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1 – THE RUMINATING GALAXY
2 - THE ENDURING METAPHOR
2 – CELESTIAL COMMODITIES
3 – EXPLORATORY CONSENT
4 – PLANETARY PERSPECTIVES
5 – INTERSTELLAR MINDS
THE RUMINATING GALAXY
The Secret Place Up There
A quiet space, our secret place
Up here beyond the city
Beyond the clouds
Beyond the sky
We shoot across the stars
and dance beneath the milk light of the moon.
Your hair, shimmering with star dust and the iridescent sparkle in your eyes setting my heart aflame
And at this moment the sun sits miles away, jealous of that smile upon your face.
You’re glowing like you never have before
Like you never have when you were down there
On earth
Where your eyes fall dull and the warmth of your embrace doesn’t feel the same,
where your smile is forced to the point where it stretches the corners of your lips so that it hurts
I know you don’t want that
So, stay
Up here
Where you don’t have to be trapped
Where those angelic wings of yours no longer have to stay withered and weak behind the bars of society
I’ll let you fly free
To explore the stars and slide down the milky way
To draw new constellations and venture across the solar system
I know you’d love that
So please stay
Stay up here and never go down again
Stay with me and stay close
Don’t run too far or you might let go.
Let go and you’ll drift.
And once you drift, I won’t be there.
It will be too late
not even the hands reaching out from earth could save you then.
It’ll get cold
It’ll get dark
The comfort of your hand in mine will no longer be in reach
Your eyes will freeze like glass and the flame burning in your chest will start to die.
It will no longer be our place to share.
Artistic Statement
The poem I have written depicts space as an escape from reality, a fantasy land where beings alike can be free from all stress, hate and discrimination. A mysterious and exciting place to be explored where there are no limits to your curiosity. It depicts the distance between the moon and the Earth’s atmosphere and unravels the emotions and thoughts of a person who longs to set another free. It explores the thought of ‘is what you want what you need?’ and if it is beware of what will come.
Mars by Isabella Chen
Translucent water, muddy gutter.
Irrelevant settlement, grubby jumper.
This is my planet, this is my home.
A green and blue palette,
A big and round planet.
If only I could go to Mars.
Clouds of thunder, showering rain.
Nowhere to shelter, passing trains.
Hiding my tears, falling like rain.
Growling stomach, growing pain.
If only I could go to Mars.
I cry and weep.
I try and seek.
I beg and plead.
I starve and sleep.
If only I could go to Mars.
Bones gone brittle,
Teeth gone yellow,
Limbs so little,
Never will giggle.
If only I could go to Mars.
I trip and fall.
I run and call.
I look so small.
They stand so tall.
If only I could go to Mars.
Up there in the sky,
Buried in the stars,
A place called mars,
Is calling my heart.
If only I could go to Mars.
I will sleep in blankets,
And enjoy the banquets.
Where I will inhabit,
And play like rabbits.
I’m ready for Mars.
No longer freezing,
No longer starving.
I’m now leaving,
I’m finally departing.
That place I’ve been dreaming.
At last, I’m coming.
Mars, they say, it’s really something.
On the empty street,
My body sinks.
The wind is whistling,
The sky is singing.
The stars are sparkling.
Mars is calling.
I’m leaving for Mars.
ARTISTIC STATEMENT
My poem mainly conveys the theme of poverty, however, also focusing on homelessness and hunger. It is inspired by an image, displaying a person staring into a starry night, alone. The poem compares life on Earth and Mars from the perspectives of a homeless person, living in poverty, who desires life on Mars. This image shows the silhouette of a person, staring longingly up into a very starry night. It can be interpreted as a person being lonely, as he is standing all alone under a big surrounding that engulfs him. Being too small compared to their surroundings inspired me to write the poem about being too small in society, unable to fit in and being looked down on.
moonchild.
Sometimes
I feel like I am the rabbit on the moon
with only artificial satellites to keep me company.
Like I am a comparatively small lone comet
shooting past all the other brighter stars.
Like I am floating past galaxies, watching from afar
as the humans party down on Earth.
Am I the only one who feels like this?
Sometimes
I wonder if I’m from the moon.
An alien,
A different species,
Not human.
Maybe that’d be easier to accept.
After all, if I was from the moon,
Then at least I would have a valid reason
As to why I feel so different from everyone else.
