Altern, Om: verb, Om: modal,S.A
Misordering, Om: misspelling
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 11
Reg. verb: 3
Reg. To Be: 1
Archi: 2
Altern: 5
b. Omission total: 9
Misspelling: 1
Preposition: 1
Verb: 2
Noun: 1
Modal: 3
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 1
d. Misordering: 2
Others:
a. Capital Letter: 1
b. Deletion: 2
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 9
35. Saddam (8B) Holiday to The Jakarta City
Last holiday, I went to my brothers home In Jakarta
City. I went to Jakarta City with my father.
We Went to Jakarta city by the train. Jakarta city was
very interesting, but the atmosphere was too hot for
me.
A few day leter, my brother and I went to the zoo. In
the Jakarta City. We went to the zoo by taxi _ the zoo
was very crowded. there were many _(unclear word)_
after bought the ticket, we went to see the animal in
the zoo.
First, I saw many pelican birds. they were very
hungry, so the zoo keeper feed the bird. Then I saw
many deer eaten many hay. In the same cage _ I saw _
Archi, Altern
S.A, S.A
S.A, S.A, Misfor: Reg.
Misfor: Reg.
Om: misspelling, Deletion,
Altern, Om: Punc., CL
Deletion,
CL, Om: plural
S.A
CL
Holiday to Jakarta City
Last holiday, I went to my brother’s house in
Jakarta. I went there with my father by train.
Jakarta is an interesting city, but the
atmosphere is too hot for me.
A few days later, my brother and I went to the
zoo. We went there by using taxi. The zoo was
very crowded of people. After bought the
tickets, we went to see the animals there.
First, I saw many pelican birds. They were
hungry, so the zoo keeper feed them. And I
many deer ate pile of hay.
Still in the same cage, there was an ostrich. It
was a big animal. It could not fly but can run
very fast. Its stomach was very big too. After
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ostrich.
it was very big. It can’t flew but can ran very fast.
Its stomach was very big too. After that, we went to
take the boat that the skin like a goose.
Before went _ to home, we bought some drink and
food. We _ rested in a restroom. I was very happy at
this holiday. I hoped the next holiday would be good
too.
Misfor : Reg., Misfor : Reg., Om: Punc., Om: Artc
CL, Misfor: Reg.
Misordering
Omission, Om: plural,
Misfor: Reg.
Misfor : Reg.
saw the animals, we went to take a boat that
looked like a goose.
Before went back to the home, we bought
some drinks and foods. We took a rest in a
restroom. I was very at this holiday. I hope the
next holiday would be interesting too.
Type of errors:
a. Misformation total: 10
Reg. Verb: 5
Reg. To Be: 2
Archi: 1
Altern: 2
b. Omission total: 6
General: 1
Article: 1
Plural/singular: 2
Punctuation: 2
c. Addition
Simple Addition: 5
d. Misordering: 1
Others:
a. Capital Letter: 4
b. Deletion: 2
Source of Errors:
Interlingual: 9