alzeimer short film draft 4
TRANSCRIPT
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(Untitled short film )
IVth Draft…
Written By
Niyaz Mujawar
+91-9960898787
© Niyaz Mujawar.
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FADE IN
1. EXT POLICE STATION- DAYKalya rangachi Scooty Pep, police stationchya aawarat yeun thambte. Tya varun Anil Ghadge, aani tyanchi bayako Anjali Ghadge utartat aani station chya mukhya daratun aat pravesh kartat. Anjali, Anil chya hi pudhe aahe, tee atyant gadbadine stationchya payrya chadun aat jate, tichya mage Anil pravesh karato.
2. INT.POLICE STATION- DAYAnjali gadbadine aat yeun dutyvar asnarya Constable kade jate, jo register madhe tyach routine lihit aahe.
ANJALICOMPLAINT KARAYCHI AAHE…
Constable var tichya kade pahato, mage yet aslelya Anil kade pahato, aani mhanto
ConstableKunavirrudh ?
Anjali kahi bolnar eetkyat, magun
ANILANJALI…
Anjali mage valun baghte, Anil teela hatanech thambnyacha ishare deto…Constable kade pahato aani mhanto,
ANILSAHEB KUTHE AAHET ?
Constable Anil kade pahato aani mhanto,
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CONSTABLEYETCH ASTEEL…
(O.S. Bullet gadicha aawaj aiku yeto)
CONSTABLEHE KAY AALECH ?
Police station madhe P.I.ARJUN TOPE, pravesh kartat, te Anil aani Anjali kade pahtat, Anil kade valtat, Aani,
P.I.TOPE TUMHI ITHE AAJ?
office LA NAHI GELAT KAY ?
Anjali madhech vakya todat,
ANJALIAAMHALA COMPLAINT KARAYCHI AAHE?
YANCHYA…
Anil, Anjali var aawaj kabut thewun oradato,
ANILANJALI…
Kahi kshan stabdhta…
P.I.TOPE, ya shantatecha bhang karat,
P.I.TOPEAAPAN TITHE BASUYAT,
AANI BOLUYAT…
He tighehi samorch aslelya P.I.Topechya table jawal jatat, aani bastat…
P.I.TOPESANE, TEEN CUTTING SANGA…
ANJALICHAHA VAGAIRE KAHI NAKO,
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AADHI TUMHI COMPLAINT LIHA…
P.I.TOPE
O.K., LIHUYAT, PAN KUNAVIRRUDH ?
Anjali Anil kade pahate, aani mhante…
ANJALIYANCHYA WADILAN VIRRUDH…
P.I.TOPE, Anil kade baghtat, Anil khinnapane maan khali padun baslay…
P.I.TOPEKAY KELA TYANI?
ANJALIMAJHYA MULALA PALAWALAY…
(BEAT)
P.I.TOPEKADHI ?
ANJALIAAJ SAKALI…
P.I.TOPESAKALI, MAG TUMHI KUTHE HOTA ?
ANJALIGHARAT…
P.I.TOPEAANI TUMHI?
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ANILHOSPITAL MADHE…
P.I.TOPEKUTHLYA?
ANILMISSION HOSPITAL…
P.I.TOPEVEDYANCHYA HOSPITAL LA…
P.I.TOPEGHARAT TUMHI KAY KARAT HOTA MADAM?
ANJALIMAJHA DOLA LAGLA HOTA…
P.I.TOPE, Anil kade pahatat prashnarthak mudrene.
ANJALIHYANCHE WADIL VEDE JHALET,
MAJHYA PRATIK LA PLEASE WACHVA TYANCHYA PASUN !
Anil , P.I.TOPE kade baghto aani mhanto,
ANILMEE SANGTO…
3.INT. BEDROOM (GHADGE’S HOUSE)– NIGHT
Andhuk prakash, atishay stabdh nischal watavaran. Cameryachya firnyane kholitil goshti baherchya prakasha mule andhuk andhuk disat aahet. Jevanach tat bharlela disat aahe, tyachya bajula
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panyacha tambya var pela.Camera eka tasviri var yeun sthir hoto. Hya tasviri khali KAILASWASI.SUMAN GHADGE asa lihila aahe. JANMA DINANK- 15 MAY 1928), MRUTYU DINANK- 12 JANUARY 2000.