Sometimes
I watch helplessly
as the universe swallows me whole
And the infinite number of stars
glitter above my head like sequins
And the Milky Way weaves throughout the sky
And in the deep vastness of the night
I long for my home on the moon.
Here on Earth,
They say that difference is celebrated.
That you are you, and you are unique.
And yet I am here,
An outcast,
For being myself.
Everyone here feels too foreign,
Too fake,
Too flawless.
And I can’t help but wonder,
‘Are people really living in a different world from me?’
Artistic Statement
My poem is a piece of writing about feeling alienated or different in modern-day society. It was inspired by a drawing of a lone rabbit on the moon, which to me symbolises loneliness and difference. I want my audience to relate to the feeling of indifference/loneliness which are so prominent in our world today. Although things such as social media are platforms which are meant to connect people, it very often does the opposite. People may look at pictures other people post and wonder why they cannot be as happy/talented/ rich/beautiful as other people, and they may feel alone. Why is everyone else so happy and perfect? The goal of my poem is for people to realise that almost everyone feels this way, what they are feeling is (unfortunately) fairly common/normal, and they are not alone.
The Bottle Stumbling across a vast galaxy Is a letter written on alien tapestry Lovingly it was slipped inside a glass bottle So to not let the paper mottle Launched from a sidereal quay Sails the bottle to meet the addressee A fearsome beauty is the universe The bottomless sea in which the vessel must traverse Hanging around on a lonely planet Of swirling sand and cold granite Stands a boy, who did not hold great trust That the bottle would reach his world of dust The distant girl who had promised him That her letter would find the boy at the world’s rim Was never the sort to be fully honest And so he worried that it was an empty promise When the boy’s sky had turned its back on the sun The boy saw that the bottle had finally come With suppressed eagerness he withdrew the message But in dismay he found an untranslatable passage The boy could not understand her words so unknown And suddenly the distance between them made him feel so alone He thought of his alien friend And the truthful words of love he longed to send As the rift between the two widened They stopped hoping to see another bottle on horizon If only the boy ever knew She had written “I love you”
Artistic Statement My poem, “The Bottle”, tells the story of a girl and boy who live at separate ends of the universe. While in the poem they are separated and aren’t even the same type of being, they still have knowledge of each other and long to communicate. But the distance between them, both physical, culturally and emotionally prevents this. I believe this topic fits the theme of space, as I feel that space can be beautiful, interesting, fearsome or dangerous depending on who is asked. Just like love and friendship can be those things. My poem was inspired by a picture from the NASA Archives “Great Observations Unique Views of the Milky Way”, as well as the Beatles song “Across the Universe” which was sent into deep space as a message, just like the bottle. The message of the poem could be to not let personal relationships crumble and to take chances even if it seems impossible. This message is demonstrated through the structure of the poem, as seen in actions of the girl and the boy, who let their love dwindle until only regret was left. Each paragraph of the poem shows the effects of space and distance on the two. The bottle’s journey symbolises the efforts made to reach out to people, and to break out of a comfort zone and to communicate with someone. My poem is a very personal one, as I used it as an attempt to get over the loss of losing many friendships this year – many of those losses the result of miscommunication and fear. I have found that even some of my deepest and strangest fears have snuck their way into this poem. I see my poem as a message to others and myself - that you shouldn’t give up on the things you love.
I was so intrigued by the beauty of your space
And so, I came into yours and you came into mine
In this cyberspace, your ineffable personality, it shined
And I knew that you would be someone
who would eventually become my number one.
“What time is it for you right now? I don’t want to
wake you up by texting you in the middle of the night,”
I asked this because I wanted to get close to you, everything felt so right
And to my surprise, you replied with the same number that was on top of my screen
How glad I was to find out that I can text you at any time, I was keen
~4617 kilometers between us,
but that distance means nothing, for we still spend hours and hours together;
texting each other back and forth, you were slowly becoming my sister
and, I, also slowly became yours. We somehow became inseparable
Us eventually meeting is something inevitable.
We don’t share the same ethnicity, background, and nor do we share the same age,
but all these differences don’t mean anything, for we share the same dream.
Day and night, we talk about it – let’s make the ultimate dream team,
I know how hard we both work towards it,
So, let’s work even harder and never quit.
