a nalytic w riting in the s ocial s ciences sources conference january 24, 2015 crystel dunn, miami...

Analytic Writing in the Social SciencesSOURCES CONFERENCE

JANUARY 24, 2015

Crystel Dunn, Miami Dade County Public Schools

cdunn002@fiu.edu

Primary Source Set: Assimilation through Education

APACHE TEENAGERS IN CARLISLE, PENNSYLVANIA(1887)

DESCRIBE THE IMPACT OF U.S. GOVERNMENT POLICIES ON NATIVE AMERICANS

Interactions between Settlers and Native Americans

Analyze Various Text Types

Map skills

Map Skills

Describe the Impact of U.S. Government Policies on Native Americans

Photo of Zitkala Sa, (Gertrude Bonnin)

Source: Library of Congress Photo used with permission

of University of South Dakota E. DeLoria Collection

http://www.loc.gov/teachers/classroommaterials/lessons/indianschools/journal.html

II. The Cutting of My Long Hair

The first day in the land of apples was a bitter-cold one; for the snow still covered the ground, and the trees were bare. A large bell rang for breakfast, its loud metallic voice crashing through the belfry overhead and into our sensitive ears. The annoying clatter of shoes on bare floors gave us no peace. The constant clash of harsh noises, with an undercurrent of many voices murmuring an unknown tongue, made a bedlam within which I was securely tied. And though my spirit tore itself in struggling for its lost freedom, all was useless.A paleface woman, with white hair, came up after us. We were placed in a line of girls who were marching into the dining room. These were Indian girls, in stiff shoes and closely clinging dresses. The small girls wore sleeved aprons and shingled hair. As I walked noiselessly in my soft moccasins, I felt like sinking to the floor, for my blanket had been stripped from my shoulders. I looked hard at the Indian girls, who seemed not to care that they were even more immodestly dressed than I, in their tightly fitting clothes. While we marched in, the boys entered at an opposite door. I watched for the three young braves who came in our party. I spied them in the rear ranks, looking as uncomfortable as I felt.

Excerpt 1

A small bell was tapped, and each of the pupils drew a chair from under the table. Supposing this act meant they were to be seated, I pulled out mine and at once slipped into it from one side. But when I turned my head, I saw that I was the only one seated, and all the rest at our table remained standing. Just as I began to rise, looking shyly around to see how chairs were to be used, a second bell was sounded. All were seated at last, and I had to crawl back into my chair again. I heard a man's voice at one end of the hall, and I looked around to see him. But all the others hung their heads over their plates. As I glanced at the long chain of tables, I caught the eyes of a paleface woman upon me. Immediately I dropped my eyes, wondering why I was so keenly watched by the strange woman. The man ceased his mutterings, and then a third bell was tapped. Every one picked up his knife and fork and began eating. I began crying instead, for by this time I was afraid to venture anything more.

But this eating by formula was not the hardest trial in that first day. Late in the morning, my friend Judéwin gave me a terrible warning. Judéwin knew a few words of English; and she had overheard the paleface woman talk about cutting our long, heavy hair. Our mothers had taught us that only unskilled warriors who were captured had their hair shingled by the enemy. Among our people, short hair was worn by mourners, and shingled hair by cowards!

Excerpt 2

Sample Prompt

At the end of the diary entry Zitkala-sa writes “Since the day I was taken from my mother I had suffered extreme indignities. People had stared at me. I had been tossed about in the air like a wooden puppet.” Using the information gained from the text (i.e., excerpts, maps and images) explain how the sources support this statement. Give examples from the story about the treatment of children in Native American Boarding Schools.

Language Arts Florida Standards OPINION TEXT-BASED WRITING RUBRIC, Grades 4 - 5 (draft)

SCOREPURPOSE, FOCUS, AND ORGANIZATION

(4-POINT RUBRIC)EVIDENCE AND ELABORATION

(4-POINT RUBRIC)

CONVENTIONS OF STANDARD ENGLISH

(2-POINT RUBRIC BEGINS AT SCORE

POINT 2)

4 The response is fully sustained and consistently focused within the purpose, audience, and task; and it has a clearly stated opinion and effective organizational structure creating coherence and completeness. The response includes most of the following:

•Strongly maintained opinion with little or no loosely related material•Skillful use of a variety of transitional strategies to clarify the relationships between and among ideas•Logical progression of ideas from beginning to end with a satisfying introduction and conclusion

The response provides thorough and convincing support/evidence for the writer's opinion that includes the effective use of sources, facts, and details. The response includes most of the following:•Relevant evidence integrated smoothly and thoroughly with references to sources•Effective use of a variety of elaborative techniques, demonstrating understanding of the topic and text•Clear and effective expression for ideas, using precise language•Academic and domain- specific vocabulary clearly appropriate for the audience and purpose•Varied sentence structure, demonstrating language facility

Source: Florida Department of Education

Primary Source Set: Japanese American Internment During WWII

Sample WWII Writing Prompts

Why did President Roosevelt order the internment of Japanese Americans?

How did the federal government’s actions influence civilian life during World War II?

What events show the persistence of racial tensions?

How did the U.S. military reflect the diversity of American society during World War II?

TODAY’S PROMPT

Write an informational essay on the relationship between Civilian Exclusion Order Number 5 and the participation of Japanese Americans in the U.S. Army during WWII. Use the evidence to formulate your essay.

PRIMARY SOURCE SET: VETERAN’S STORIES STRUGGLES FOR PARTICIPATION

Clip: Jimmy Kanaya, WWII

http://www.loc.gov/teachers/classroommaterials/primarysourcesets/veterans/kanaya.html

Write an informational essay on the relationship between Civilian Exclusion Order Number 5 and the participation of Japanese Americans in the U.S. Army during WWII. Use the evidence to formulate your essay

Closing Thoughts

Establish a learner-centered environment Increase student inquiry/communication

skills Encourage student self-assessment of

process and content knowledge

resources

Library of Congress Primary Source Set, Assimilation through Education: http://www.loc.gov/teachers/classroommaterials/primarysourcesets/assimilation/

Library of Congress Primary Source Set, Japanese Internment: http://loc.gov/teachers/classroommaterials/primarysourcesets/internment/

Library of Congress Primary Source Set, Veteran’s Stories Struggles for Participation: http://www.loc.gov/teachers/classroommaterials/primarysourcesets/veterans/struggles.html

Florida Standards Assessments Paper Based Training Test Materials:

http://fsassessments.org/resources/?section=4-studentsa-paper-based

List of Japanese Internment Camps in the U.S.:

http://www.momomedia.com/CLPEF/camps.html