Ghara baherun prakashacha jhot khidkitun kholit yeto, to tasviri varun firun kholitil kapatachya aarsha var padto aani tyachya reflection madhe SADASHIV GHADGE (70) distat. Prakash tyanchya eka profile var bounce jhalyane dusara bhag andharat aahe, aani te var tanglelya tasviri kade pahat aahet. Kes ruperi, dadhiche khunt pandhre vadhlele, dole khol gelele.
Ha prakash gharabaher aalelya Scooty Pep chya headlights cha aahe. Gadicha aawaj aiku aetoy, gadi aata park jhaliy. Dive band jhale aahet. Gharat aata aadhi sarkha andhuk prakash. Off screen Purushacha aawaj aeku yeto
Purush (ANIL) (O.S)
KHIDKI BAND NAVHATI KELI KA?
Cut to.
4. EXT HOUSE- NIGHT
Gadivarun teen jan utartat aahet. ANIL GHADGE (40), tyanchi bayako ANJALI GHADGE (34) aani tyancha mulaga, PRATIK GHADGE (11), jo Scooty pep chya samorchya bhagatun udi marun baher yeto. Anil aani Anjali gharachya mukhya darakade jatat. Pratik khidkit jaun tyachya aajobana khidkitun pahatoy. Tyala aajoba andhuk prakashat man var karun baghtana disat aahet, pratik ektak pahatoy tyana. Anjali darach kulup ughadte, tee daratun aat janar toch tila pratik chi aathwan hote aani mage valun tee pratik kade pahate,
ANJALI
PRATIK…
Pratik chi hyavar kahich pratikriya nahi.
ANJALI
PRATIK TIKDE ANDHARAT KAY KARTOYS?
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AAT YE CHAL GHARAT…
Pratik tithech thamblay, he pahun tyachi aai tyachya jawal yeun tyacha hat odhate,aani Pratik samor baghun bolato…
PRATIK
AAJOBA… AAJOBA…
Aajoba haluwar pane man walavtat. Te aadhi pratik kade aani mag tyachya aaila pahtat aani kahi kshan pahatch rahtat.
Anjali hya najarene aswastha houn, jharrkan Pratikla darwajyachya dishene odhat nete. Pepcha prakash band hoto aani Anil hya doghansobat gharat yeto.
Aajoba aata khidkichya dishenech pahat aahet. Aadhichach andhuk parkas aata chehryavar.
Tevdhyat tyanchya kholitil Dive lagtat. Anil aat yeun tyanchyakade pahato, bharlelya tatala pahato…
ANIL
AGA HE JEWALE NAHIT…
Hya aawajane Anjali kholit yete, Pratik pan tyanchya mage yeto…
ANJALI
AATA BHARWAYCHACH URLELA AAHE…
Anil , Anjali kade pahato, Khidki jawal jaun khidki lawto aani parade odhun ghetto.
Pratik aajobanchya jawal jaun Tat jawal odhun ghetto, table thoda pudhe karto… Aani tatatil chapaticha tukda bhajila lawun mhanato
PRATIK
HAAN, AAJOBA…GHYA…
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ANJALI
KAY KARTOYAS ?
PRATIK
BHARWATOY…
Aajobanchi man valvun Pratik ek ek ghas bharwatoy, tewadhyat Anil kholitun baher jato, Anjali aswasth pane ubhi aahe, Anil baher gelyavar tee, Pratik jawal yete aani
ANJALI
UDYA SHANIWAR AAHE,
SAKALCHI SHALA AAHE,
TU HE UDYOG SODH AANI JAUN JHOP…
Tee pratik cha hatatun tat vyavasthit bajula kadhun thewate, aani Pratik la jayala sangte, tee pan nighnar eetkyat ticha sadicha padar kashat tari adakto, te pahayala tee mage walate, toch tila disun yeta ki, ticha padar tichya sasryane pakadla aahe aani te tichyakade ektak pahat aahet.
Kahi kshan Stabdhta (beat).