Let’s close the distance and meet one day, at that place, where,
we’re both closer to achieving what we’ve dreamt of for the past years,
but I promise it’ll be all worth it when we hear the crowd cheer
For us, who are meant for each other,
are also meant to shine like the stars out there. Let’s be together forever.
Artistic Statement
December 12, 2017 was the date I started talking to one of my best friends, hence the title of my
poem. My poem tells the story of our friendship – how we started talking, what we bonded over
and our promises. The theme I tried to convey in [December 12, 2017] is friendship. I simply
wanted to write a poem about our friendship to express my gratitude for her and tell her how
much I appreciate her.
What you take
She is a weed
To most she is just a pest, an annoyance,
Just another thing to look down on, spit on, step on
Trying to convince herself
She is allowed to take up space
Is like trying to win a poker game
without an ace
He is a peach tree
His pinkish yellow fruit hanging attractively from the branches
His spotless leaves and vibrant colours thanks to the countless coats of pesticides and poisons sprayed over him
In every way, shape and form he seems
Better
For he is tall with green leaves and bright, juicy fruit
Whereas she is just
Fruitless,
Believes she is so useless,
Truthfully rootless,
To herself and herself only she is
ruthless
He seemed so deserving
Of the space he took up
Proud of the way his limbs were incurving
And all the people admiring his beauty, just observing
How could she ever
Live up to something so
Unnerving
But, overtime she comes to see
How fake an individual portrayed as great can truly be
His façade wears off
The chemicals for plants that killed the ants that gave him such a nice appearance
Had finally washed away
So, those were his true colours
She watched him wilt in the harsh winter air
rotting away from inside out
She, however, lived on
As she is a weed
They can thrive everywhere in any place
And from this she takes away, that she takes space
Artistic Statement
My poem is about the space people take up and their mentality behind it. It explores two people (both represented as plants) and their mindsets regarding their self-worth. This poem wasn’t necessarily inspired by an image, however, after browsing the Nasa Archives I found an image that somewhat embodies the main characters of the poem. Many people struggle with realising their own self-worth, and through this text, I hope that it can maybe make readers more confident in themselves and realise what they’re really capable of. What they can also take away from my poem is that the people you look up to are not always who you think they are, and you shouldn’t compare your life to their highlight reel.
THE ENDURING METAPHOR
'Singularity' by anonymous (front cover illustrator)
I once was a planet vibrant and fiery,
but now the eternal void consumes my consciousness,
as the star clusters, which once burned so bright in my mind, dim,
Dim, until only shattered fragments of brilliance remain scattered throughout the void.
I once was a planet vibrant and fiery.
I stood my ground.
I was Venus, the very ground scorched beneath my feet, my power,
And my speed so impressive that Earth always trailed 140 days behind.
But people don't care for speed.
I once was a planet vibrant and fiery.
But I'm tired now.
Too tired to shine, too weak to travel.
The void consumes me.
I don't fight.
Instead I accept this prison of darkness.
I am no more a planet. Not vibrant.
Not fiery.
Through my own singularity I now look back at those golden glimmers of light, once bright, and now
burnt out.
The Space Between Us
If you were the Earth and they were the Moon,
then I would fly a rocket through the atmosphere
and settle on a foreign lump of rock
far, far away from your imperfections
Everything we’ve ever known has only existed on the big blue planet,
you were the only thing I ever knew.
Each country, so special,
so diverse, so perfect.
From Earth I could see the stars, glistening,
the faint outline of the moon, barely there.
Your starry eyes, getting lost in them, each glimmer a new adventure
The winding rivers and daunting jungles,
each twist and turn, a new surprise
The more time I spend with you, new surprises
the faint outline of the moon, slowly appearing.
Smoke filling the air, destroying my lungs,
Ice caps melting, animals dying.
A friendship melting, dying
Suddenly, not so perfect anymore
The faint outline of the moon, solidifies.
Governments around the world, corrupt, lying
the truth exposed
Feeling worthless and underappreciated in your presence
The faint outline of the moon is not faint anymore, it is full
Reflecting its light upon the Earth, upon me
In this wide universe that we live in, we were placed upon earth
some’s deepest desire to go to the moon
some too scared to face the result it brings
Until now, I never wanted to explore the infinite space between us
To explore other planets, to explore the moon
But its light reflects upon the Earth, highlighting your flaws
When things aren’t going right,
when the world around you is falling apart,
my first instinct would be to escape.
