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Middle East Technical University
Informatics Institute – Dept. of Information Systems
Submitted by:
Mustafa DEĞERLİ
1382142
Submitted to:
Assist. Prof. Dr. Sevgi ÖZKAN
Res. Assist. Emre SEZGİN
Date of Submission:
April 30, 2010
IS 740
MIDTERM
ASSIGNMENT
STRUCTURED ARTICLE CRITIQUES
FOR ASSIGNED THREE PAPERS
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Table of Contents
1. Structured Article Critique #1 ................................................................................................................... 3
Bibliographical Entry ................................................................................................................................. 3
Problem ..................................................................................................................................................... 3
Purpose ..................................................................................................................................................... 3
Objectives ................................................................................................................................................. 4
Review of Literature .................................................................................................................................. 4
Procedures ................................................................................................................................................ 5
Findings ..................................................................................................................................................... 5
Summary ................................................................................................................................................... 6
Conclusions ............................................................................................................................................... 6
Recommendations .................................................................................................................................... 7
List of References ...................................................................................................................................... 7
Overall Critique of the Study ..................................................................................................................... 7
Strengths ............................................................................................................................................... 7
Weaknesses .......................................................................................................................................... 8
2. Structured Article Critique #2 ................................................................................................................... 9
Bibliographical Entry ................................................................................................................................. 9
Problem ..................................................................................................................................................... 9
Purpose ..................................................................................................................................................... 9
Objectives ............................................................................................................................................... 10
Review of Literature ................................................................................................................................ 10
Procedures .............................................................................................................................................. 11
Findings ................................................................................................................................................... 12
Summary ................................................................................................................................................. 13
Conclusions ............................................................................................................................................. 13
Recommendations .................................................................................................................................. 14
List of References .................................................................................................................................... 14
Overall Critique of the Study ................................................................................................................... 14
Strengths ............................................................................................................................................. 14
Weaknesses ........................................................................................................................................ 15
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3. Structured Article Critique #3 ................................................................................................................. 16
Bibliographical Entry ............................................................................................................................... 16
Problem ................................................................................................................................................... 16
Purpose ................................................................................................................................................... 16
Objectives ............................................................................................................................................... 17
Review of Literature ................................................................................................................................ 17
Procedures .............................................................................................................................................. 18
Findings ................................................................................................................................................... 18
Summary ................................................................................................................................................. 19
Conclusions ............................................................................................................................................. 19
Recommendations .................................................................................................................................. 20
List of References .................................................................................................................................... 20
Overall Critique of the Study ................................................................................................................... 20
Strengths ............................................................................................................................................. 20
Weaknesses ........................................................................................................................................ 21
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1. Structured Article Critique #1
Bibliographical Entry
Skilbeck, J. N., & Cruickshank, C. M. (1997). A framework for evaluating technology
management process. Proceedings of the Portland International Conference on
Management and Technology: Innovation in Technology Management – The Key to
Global Leadership (PICMET '97), 27-31 July 1997, Portland, Oregon, USA, 138-142.
Problem
To evaluate the technology management (TM) activities of an organization or a company, an
investigative tool is desired. This tool must be a part of an extended TM process framework.
There is a TM process framework, proposed by Gregory (1995), used, yet an extended one
including the key points identified by the academic literature and industrial practice is required.
The problem statements for the article mostly agree with the title of the article. On the other
hand, since the study emphasizes that it is to propose an extended framework, it should have
been better to include the word of “extended” in the title of the article.
Furthermore, the problem is not that clearly noticeable to the reader, and it required some
readings to know why the authors, Skilbeck, J. N., & Cruickshank, C. M., felt this study desired
to be done. Therefore, it should have been better to include a problem definition section at the
very beginning of the article to let the readers know what the exact problem is.
Purpose
The purpose of the study is to identify and bring together the major processes meant for TM
within a straightforward unifying framework. Additionally, this study is done to be used as the
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foundation for the development of a TM audit. That is, development of a methodology for a
company’s auditing TM process is the main purpose.
The purpose of the study is clearly and concisely stated at the beginning of the article and agreed
with the title of the article. Besides, the purpose is limited to the authors’ capabilities and
resources available.