Halu halu tee aapla sadicha padar tyanchya hatatun sodawun ghete, aani kholibaher yete. Tee kholi baher aalyavar dar lawnya sathi valate, tenvha pan tiche sasre tichya kade ektak pahat aslyach janavata.
Tee kholitil diva band karate , aani dar lawun ghete…
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5.INT GHADGE’S HOUSE- BEDROOM-NIGHT
Anil aani Anjali tyanchya bedroom madhe jhople aahet. Anil ghortoy. Ya Ghornyacha Anjalila tras hot aahe. Tee kahi kshana nantar jhopetch kus badalte, aani kus badallyavar teela ticha bajulach konachya tari shawasachi gharghar aeku yete. Tee dole
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ughadte aani pahate tar, teeche sasare teechya bajulach jhopale aahet, aani tyanche dole satad ughade aahet.Anjali jorat kinchalte. Kinchalna aekun Anil khadkan jhopetun jaga hoto. To uthto, aani pahato tar tyache wadil ajun tasech bedvar jhople aahet, Anjali bhintila tekun ubhi aahe, aata Paratik hi tyachya room madhun bedroom chya darajawal aala aahe,to Anil la , Anjali la aani tyanche aajoba disat naslyane vicharto,
PRATIK
KAY JHAL ?
6 Int. Ghadge’s House- Noon
Anil aani Anjali doghe dinning table var Virrudh dishela baslelel aahet. Doghehi chintatur awsthet. Tewdhyat tyana bolnyache aawaj aeku aetat.
(O.S)Jaude soda, kay aata mhanav,
Teenshe paper pahana teen diwasatMhanje kay cheshta watate ka tyana ?
Ho barr akshar thik astil te ek,pan Kay giravtat mula aajchi ,
tyana pan kalat nasel…
Te ekmekana pahtat, khurchya sarkavnyache aawaj dekhil aeku yetat. Doghehi uthun aajobanchya darashi jatat, tyana Aajoba konashi tari boltana disat aahet.Doghehi dara aadun aeknyacha prayatna kartat, tyana jorat hasnyacha aawaj aeku aeto, doghehi haluch dar thodasa dhaklun aat dokawtat tar konihi disat nahi, Aajoba aektech konashi tari boltana distat.
AajobaHo na, me tarich tumchi Aathwan kadhli hotee,
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Bar jhal tumhi aalat, Kay ghenar tumhi ?
Anil aani anjali aat kholibhar pahtat, konihi disat nahi, aajoba tithunch aawaz detat,
AajobaSuman jara chaha tak,
Aani ho aadhi pani gheun ye… Ranade Sir aale aahet…
Anil dachakto, Anjali pahate aani vicharte,
AnjaliRanade ?
Anil12 varshan purvich warle te…
cut to:
7 Int. Ghadge’s House- Night
Dinning table var mantrik basala aahe,dole band karun , hatat ek imaginary gola aslyacha mime karat, madhech tyacha shwas kami jast hotoy, khadkan dole ughadto, aani tonadane aawaj kadhto,
MANTRIKHmmm…
Tyachya mage tyacha shishya tyach saman gheun tyachya mage patapat jato, Anil aani Anjali pan yeu pahtat, Shishya tyana adawto, aani manenech nahi mhanto… Anil aani Anjali tatkalat baher thambtat…
Shishya dar aatun lawun gheto…
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He doghehi baher… Kahi velane aatun fandine pathiwar marlyacha aawaz aeku yetat… Sapasap Sapasap…
Anjali , Anil kade pahte… Anil man khali takun ubha aahe, Anjali aswasthpane baghte… Vhivalnyache aawaj aeku yet aahet…
Cut to :-
8 Int. Aajobanchi Room :- Night
Aajoba ajunhi khurchi var baslele aahet, ughde…Aani tyanchya pathivar marlyache wal aahet. Atyant haluwar pane tyancha shwaochshwas chalu aahe… Te atyant kami aawajat tyanchya sammor baghun konashi tari bolat aahet,