To pack my bags and leave the shattered glass, that is your presence
cutting me, bruising me.
The moons light reflects upon the Earth, showing me that this isn’t what I want anymore
But no matter how hard I try, I can’t shake you off,
Always there, you’re always… there
Trying to defy your gravity is a struggle, Earth
It’s a struggle
But one thing you taught me is to not give in to the struggle and to rise above it
So, I did
I’m a raging rocket, about to take flight
5
4
3
2
1
blast off…
Bursting through the atmosphere, leaving my past behind me
no regrets
The space between us, growing, growing, growing
Dread and fear slips off my shoulders,
advancing through the stars,
space debris floating around me
Letting go of everything, my everything
My used to be everything, you
The moon has its imperfections,
But so does the earth
But the thing that makes the moon so imperfectly perfect
Is that they’re imperfections make them who they are
They don’t hide them, or pretend to be someone they’re not
They don’t boast about their best qualities but hide their worst
The moon may seem insignificant or small at times
They may seem a bit rough around the edges at times
But they’re there for you even when the sun don’t shine,
They light up your way even if you’re scared of the dark
So if you ask me,
Do I want to go to the moon?
then I would fly a rocket through the atmosphere
and settle on a foreign lump of rock
far, far away from you, the Earth and your imperfections.
The view is better here anyways.
Artistic Statement
My poem ‘The Space Between Us’ incorporates physical space as well as metaphorical space and the space between people. Here I chose to personify the moon but also use factual information somewhat factual information to describe the qualities of this particular ‘person’. I used repetition to show that the ‘moon’/the person representing the moon, is becoming more present in my life than the Earth and I’m choosing to focus on the moon over the Earth.
Another Perspective
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Every night gazing at the deep black sky a million stars mimicking the light of the moon
Beaming down on the world from sunrise till noon
The warmth radiated by the sun felt infinite as the starts shared their secrets
Floating through the Milky Way in their unique orbits they were never meant to meet
And they never have
An intergalactic marvel that can be witnessed by anyone within the grasps of the
constellations
Below the might of these extravagant skies lies an accretive product of the solar nebula….
Earth
4
Hearts with sincerity have no popularity
Where there’s twists and tricks that have no authenticity
But solidarity can spark creativity
And within that space you are able to fulfil your heart’s desires
Disguise our barbarity temporarily
Treat ourselves like celebrities cause we’re losing that sense of security
Every way we turn it’s like authorities’ intensities storming with conspiracies
Mistaking my longevity, I wish I had the eternity
To cleanse the impurity within me eating away at my soul
Empathy towards my enemies no jealousy is the remedy
Unfamiliarity’s within the minority ripping through them terribly
Where similarities have priorities involuntarily
Where the majority fills the integrity with much dramatic irony
How much it changes momentarily
3
The source of our existence destined to have persistence
For the people of the world can fight through many things
Our resilience leads us on the right track with golden wings
The hope for humanity is never lost
never found
but embedded into reality
A fine circuitry that even humans disbelieve but we will always interweave
Let’s think about this for a moment….
Establishing connections to the ones without perfections
Dedicating our lives to the ones who need protection
The ones who don’t feel affection and are warped in a world of public subjection
These people feel pain, surging through their veins like microinjections
The ones who work the most but are not even seen in retrospections
The true warriors of the world who have just dreamed of a stable life
But its all for a price and for some of us the price is too high
Then we fade into the past like we were never there
Thrown around by the hands of common pedestrians
Shredded into oblivion
2
Staying hopeful is not always possible
Especially when your silver lining is redlining your mistakes
Mental breakdowns causing tremors as large as earthquakes
You don’t know what you mind makes
An environment with no filters that hits you like splinters
Stabbing deep through weak bones, your weak zones
Melting away at your inner unknowns
Times where thoughts circulate like cyclones
When you’re all alone
1
The world needs to work collectively to increase our integrity
Cause we’ll take some hits along the way,
but the gunshots will not lead us astray
A world where overpay will just run away
Where an economic recession won’t cause any clinical depression
We can’t always be perfective
Or reach our objective
Or inventive
But we can look at things a different way
All it takes is just another perspective.
