e write - loc advanced writing for the web 23 may2011

Advanced Writing for the Web

Leslie O’Flahavan, E-WRITE

Library of Congress

May 23, 2011

Course overview

• How to write web content that offers a high return on investment

• How to write specific types of content:– FAQs – Pages that list bibliographies and guides – Home pages for your department or program

• How (and why) to do a content inventory• Strategies for explaining to management

why you need to spend time on your content

The traits of high-ROI web content

• It reduces the workload of the people who write or maintain it

• Users can act on it

• Search engines can find it (SEO)

• It brings in “revenue”

High-ROI content reduces the workload of the people who write or maintain it

• It answers questions: fewer phone calls or e-mails

• It teaches users; it shapes their behavior for the future

• It enables users to do things online

How well will this content reduce the workload for staff in the Department Human Resources?

Is this page better at reducing workload for staff?

High-ROI web content is transactional; users can act on it

• Enables users to do, not merely know

• Driven by verbs: download, submit, apply, schedule

• Content drives a task

Provide a birds-eye view of the task before the detailed steps

Make the task scannable

Make the task easy to scan

Clear name; useful sample

Clear overview, link to background

Look for opportunities to use links to shorten tasks

Put some task substance into the web content; don’t lock everything in the PDF

Good balance between web content and PDF

High-ROI web content can be found by search engines• URL – keywords separated by hyphens

• Browser window title

• H1 heading, and the other page headings

• Keyword-rich content

• Enough content: 250 words per page

• Ample keyword-rich links (inbound and outbound)

How well can the search engine find this county Trash page?

Revise this Trash page to make it easier for search engines to find

High-ROI web content brings in “revenue”

• You get a high return on your investment if you content actually brings in $$$

• Other types of revenue? – Web traffic– Having your content republished elsewhere– Inbound links– Reputation

Web content that brings in revenue

Pay online for exhibit space = $$$

Other types of revenue: Who links to me?

Who links to me?

Enough links? The right ones?

How to write specific types of web pages

• FAQs

• Pages that list bibliographies and guides

• Home pages for your department or program

Two E-WRITE FAQs projects

• Helped Travel Advantage Network launch FAQs page which reduce customer service e-mail volume by 50%

• Revised the Energy Information Administration’s FAQs page and developed an EIA Frequently Asked Questions Style Guide

T.A.N.’s help content before FAQs

T.A.N.’s first FAQs page

T.A.N. FAQs reduced e-mail volume

TAN's Monthly E-Mail Volume

# E-mails 954 846 774 754 730 692 684 662 478 422 356 406 548

Jan-04

Feb Mar April May Jun July Aug Sept Oct Nov DecJan-05

Introduced FAQs page

T.A.N. FAQs today

“Old” EIA FAQs

EIA FAQs today

Problem: Too many FAQs

Problem: Chaotic FAQs

Problem: Unanswered questions

• At CitiFinancial Mortgage, the FAQ “Will you send me confirmation that my taxes have been paid?” gets this answer: “Escrow transactions appear on your monthly statement.”

• At the Gastric bypass FAQs page, the question “How Long is the Average Hospital Stay?“ gets a complete answer: “Usually three to five days, depending on the patient's recovery.”

Problem: Vague questions

• WINE-STAT: “What about humidity?”

• U-Line: “What is the relative humidity inside Wine Captain® units?”

Problem: Dead-end answers

• Sandy Spring Bank: “Can I prevent my information from being shared with other companies in your family of companies?” The dead-end answer: “Yes. You can choose to opt out of affiliate information sharing, except for information about your specific transactions and experience.”

Lucent Technologies enables action: “What should I do if I discover a mistake in my online resume after I've submitted it?” The answer: “You may edit or update your profile at any time through the Edit Profile page.”

Standards for writing FAQs

1. Choose the appropriate question word

2. Organize FAQs in a way that’s easy for the user to grasp

3. Position the FAQs section near other kinds of help

4. Integrate user questions into page text throughout the site

5. Deep link answers to other relevant information at the site

Choose the appropriate question word

Amazon’s Electronic Banking FAQs:• “How will I know that I've been paid?” has a

procedure answer: “The bank that Amazon.com uses to send payments will send you a paper direct deposit notification by mail..."