Aajoba…Kalch me ek paper tapasla, Atishay sundar aksharat,Atishay sundar paddhatine
Lihalela… eetka sundar paper me Nahi pahila Ranade Sir…
Fade out :
9 Ext streets – Morning
Aajoba aata aekatech rastyavar ubhe aahet, te eka mall samor ubhet aahet. Mall chya bajula asnarya flat madhe te rokhun pahat aahet… Ektak… Ek stree tiche kes pusayala, walwayala balconyt yete, Aajoba tichya kade pahat aahet, tee bai aajobankade pahate, aajoba fakta underwear aani fatkya baniyan var tya bai la ektak pahat aahet… tee bai gondhalte aani aatun tichya navryala bolwayala aat jate,
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jo paryant tee tyachya navryala gheun yete balcony, to paryant aajoba tithun nahise hotat…
Cut to:10 Ext Ghadge’s House- Morning
Aata aajoba two wheeler varun utartat, tyana gavatil ek olakhicha manus gheun aala aahe GOPAL, to Gadi parat start karun nighun jatat, Aajoba tyanchya gharakade pahtat, aani parat dusrya dishela chalu lagtat, chaltana tyana ek plastic cha daba disun yeto aajoba tya dabyala rokhun pahatat…
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11. EXT VILLAGE OUTSKIRT- EARLY MORNING
Gava baherchi Tekadi. Aaju bajula sagala MAAL-raan. Hya tekadichya eka tokala Aajoba shantpane ubhe aahet, bajula panyacha daba lawandlela, aani aatla pani sandlela. Aajoba tekdichya tokawarun khali vahnarya nalyakade tak lawun pahat aahet. Pakshyachi kilbil aani eetar aawaj aiku yet aahet. Aajobanchya dokyatil vichar he sagale dhwani tipun ghet aahet. Haluch aajoba halkasa smit hasya kartat, khali pahun…
Te ek paul pudhe taktat, te khali padnar eetkyat tyana konitari pathi magun pakadta…
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12.EXT/INT GHADGE’S HOUSE
GOPAL aata darabaherun Anilshi boltoy, darat anjali ubhi,
GOPAL
PAUL PUDHE TAKNAR TOCH MEE PAKADLA.
AANI HYA ASHYA AWTARAT.aani aadhich me tyana
Gavatlya rastyavarun gate paryant
Aanun sodala hota, tar he parat firale…
Mhanun aata aanun tumhala aawaz dila
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Gopal aajoban kade var pasun te khali paryant nazar firavto. Anil chya chehryavar saaf naraji disate, Anjali nakala padar lawate.
ANJALI
GHARAT CHANGLE DON SANDAS AAHET,
KAY DHAD BHARLIY KON JANE…
Anil man tirki kadun Anjali kade baghto, aani
ANIL
CHAHA GHENAR KA ? Gopal
GOPAL
NAHI, CITYT JAYCHAY, USHIR HOEEL.
FAKTA WAHINI KAPAD AAHE KA JARA,
HYANA MAGE BASVUN AANALA NA, SEAT JARA…
Anjali kapad dete. Gopal kapad gheun gadikade jato, toch Anil
ANIL
GOPAL AJUN EK KAM…
GAVAT HE KONALA SANGU NAKO…
Gopal kapad gheun gadijawal jato, Anil gharat jato tyachya mage mage Anjali pan aat jate, Darwaja lawun.
Gopal chya Bullet cha Aawaj suru hoto, To jata jata mhanto
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GOPAL
WAHINI, KAPAD FATAKA JAWAL THEWLAY…
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13. INT. GHADGE’S HOUSE- MORNING
PANYACHYA SHOWERCHA AAWAJ AIKU YETOY, TYACHYA BAKGROUND VAR Anjali aani Anil bolat aahet.
ANJALI
MEE MHANTEY, TYANA VEDYANCHYA ISPITALAT
BHARTI KARA, TABADTOB…
ANIL
KAHI PAN BARLU NAKOS…
ANJALI
MEECH JATE PRATIK LA GHEUN MAHERI.
ANIL
HE BAGH VAYA-PARATVE HOTA ASA…
ANJALI
VAY-PARATVE VED NAHI YET SAGLYANA.
PRATIK tyachya kholitun dole cholat baher yeto, to doghan kade baghto,
PRATIK
KONALA VED LAGLAY, AAI ?