Objectives
Specifically, the study seeks to determine the processes and their key points to include in the
extended TM auditing framework from both academic literature and industrial practices. In this
context, the study;
a) identifies and incorporates the three levels of TM in extended TM,
b) links the framework to business activities in extended TM, and
c) links generic processes in extended TM.
The objectives are achievable. The authors include sufficient amount of information and
justifications to accomplish the purpose and help solve the related problem. The authors also
include the academic literature and industrial practice justifications for the objectives.
Review of Literature
The authors provide an overview of the available academic literature and industrial practices
with respect to TM definitions and processes. The review of literature with regard to TM
definitions and processes is adequately detailed; however, there is no review of the literature
about the any possible study doing the parallel work. That is, it is possible that some other people
may did try to extend the TM framework before these authors by any means. It may be just
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because of that the authors did not find the any related study in the literature, yet then it is
expected to see the authors’ direct statement about this case. This could have made the literature
review well detailed and refined.
Section titles in the article are: (1) A Process Framework for Technology Management; (2)
Reviewing the Process Framework; (3) Extending the Process Framework; and (4) Conclusion.
Reference citations appearing in the paper are correct and accurate American Psychological
Association Referencing Style is used.
Procedures
The methods used to gather the data and any other sorts of information for this article are not
clearly explained. The authors use the data and information that are explained and detailed in the
papers of the other authors. In the article, there is no discussion of the any statistical or logical
techniques to validate what the authors try to rationalize in their paper. The reason for this may
be that they are to write a paper based on other papers. Nonetheless, it should have been better to
include why and how they defend, justify and use the other studies’ outputs as inputs for the
current study.
Findings
For extending the framework, the following findings from the other studies and the industrial
practices are addresses in the article. The related findings can be listed as:
Recognizing different levels of TM within an organization is required.
Linking the business activities of the organization to framework is required.
Defining boundaries and links among different levels of TM activities is required.
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Recognizing the lifecycle of the technology is required.
Using these finding the authors extended the TM framework to meet the following criteria:
The extended TM identifies and incorporates the three levels of TM,
The extended TM links the framework to business activities, and
The extended TM links generic processes.
The findings in the article are well organized, sectioned, sub-sectioned, and reported
correspondingly. Additionally, the relations of the findings are represented and showed in the
figure given in the article.
Summary
There is no summary overtly given as a section in the article. Yet, since it is not a too long or too
detailed article, it can be acceptable as the reader could easily get the main points and go over
them as she or he reads through. Additionally, it would have been even worse if the authors
included a summary section as it will be the just repetition of the some core points which are
easily recapped in a that short article. On the other hand, for the ones who want to read the just
summary part of the article may experience difficulty with this article and this is certainly a
notable thing.
Conclusions
The conclusion of the study is that an extended framework forming a foundation for a TM
process audit is proposed. This framework is extended concerning both academic literature and
industrial practices from the Gregory’s (1995) TM framework.
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There is a short conclusion section included in the article for the result of the study. When
compared with the length of the whole paper, this length of conclusion is satisfactory. Still, it
could have been included the basics of the extension done in the new framework as listing the
new properties in a one sentence in the conclusion part of the article.
Recommendations
There is no explicit or implicit recommendation in the article. Probably, this stems from that this
article does not provide a well-done and detailed research. However, it could have been better to
include a recommendation to call for additional research in the area. This sort of
recommendation is mostly seen in every article to promote additional research. One sentence
meaning the call for additional research in the area could have been included even in the
conclusion section of the article.
List of References
The references both in-text and end of article are consistently included in the article. All
references given are cited in the article. There are 26 referenced items used to write this paper.
The references are from a range of sources including journals, books, and theses.
Overall Critique of the Study
The related study is structurally critiqued above. In addition to the above judgments, following
comments can be made regarding the related study.
Strengths
This study is the first try to identify and organize major process for TM within a unifying
framework.
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The review for the work in the article is done in not only academic literature but also in
industrial practices.
The organization of the article is good enough. The complexity of the vocabulary items
used in the article is not too complex. It is easy to understand the whole article.
The findings in the article are well organized, sectioned, sub-sectioned, and reported
correspondingly.
References are well off. For further studies, they can be referred.
Weaknesses
The problem was not that clearly obvious to the readers, and it required some readings to
know why the authors felt this study desired to be done.