……
ARTISTIC STATEMENT
The poem that I have created is called Another Perspective. I spent most of my childhood years in India, I had quite a clear sense of the problems in my society. There were people on the streets, many with disabilities or injuries begging for money and food. I would constantly ask my parents in the public if we could give some money to poor, even though my wishes could be fulfilled I was determined to make even a small change to this continuum of ignorance. After moving to Australia my ambitions remained the same, I would always think of what would happen to my family if we were in these circumstances. The poem I wrote was a great way for me to express my feelings and to hopefully inspire others to make a change. Firstly, the constant theme of a rocket
launch adds a lot of tension and character to the poem. It also leads a way that humanity can move on and extend its reach to the stars. It is an indirect symbol of hope and that there is nothing that is impossible. At the end of the poem the reader is left to think what is going to happen next, as in reality they are the people who can make a change.
CELESTIAL COMMODITIES
Parachute by Merek, Callum, Marcus and Divyang The orange hatch pulled away…
Apollo 16 had done its job; we’d made it to re-entry…
It’s all on me now
The wind rushes all over, setting me free
I split into three and all I see is the deep, blue, Atlantic sea
I caught the wind, all eyes were on me
My dream was no longer fantasy,
I was in the lime-light, the masterpiece
High-speed winds tearing through my sheets
I was on fire
Apollo now saved, from a situation so dire.
But what I feared came true,
“Mission’s over, no one cares about you”
I was just some ragged up piece of crap,
I had fallen for my own trap,
I craved it like an addiction,
I wanted it back,
I needed it. The fame.
A range of emotions rushed through.
I let them all queue
I wanted to see their point of view,
First was jealousy,
Why does the shuttle get the credit for this adversity?
I was the shadow to its light,
Without me, 16 couldn’t have even put up a fight,
The atmosphere would have engulfed it whole,
Thrown it into the ocean like a high-speed bowling ball
I saved Apollo from certain death
I did it, it was me,
Yet 16 gets all the glory
Next in the line was downpour of sadness,
All of these blues filling my atlas,
Was I really worth nothing to them?
Am I really as worthless as Yr. 9 STEM (joke)?
Deep blue no longer represented the sea,
It was my tears; it was the new me,
I saved Apollo from certain death
I did it, it was me,
Yet 16 gets all the glory
Last of the significant emotions was hope,
It was the last thread of my war-torn rope,
The burning stars above represented this emotion,
I hope someone will notice me and cure this poisonous potion,
I hope someone will notice that it was me who saved Apollo from expiry
I deserve some of the glory.
If anyone does notice me in all of this fuss,
I think they definitely deserve an A+.
Artistic Statement
The inspiration for this poem came from when we visited the NASA exhibit at the Queensland Museum. When we saw one of Apollo 16’s damaged parachutes we got inspired to write our poem about under appreciation from the perspective of that parachute. Our poem explores the relatable feeling of doing something and getting no credit for it.
Space Shuttle Challenger
28.01.1986 By Alex Hassall
TEN million wait-filled moments lead to these ten final seconds
They brave the frigid, frosty dawn
Anticipation keeps them warm
The perfectly painted blue sky heralds a wondrous day
An historic day
It will be
A perfect day
NINE billion lenses glued to this point
This moment in time
Flash-flash
Snap-snap
Blink-blink
They are cameras and eyes
Focusing, they capture hope and hopes
Fear and fears
They see bravery and the brave
The ones inside and their loved ones out
SEVEN on board
They walk so tall
Joyous smiles that say it all
Hello they cry
And farewell they wave
So soon, too soon
Oblivious to their final goodbye
THREE then two
TWO parents each
For each of the seven
Supporting
Guiding
They’ve handed over the controls this day
Their ship sailed to these shores turns to ONE
That will soar to
Through
Beyond the stars
As ONE we cheer
Our roaring echoes and they lift
Off they go
Soaring
Blasting
A trail of smoke and fire left in its wake
Tension rising
Breathing halted
Hearts exploding
Willing them there and back again
SEVENTY-ONE ticks of the hand
Soaring, roaring
SEVENTY-TWO
Flying, shooting
Stars welcoming
SEVENTY-THREE
Blasting off, blasting away
And—
Blasting… apart?