He doghe Pratik kade baghtat…
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ANJALI
TUJHYA AAJOBANA…
PRATIK
AAJOBA VEDE NAHIT…
Anjali pratik kade ragane baghte,
ANIL
JA TU BRUSH KAR, SHALA AAHE NA TUJHI…
Pratik batroom kade nighto, toch tyala bathroom madhe thand shower khali aajoba ubhe aslyach disata, te thandine kudkudat aahet, to aajobana kade baghto, aani valun Anjali la mhanto,
PRATIK
AAI AAJOBANA TOWEL DE, TYANA THANDI VAJTYE.
Anil , Anjali kade baghto, Anjali man modun shejari tanglela Towel gheun bathroom kade jate, darat thijun ubhi rahate, Pratik la pahate, Pratik brush kartoy, Anil phone var number dial karat aahe.
Anjali chya manat aat jave ki nahi asa vichar.
Samor Aajoba panyane olechimb jhale aahet.
Anjali haluch ek paul pudhe takate, aawandha gilate, aani towel dyayla hat pudhe karate, Aajoba anjali chya dishene baghat nahit, tee thoda pudha haat karayla pahate, towel chya kinaryala dharun, tichya hatatun towel khali padato.
Aata towel var showerch pani jorat padtay.
Aajoba panyakhalich ubhe,
Anjali towel kade aani Ajoban kade pahate, aani towel uchlayla ek khali vacate, toch tichya pathivar aajobancha panyane bhijlela haat padto, aani Anjali kinchalun mage bathroomchya daratun khali padate.
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Anil hya oradnyane dachkun jaun anjali jawal yeto. Pratik chya tondat paste cha fess aahe, to pan anjali jawal yeto…
Anjali thar-tharatey, tewadhyat Anil cha phone vajato.
Anil phone var uchalto, phone office madhun aahe.
ANIL
MEE AAJ YENAR NAHIYE OFFICELA…
Anjali kopryat thar-tharat ubhi rahate…
ANJALI
TUMHI KAHI KARNAR AAHAT KI?
ANIL
AGA, kay kela tyani…
ANJALI
Hat takla majhya var…
ANIL
Thik aahe mee…
Nahi… malach jaun aanav
lagel tya lokana
Pratik vicharto,
PRATIK
KON YENAR AAHE?
AANI KONALA KUTHE
GHEUN JANAR AAHET?
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ANJALI
TUJHYA AAJOBANA, TYANA
VEDYANCHYA DAWAKHANYAT
BHARTI KARNAR AAHOT…
PRATIK
AAJOBA VEDE NAHIYET…
Anjali Pratik chya muskadit jorat thewun dete, to kolmadun jaun bajula padato… Tyachya tondatala paste cha face baher padto.
Anil he baghun mage firto, phone var number dial karu legato, aani tewadhyat Aajoba. Halu halu bathroom madhun baher yetat, te aata halu halu Anjali chya dishene chalu lagtat.
Anil phone var bolat aahe,
ANIL
HAAN, HOSPITAL…
Anjali stool var basil aahe, Aajoba tichya jawal jaun thambtat, Anjalila tyachi janeev hote, aani dachkun tee aajobanma dhalakalte aani jorat kinchalte.
Aajoba dekhil Pratik sarkhe kopryat padlele aahet, tyanchya dokyala jakham jhaliy… te agadi nischechta paddle aahet. Pratik tyanchya dokyala hat lawato, aani bhijlelya towel ne tee jakham pusato…
He pahun Anjali fankaryane aatlya khiolit nighun jate aani aatun darala kadi lawun ghete.
Anil Tichya janya kade aani Aajoba aani natava kade pahato, aani phone var parat bolu legato,
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ANIL
THIK AAHE, MEECH YETO
TUMHALA GHYAYLA,
HO AALOCH, NIGHALO…
Anil ghara baher padto… Pep suru honyacha aawaj.
Pratik – aajoba ek mekanshejari padlele. Aajoba haluch uthtat… Pratik kade baghtat.
Aatlya kholit Anjali darwajyala tekun radat ubhi aahe.
