english final presentation by: andrew sedano. introduction goals beginning attitutde literacy...

English Final

Presentation

By: Andrew Sedano

Intro

ductio

n Goals

Beginning Attitutde Literacy Memoir

Discourse Community Project

• Engineering Lab Report

Over All Growth

Interactive Assignment

Goals

Broaden my vocabulary Improve the flow of my

papers

Learn new formats

Able to create well defined papers

Literacy Memoir

Who are you as writer? Who/what has

influenced your writing?

What in your writing needs improvement?

Reflect on your past writing experiences

Lite

racy

Mem

oir

Pa

rt I

Anticipations Steps

• Brainstorming• Journal entries• Proposal/Teacher Conference• 30 min. writing session

Peer Workshop• Multiple viewpoints• HOC (Higher Order Concerns)

• LOC (Lower Order Concerns)

Improvements• Grammatical• Organization• Flow• Content

Exa

mple

of Pe

er

Revie

w

Exa

mple

of Pe

er

Revie

w

Literacy Memoir

Part II

Anticipations

• Confident

• Less grammatical mistakes

Steps

• Eliminate all HOC

• Look over peer review and comments

• Accept/Not Accept changes

Ms. Camargo’s Revisions• More specific• Include better details

Litera

cy Mem

oir

Part III

Anticipations

• Better organized

• Flows a lot smother

• More detailed

Steps• Eliminate all LOC• Consider Ms. Camargo’s revisions• Add more detailed and be more specific• Proper Format (MLA)

Improvements• Better flowing• Easily understandable• Well organized• No grammar mistakes

Litera

cy Mem

oir

Reflectio

nOverall

Improvement

Proper steps needed

in order to consider

something as your

final draft.

Learn how to peer

review

Better

organizational skills

Better flowing paper

Well developed

details

Continue to

have

problems…

Putting ideas to paper

Introductions/Conclusions

Better vocabulary

What Was

Learned

Type of writer

Steps taken when

approaching a new

paper

Discourse

Community Project

What type of writing will you take part in in your future career?

• Research

• Reports

• Design Packages

• Project Proposals

What writing conventions are preeminent in your Discourse Community?

• Chicago Manual Format

• Detailed

• Labeled

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Conve

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Conve

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Dis

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Com

munit

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Anticipations Steps

• Research• Individual Report• Reflection

Camargo’s Revisions• Proper Format Correcting• Better Detail• Better Word Choice

DC

P R

evisio

ns

DC

P R

eflectio

n Learned

Type of writing styles and conventions

Jargon ENGR 1201

Other Discourse Communities

Improvements Well developed research Proper Formatting (MLA)

Ove

rall G

row

th Revisions

Peer Editing Organization

Better flowing paper

Formatting Skills

Journ

al W

riteQuestions

How has your attitude changed regarding peer review since that of your high school years?

Why do you think this is? maturity, peer workshop guidelines, etc.

TH

AN

K YO

UQUESTIONS?