• “Why must my financial institution be in the United States?” has a reason answer: “Amazon.com can only disburse payments using U.S. dollars, and the systems we use are only set up to handle payments within the U.S...”

Review the question words for CDC’s Anthrax FAQs

CDCs Anthrax FAQs today

Organize FAQs in a way that’s easy for the user to grasp

• “In the order they were received” is not an organizational structure

• Topic

• User

• Product

• Other ways to organize FAQs?

Organized FAQs?

FAQs organized by user

FAQs organized by category and keyword

Label FAQ categories clearly

Improve these FAQ categories

Trademark FAQs today

Position the FAQs section near other kinds of help

Integrate user questions into page content throughout the site

Deep link answers to other relevant information at the site

New York Times :• “Q: Is it possible to publish a New York Times article

on my website, intranet or in other electronic environments?”

• A: Yes, it is possible to use New York Times articles in electronic formats. Most electronic (world wide web) uses are limited to a maximum posting period of one year. You may use our on-line permission request form or mail…”

Write concisely: Answer first, then link to detail

Discuss this FAQs page

Grouped FAQs

Pages that list bibliographies and guides

• Balance detail with navigability

• Group items

• Find a place for “old” stuff

How is this Guides page difficult to use?

Is the new Subject Guides page better?

Improve this Bibliographies and Guides page

Steps to making this page easier to use?

Home page for your department or program

• Exercise vigilant maintenance! (Keep it current)

• Chunk “lobby” pages clearly and give the chunks meaningful names

• Limit the amount of content

• Help different types of users identify the content they need

What works at this Program home page? What doesn’t?

Is this a better Preservation home page?

Improve this Preservation program page

How (and why) to do a content inventory

Why do a content inventory or audit?• To find out what you have

• To assign ownership or responsibility for content

• To eliminate content

• To see how content is linked

• Why not to do a content inventory…

Once you know what you have, think about what your content costs you

• Meeting and planning

• Writing and reviewing

• Training on content management or other software

• Maintaining

• Answering questions about

What does your web content “pay” you? Can you measure what you get?

• Fulfills an internal mandate or obligation

• Participation in a program• Compliance with rules• Attention to your initiatives• Revenue• Dissemination of your message• Consumption of your content (downloads,

Identify, and stop publishing, content that lacks “I” - investment

• If no one wants to own the content, it’s not likely to have a high return

• If no one will maintain or update the content …

• If content owners consider the content difficult to use, but won’t change it …

• If content owners don’t even know about the content …

How to identify content that’s likely to have a low ROI…• Outdated• Hard to find at your site• Not optimized for search engines• Poorly maintained• Broken • Not transactional• Hard to read• Not targeted to its intended audience

Use metrics to identify content with a low ROI• Analyze web logs and visitor traffic

Customer service queries that prove content is not doing its job

Advice from Webcontent.govLog analysis can help you determine:

• Number of visitors who come to your website

• Number of pages viewed• Average amount of time spent on your

website• Most frequently viewed pages• Terms visitors type into commercial search

engines to find your site• Terms visitors type into your search box to

find information on your site• Top entry websites (where your visitors

came from)• Top exit sites (where your visitors went

when they left your site)• Most popular browsers used by your visitors

Web log data from 2005: HHS’s Frequently Asked Questions

15,2658,072

- 2,000 4,000 6,000 8,000 10,000 12,000 14,000 16,000

Topics Viewed Per Quarter 2, 2005

Strategies for explaining to management why you need to spend time on your content

Contact information

Leslie O’Flahavan

E-WRITE

Leslie@ewriteonline.com

Tel. 301-989-9853

www.ewriteonline.com

Writing Matters blog at http://writingmatters.typepad.com/

e write - loc advanced writing for the web 23 may2011

Documents

capabilities presentation may2011

panchayatraj may2011

embasesystematicsearching.15 may2011

13th may2011

moondoggie may2011

trend frenzy may2011

nevada economy005 may2011

erp final may2011

corp ppt may2011

information package24 may2011

design and-i-may2011

leedforhomes may2011

references may2011

asug new gl may2011

shapchartbook va may2011

egypt wp may2011

cnk presentation may2011

prsaga may2011

31 may2011-cinestar

may2011, nov2009