FADE TO BLACK:
FADE IN:
14.INT ANJALI’S BEDROOM(GHADGE’S HOUSE)-NOON
ANJALI bedvar jhopleli aahe, tyach awasthet… kholichya daravar aawaj aiku yetatyat…
ANIL (O.S)
ANJALI…ANJALI…
Anjali uthaun dole pusate, aani dar ughadte, darabaher Anil ubha aahe, tyachya sobat Hospital madhil 2 brothers (ward boys) aahet.
ANIL
BABA KUTHE AAHET…
Anjali sthir-sawar houn,
ANJALI
UHHH…KON
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ANIL
BABA… KUTHE AAHET ?
HOSPITAL MADHUN MANASE
AALI AAHET GHYAYLA TYANA…
Anjali, tyanchya kade pahate, aani eekade tikade baghun,
ANJALI
ITHECH TAR HOTE, MAGHASHI…
TUMHI GELAT TENVHA, PRATIK
PAN SOBAT HOTA…
Anjali achanak Pratik cha nav ghetlyavar,
ANJALI
PRATIK, PRATIK… KUTHE AAHE?
Anjali aata Pratik la aawaj det gharbhar shodhat aahe…
Tee don brother’s Anil kade pahatat… Anil,
ANIL
PRATIK SHALET GELA NAHI KA?
ANJALI
TUMHI SODNAR HOTA NA TYALA?
ANIL
MEE HYANCHYA KADE GELELO,
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BROTHERS
SAHEB PATIENT KUTHE AAHE…
ANIL
EK MINUTE THAMBA TUMHI. EK KAM
KARA TUMHI JAA, MEE AANTO PATIENT LA…
DOGHE BROTHERS NIGHUN JATAT.
Anjali yete gharbhar shodhun,
ANJALI
AHO PRATIK AANI HE PAN NAHIT GHARAT…
ANIL
majh pakit disala ka ?
aani TU AAT KAY KARAT HOTIS ?
ANJALI
MAJHA DOLA LAGLELA ZARA…
ANIL ragane Anjali kade baghto, Anjali parat radu lagate…
ANJALI
TE PRATIKCH KAHI BARA-WAIT
TARI KARNAR NAHIT NA?
Anil aata aswastha houn yer-jharya ghalu legato…
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Khishatum phone kadhto, aani phone lawto…
ANJALI madhech todun bolate,
ANJALI
AAPAN POLICE STATIONLA JAUYAT…
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15 INT.POLICE STATION- DAY
ANIL BOLAYCH THAMBTO, ANJALI CHYA DOLYAT PANI AAHE, P.I., Anil chya samor panyacha glass thewto, P.I. samor Constable la bolawun ghetto,
P.I.TOPE
SANE, EEKADE YA…
ANIL kade walun
P.I.TOPE
TUMHI GHARI JA, SANE WIRELESS
VAR KON AAHE? TYALA PATHWA…
(ANIL AANI ANJALI LA SAMBODHUN)
TUMHI JA…
ANJALI
PRATIK LA KAHI…
P.I.TOPE
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KALAJI KARU NAKA, TUMHI JA…
SANE , Anil aani Anjali la gheun jato.
16. EXT.PUNE CITY CROWDED ROAD NOON
Aajoba Pratikcha hat ghatt pakdun baslele aahet… Dole lambvar rowlele… Pratik aswasth pane eekade tikade baghtoy. Dokyavar unhachya ashayya jhala. Aaju-Bajula manasanchi prchand gardi. Aajoba Pratik cha haat ghatt dharun gardit tasech dhimmpane ubhe, yenarya-janarya manasana tyancha adthala hotoy…
Pratik halu halu tyana khechat gardichya baher aanun eka jhada-khali basavto, aadhi te taiyaar nahit. Mag swata basun tyana halu halu khali khechto. Aajoba bastat. Pratik la tahan lagleli aahe, to Panyach pouch viknarya manasala hat karto, khishatum paise kadhun tyala deto, aani ek pouch gheto, aani Aajobana eka hatane pouch fodun pani pajato. Aajoba halu halu pani peetat, kahi pani tyanchya shirtvar oghalala jata… Pratik aajobanchya chehrya varun hatrumal firavto. Haluwar pane tyancha hat aaplya hatatun sodavto aani, tyancha haat tyanchyach hatavar thewun deto.