There is no review of the literature about the any possible study doing the parallel work.
Procedures, Recommendations and Summary parts are openly missing in the article.
There is no discussion of the any statistical or logical techniques to validate what the
authors try to rationalize in their paper.
Overall, this study is a good contribution to the field of research and further studies in the field
are surely desired. Nonetheless, since the referred article was a conference proceeding but not a
full paper, some of the weaknesses stated above could be tolerable concerning the context of the
study.
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2. Structured Article Critique #2
Bibliographical Entry
Probert, D. R., Phaal, R., Farrukh, C. J. P. (2000). Development of a structured approach to
assessing technology management practice. Proceedings of the Institution of Mechanical
Engineers Part B, Journal of Engineering Manufacture, 214, (4), 313-321.
Problem
For firms, it is an existent challenging work to integrate the technology management (TM)
systems into conventional business practices. There is a need for a model of TM in order to have
a tool to assess the effectiveness of TM activities and identify areas for improvement in this
context.
The problem statements for the article agreed with the title of the article. Additionally, the
problem is almost noticeable to the reader, and it gives details about to know why the authors,
Probert, D. R., Phaal, R., & Farrukh, C. J. P., felt this study desired to be done. However, it
should have been better to include a problem definition section at the very beginning of the
article to let the readers know what the exact problem is, rather than giving it in the abstract and
introduction sections.
Purpose
The purpose of the study is to produce a practical management guide, or more explicitly,
technology management assessment procedure (TMAP). Additionally, this study is done
describe the development and application of TMAP.
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The purpose of the study is clearly and concisely stated at the beginning of the article in the
introduction section and agreed with the title of the article.
Objectives
Specifically, the study seeks to produce the TMAP. The TMAP is to be produced to identify and
assess the central effective TM activities. These can be listed as:
a) The development and introduction of new products,
b) Deciding on the manufacturing technologies within the business activities,
c) Deciding on the outsource technology resources,
d) Selection of technology developments to undertake in R&D departments.
Additionally, the study provides the TMAP that
a) can be linked to normal business activities and does not require much interpretation,
b) represents different levels of TM, and
c) provides activity and process mapping.
The other major objective of the study is the testing of the developed TMAP in application.
The objectives stated above are attainable. The authors include adequate amount of information
and justifications to accomplish the objectives and help solve the related problem in the field.
The authors include the literature justifications for the objectives to be achieved.
Review of Literature
The authors provide an overview of the available academic literature with respect to TM
definitions and processes, and TM levels. The review of literature with regard to TM definitions
and processes, and TM levels is detailed in the paper; yet, there is no review of the literature
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about the any possible study doing the same or any sorts of similar work. To be precise, some
other people may also did try to provide or produce a model to assess the TM activities before
these authors by any means. The reason for this for the authors may be that the authors did not
find the any related study in the literature, yet then it is expected to see the authors’ direct
statements about this situation. This could have made the literature review well detailed and
refined.
Section titles in the article are: (1) Introduction; (2) TM in a Manufacturing Business; (3)
Development of the Assessment Methodology; (4) TMAP; (5) Industrial Application of the
TMAP, and (6) Summary and Conclusions.
Reference citations appearing in the paper are correct and accurate Chicago Referencing Style is
used.
Procedures
For the procedure, the authors not only give information about the appraisal and application of
the five-process model but they give information about accessing the company content for data
collection in this context.
The authors include the followings correspondingly for the procedure in the paper:
a) Appraisal and application of the five-process model,
b) Accessing the company context, and
c) Scoping and assessing the assessment.
The methods and procedure used to gather the data and any other sorts of information for this
article are clearly explained. The authors use the data and information that are explained and
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detailed in the papers of the other authors. Additionally, the authors clearly explain the
development of assessment methodology. Moreover, in the article, there is discussion of the
statistical or logical techniques to validate what the authors try to rationalize in their paper.
Findings
For development and testing of TMAP, a number of findings are made in the paper.
In the paper, it is stated that the TMAP shall do the followings, so the TMAP is designed to
a) include a framework for linking technology with business needs,
b) identify critical TM issues,
c) map and evaluate the TM processes,
d) identify areas of strengths and weaknesses for best practices and improvements, and
e) add to action plans for cross-functional support.
Additionally, concerning the expectations and refinement, the TMAP is designed to not only to
be suitably flexible and modular for the application of broad diversity of contexts but also to
create benefits for the research program and companies.
Moreover, the TMAP is also designed and refined so that it includes the following main stages to
provide enabling the focus of assessment to shift from strategic to operational levels:
1) Strategic overview,
2) Process overview, and
3) Process investigation.
Subsequent to the application of the TMAP, it is found that the TMAP application is successful,
and most of the scores are medium to high levels excluding the usability, usefulness and
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functionality that are reported as low scores. Yet, the authors provide justifications and
explanations for these low scores in the paper.
In general, the findings in the article are well organized, sectioned, sub-sectioned, and reported
correspondingly. Additionally, the relations of the findings are represented and showed in the
figures given in the article.
Summary
There is a summary overtly given as a section in the article. This is something good for fast
reader. As it is long or detailed article, this can let the reader easily get the main points and go
over them quickly. Owing to this, for the ones who want to read the just summary part of the
article will not have trouble with this article and this is certainly a notable thing for some readers.
Conclusions
The study provides the following conclusions regarding the TM.
There is a trend in the companies to embed TM considerations transparently and
continuously in the business practices.
Few companies are successful in strategic TM.
Multi-business corporations have particular difficulties in identifying and exploiting TM
activities.
New and additional theoretical approaches are needed for integration of full range of TM
considerations.
The TMAP provides mapping out the processes and linkages, and assessing their effectiveness in
the organizations.
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There is conclusion section included in the article for the results of the study. When thought with
the context and the length of the whole paper, this length of conclusion is satisfactory. It not only
provides the results of the development of the TMAP, but also results of the application and
testing of the developed TMAP.
Recommendations
There is no explicit recommendation in the article. Probably, this stems from that this article is
from a conference proceeding. However, it could have been better to include a recommendation
to call for additional research in the area. This sort of recommendation is mostly seen in every
article to promote additional research. One sentence meaning the call for additional research in
the area could have been included even in the conclusion section of the article.
List of References
The references both in-text and end of article are consistently included in the article. All
references given are cited in the article properly in Chicago Referencing Style. There are 32
referenced items used to write the related paper. The references are from a range of sources
including journals, books, conference proceedings, and theses.
Overall Critique of the Study
The related study is structurally critiqued above. In addition to the above judgments, following
comments can be made regarding the related study.
Strengths
The review for the work in the article is done in a well-refined manner.
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The organization of the article is good enough. The complexity of the vocabulary items
used in the article is not too complex. It is easy to understand the whole article.
The findings in the article are well organized, sectioned, sub-sectioned, and reported
correspondingly.
References are well off. For further studies, they can be referred.
There is discussion of the statistical or logical techniques to validate what the authors try
to rationalize in their paper.
Weaknesses
There is no review of the literature about the any possible study doing the parallel work.
Recommendations part is openly missing in the article.
Overall, this study is a good quality contribution to the field of research and further studies in the
field are surely desired. Nonetheless, since the referred article was a conference proceeding but
not a full paper, some of the weaknesses stated above could be tolerable concerning the context
of the study.
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3. Structured Article Critique #3
Bibliographical Entry
Farrukh, C., Phaal, R., Probert, D. R., Gregory, M., & Wright, J. (2000). Developing a process
for the relative valuation of R&D programmes. R&D Management Journal, Volume 30,
No.1, pp. 43-53.
Problem
The R&D programme prioritization within a manufacturing company in the aerospace industry is
the major problem studied in the related study. Specifically, it is difficult to carry out R&D
project selection among proposals. Therefore, there is a need for a process definition to valuate
the R&D programmes.
The problem statements for the article agreed with the title of the article. Additionally, the
problem is almost noticeable to the reader, and it gives details about to know why the authors,
Farrukh, C., Phaal, R., Probert, D. R., Gregory, M., & Wright, J., felt this study desired to be
done.
Purpose
The purpose of the study is to develop a process model to prioritize or select R&D projects for a
specific sector. Additionally, this study is done to provide a schema that any organization can use
to develop a process model to prioritize or select R&D projects.