Aajoba aaplya davya hatachya mangatavar ujva haat thewtat. Pratik haluch uthato aani bajuchya pan tapari walya kade jaun khishatun kagadachi chitori varcha patta vicharto. To pan taparivala manenech nahi mhanto… Pratik tyala paper cha tukda dakhawto. Pantapariwala to tukda hatat gheun vachaycha prayatna karto,
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17.INT GHADGE’S HOUSE- NOON
Anil gharat aata police constable sobat aahe, Anjali khinna pane kopryat basali aahe,
Anil la constable vicharto,
CONSTABLE
PAPERAT JAHIRAT DYAYCHI KA?
ANIL
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NAHI, GARAJ NAHI TYACHI…
Anjali fankaryane uthateaani mhante,
ANJALI
KA? KA NAHI DYAYCHI? SAGLYA JAGALA
KALU DE KI HYANCHYA VEDYA BAAPANE
MAJHYA PORALA PALWUN NELA TE…
CONSTABLE
ME HOTLINE VAR AAS-PASSCHYA
SHAHRANSHI BOLUN GHETAY,
TE KALAWTILACH…
Anil , anjali kade baghto aani maan valvun parat phone var number dial karu legato.
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18.EXT CROWDED STREETS OF PUNE- NOON
Pratik aata rastyachya dusrya bajula aala aahe to ekala patta vicharto, kagad dakhvun,
To manus
MANUS
BALA, TULA RASTYACHYA TYA
BAJUNE JAWA LAGEL, TITHUN RICKSHA GHE…
Pratik tyala “ THANK YOU, KAKA”, mhanun nighto, aani parat aajoban kade yayla nighto…
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Tya jhada jawal aalyavar tyala tithe aajoba disat nahit. To eekade tikade pahato, Aajoba disat nahit.
To pan tapari valya kade parat jato,
PRATIK
AHO, ITHE BASLELE MAJHE
AAJOBA KUTHE GELE?
Hya prashnala uttar dusrach manoos deto, malkat kapade aani kes dadhi wadhlela, Gardulya disnara Manoos, Pratik kade aani tyachya galyatalya chain kade rokhun baghto, aani mhanto,
GARDULYA
BALA, TUJHE AAJOBA KUTHE GELE AAHET,
TE MALA MAHIT AAHE, CHAL MEE TULA DAKHAWTO…CHAL …
Sambhanit dhoka janun Pratik mage sarakto aani chalu legato…
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19.INT GHADGE’S HOUSE- NOON
Anjali gharachya darabaher waat pahat basali aahe, Anil car gheun gharat yeto… Anjali dhawat jaun Anil la vicharte,
ANJALI
PRATIK MILALA KA ?
Anil gadi lock karun dusrya dishela baghato.
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20. EXT.PUNE STREETS- NOON
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Aajoba rastyachya Madhya bhagi ekate ubhe aahet. Dutarfa wahane jorat jaat aahet. Loka rasta cross karat aahet. Aajobanchya bajune ek wahan jorat pressure horn wajvat susat vegat nighun jata. Aani gelyavar oradta,
BIKER
AE THERDYA HO BAJULA!
Gadyanche karna-karkassha horn wajtayat, aajoba tasech ubhe.
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21.EXT PRATIK Streets NOON
Pratik aata vegat chaltoy, aata rasta paar karnyachya prayatnat aahe, pan vahane jorat jatayat, Pratik traffic madhe shirto… Aani palu legato, wahane chukwat.
Pratik divider cross karun khali rastyavar yenar toch samorun ek two-wheeler tyachya angavar yete, pratik ghabrun aa-wasun ubha rahato, jorat aawaj hoto…
To wahan-chalak kar-kachun break lawato, aani Pratik la baghto, aani maan modun nighun Jato.
Aata pratik aawaj jhalyachya dishene pahu legato, tar eka thikani gardi jama jhalaych tyala disata, to tya gardichya jawal jato, aani vicharto,
PRATIK
KAKA, KAY JHALAY HO?
MANOOS-2
ARRE MHATARA GADI KHALI AALA?