The purpose of the study is clearly and concisely stated at the beginning of the article and agreed
with the title of the article.
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Objectives
Specifically, the study seeks to develop an optimum process for
the valuation of R&D,
enabling the selection and prioritization of programmes, and
giving maximum benefit to the military aircraft business.
Additionally, the study is there to provide a preliminary guide including the major things to
include in R&D valuation for specific purposes. In this context, the study comes up with a
schema including
the developing the initial framework, and
the implementing the methodology details
for any kind of selection and prioritization.
The objectives are achievable. The authors include sufficient amount of information and
justifications to accomplish the purpose and help solve the related problem. The authors also
include the academic literature and industrial practice justifications for the objectives to be
achieved.
Review of Literature
The authors provide an overview of the available literature including the academic overview
about the R&D project selection literature, evidences of approaches used, studies of in-company
practice, and academic view of the industrial need.
The review of literature with regard to R&D project selection is well detailed and explained; and
there is review of the literature about the previous studies doing the parallel work. This sort of
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literature review is good quality as it has more than the academic reviews just for R&D project
selection.
Section titles in the article are: Introduction; Review of R&D Project Selection Literature;
Developing a Practical R&D Project Selection; Results; Discussion; and Conclusions.
Reference citations appearing in the paper are correct and accurate American Psychological
Association Referencing Style is used.
Procedures
The paper describes the development of the R&D project selection procedure at British
Aerospace Military Aircraft and Aero structures. As the research methodology, action research is
used in the study. Five workshops, and further development and a company plot are utilized in
the study.
The methods and procedures used to gather the data and any other sorts of information for this
article are clearly explained. The authors use the data and information that are explained and
detailed in the papers of the other authors. Additionally, the authors clearly explain the procedure
development steps and processes. Moreover, in the article, there is discussion of the statistical or
logical techniques to validate what the authors try to rationalize in their paper.
Findings
In the simplified R&D project selection process,
the requirements are defined by R&D customers,
the R&D programmes are defined by R&D managers to meet requirements,
the questionnaires are completed by R&D managers for the tasks,
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two value parameters are determined, and
the selection of R&D tasks is made on the data.
Moreover, following two valuing parameters are found:
Technology benefit cost, which is to capture the value of R&D to the company as a piece
of technology, and
Customer focus, which is to capture the value of R&D in meeting the customer
requirements.
The findings in the article are well organized, sectioned, sub-sectioned, and reported
correspondingly. Additionally, the relations of the findings are represented and showed in the
figures and tables given in the article.
Summary
There is no summary overtly given as a section in the article. On the other hand, for the ones
who want to read the just summary part of the article may experience difficulty with this article
and this is certainly a notable thing.
Conclusions
The conclusion of the study is that an R&D project selection procedure is developed and
adopted. Additionally, a preliminary guide is created for a similar possible work for different
application areas.
There is a short conclusion section included in the article for the result of the study. When
compared with the length of the whole paper, this length of conclusion is acceptable but not
satisfactory; a longer one with more details could have been better and more explanatory.
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Recommendations
There is an implicit recommendation in the article. In the learning points and necessary
improvements section the authors do so this. However, it could have been better to include a
recommendation section to call for additional research in the area. This sort of recommendation
section is mostly seen in every article to promote additional research.
List of References
The references both in-text and end of article are consistently included in the article. All
references given are cited in the article properly in American Psychological Association
Referencing Style. There are 36 referenced items used to write the related paper. The references
are from a range of sources including journals, books, conference proceedings, and theses.
Overall Critique of the Study
The related study is structurally critiqued above. In addition to the above judgments, following
comments can be made regarding the related study.
Strengths
The review for the work in the article is done in not only academic literature but also in
applied practices.
The organization of the article is good enough. The complexity of the vocabulary items
used in the article is not too complex. It is easy to understand the whole article.
The findings in the article are well organized, sectioned, sub-sectioned, and reported
correspondingly.
References are well off. For further studies, they can be referred.
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There is discussion of the statistical or logical techniques to validate what the authors try
to rationalize in their paper.
Weaknesses
Summary part is openly missing in the article.
Conclusions part could have been longer with more details.
Overall, this study is a good contribution to the field of research and further studies in the field
are surely desired.
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