Pratik aat gardit shirato, tar ek mhatara cycle varun khali padlyach tyala disata. Pratik chya jeevat jeev ueto. TO garditun baher nighto , rastyachya virrudh dishela jau legato, tyala aajoba rastyachya madhe ubhe aslele distat, aanandane to palat Aaajoban kade jau legato, aajoban jawal to yenar eetkyat tyachya
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payala khetun ek 2-wheeller chake khrwadat yeun thambte, to manus dokya varch helmet kadhun Pratik la baghto, ha GOPAL aahe,
GOPAL
ARRE, ITHE PUNYAT KAY
KARTAY TUMHI DOGHE ?
PRATIK
AAMHALA YA PATTYAVAR NE, GOPU KAKA…
GOPAL
BARR NETO, PAN EK GOSHTA,
GHARI MAHIT AAHE KA ,
TU AANI AAJOBA PUNYALA
AALA AAHAT TE?
Pratik maan nakararthi halawto.
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22. INT HOSPITAL AFTERNOON
Hospital madhe aata Dr. patankar, Anjali, Anil, Pratik aani Aajoba aahet, nurse Aajobanchya taste ghetey,
DR. PATANKAR
ALZEIMER CHI PRIMARY LAKSHANE AAHET, YAAT MANOOS EETARANA
VEDA VATU LAGATO…
MHANJE KEE TO TYACHYA LAHANPANAT
GHADLELYA GOSHTI AATHWU LAGATO,
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MHANJE AAI-BHAU- BAHIN YANCHYA
BADDLACHYA AATHWANIBADDAL TO KRUTI
KARU LAGATO, AANI TYAT TYACH WAGANA
LAHAN MULASARKHA HOTA, AGDI NIRAGAS,
AANI HO YAAT MANASALA KAHIHI AATHWAT
NASATA, MHANJE TYALA BHUK LAGLIYE,
HE SUDDHA AATHWAT NAHI !
MEE KAHI TEST KELYAT, LAWKARCH
PUDHCHYA GOSHTI SANGEN. OK,
AANI HO TUMCHYA SOBAT MAGHASHI
POLICE KA AALE HOTE?
ANYTHING SERIOUS ?
Anil kahi uttar denar toch Anjali uttar dete.
ANJALI
NAHI, KAHI NAHI ASACH,
MITRA AAHET YANCHE
DR.PATANKAR
AANI HO, GOD AAHE TUMCHA CHOKRA,
AALYA AALYA TYANE SAGALA
SANGITLA VYAVASTHIT AAJOBANA
KAY TRAS HOTOY TE.
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AANI MEE VICHARLA KI
AAI-BABA KUTHE AAHET TUJHE,
TAR MHANALA KI MAGUN YET AAHET.
Anil aani Anjali, Pratik kade pahtat… Pratik tyanchya kade pahun halkas hasto.
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23.INT GHADGE’S HOUSE NIGHT
Jewanachya table bhowati, Anil, Paratik, aani aajoba baslele aahet. Samor pan wadhleli aahet. Aajoba nehamichyach mudret, Anil Pratikla vicharto,
ANIL
TULA JAYALA PAISE AANI
HYA DOCTORANCHA PATTA
KUTHE MILALA?
PRATIK
TUMHI JENVHA HOSPITAL LA GELAT
TENVHA MEE TUMCHYA PAKITATUN PAISE GHETLE…
ANIL
AANI PATTA?
PRATIK
PAPERATUN…
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Anjali polya aanun samor thewate aani Pratik la vicharte,
ANJALI
AANI PUNYALA KASA JAYACH
HE KUTHUN SHIKLAT TUMHI?
PRATIK
TYAT KAY AEWADH MOTHA,
BUS-STAND VAR GELYAVAR
SAGLYA GADYA PUNYALACH JATAT…
Sagalech hasu lagtat, te pahun Aajoba Var pahtat, Aani Anjali la pahun tee vadhat asnarya hatala dhartat, achanak kahi kshanasathi watavaran stabdha hota, pan Anjali haluwar pane hat sodawun ghete aani tyana ghas bharwate…
Anil, Pratik Anjali kade baghtat,
ANJALI
BAGHTAY KAY?
JEWA PATAPAT,
Aajoba haluwar pane ghas chaghalat aahet…
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