ONE planet witnessing a whole new perspective
Tension rising
Breathing halted
Hopes exploding
Debris raining down
Flash-flash
Snap-snap
Blink-blink
Lenses not comprehending
They are cameras and eyes
Knowing not what they’re seeing
SEVEN they were
In an instant no more
Countless weight-filled shoulders
Heavy with fears and fear coming to life
Loved ones willing them home
They’ll need to be brave
This moment in time
Smoke and fire paint the sky
The perfectly ruined blue heralds a catastrophic day
An historic day
It was
An imperfect day
Artistic Statement
My poem is based off the Space Shuttle Challenger disaster that occurred on January 28, 1986. 73 seconds after take-off, one of the rocket boosters came loose and the shuttle exploded, killing all 7 on board; 5 astronauts, a payload specialist and a high school teacher. I simply wanted to write a poem about the Challenger disaster in 1986. I am fascinated by the fact nobody was expecting or predicting this event to occur, and nobody was prepared for it. Also, members of the public were on board that ship and their friends, family and students were watching, either on TV or at the launch site. It was a tragic accident and my poem conveys this through its anticipating and suspenseful beginning right up to the explosion and the grieving aftermath when everybody was trying to comprehend what had just happened.
Ah, Space
Ah space so big, so small
I have no idea what you are at all
Are you there for God
I do not know
Are you there for NASA
To put on a show
I have all the questions
But answers naught
And all the possibilities
And future sought
Time, space and souls
They are entwined
Fates and hopes
Are in my mind
But most importantly
If I could travel from here to there
What on earth would I wear
Artistic Statement
My poem is called Ah, Space and the image that inspired it is a photo of the astronaut
Edward H. White II in 1965. It is meant to highlight the fact that we know so little about
space. It is a massive thing with so many phenomenon’s and different objects and humans
have been researching it for years and yet we still have such a limited amount of answers.
My poem is supposed to ask questions simplify the complexity of space in a fun and comedic
way. For example, the part where it says “I have no idea what you are at all… I have all the
questions but, answers naught.” This tells us that there are so many theories and so many
things that space could be, people dedicate their lives to finding the answers but still barely
a hint of why it is there or what it does. The purpose of the poem is to try and simplify our
relationship with space in order to understand it. The point of this poem is to try and
simplify it and highlight the fact that space is complicated, and we don’t know much about it
and we may never know.
First Man by Delvin
May 2 - 6 years old
It was the day
The day where it all began
Tearing away the only thing between me and the mystery item engulfed in the glossy paper
To my surprise, it wasn’t the usual figure of Superman nor Batman
It was something extraordinary
My small mind exploded in delight
I had my own telescope
My love for space had begun
May 2 - 10 years old
I had good dreams at night
Where I got to laugh and sing along with the stars
Where I visited everything
From the moon to even mars
I dreamt of flying in space
Flying without fear
Flying like a bird
It was the only place where nothing could pull me down
May 2 - 14 years old
I wish I could have good dreams again
Where I would be free
With unlimited freedom
My surroundings like hell
Mercy was no more
I must encounter the pain
I wish I could just run
Run anywhere
Anywhere where the purple plums on my face will just vanish
Anywhere where the teachers won’t have blindfolds
My own reflection even dreading on my sight
I wish I could just escape
I wish I could just die
The old telescope cast away in the basement
Laying in despair while staring blankly at the spider webs painting the ceiling
Visitors were no more
Except the pesky rats who took it as their home
July 20 - 39 years old
All the years of training and hardship
My dreams finally coming a reality
My destiny nearly fulfilled
It was time
My first trip to space
in to the thin air
July 21 - 39 years old (3am)
My heart blasting in joy
My body shaking in delight
That young 6-year-old boy
Was now fulfilling his dream
I had defeated everything
Ignoring the hate from others
The walls that were placed in front of me destroyed
The people who tried to stop me forgotten
The people who loved me remembered and treasured
That one night
That one telescope
That one time where it all began
I could already imagine the headlines that would be broadcasted across the world
“Neil Armstrong, First Man on the Moon!
Artistic Statement
I have structured my poem to be in parts. Childhood, teenage and adulthood. For the childhood, I have used the age of 6 because I feel that is an age where were not too young to not understand but we still understand things that go on around us. It is an age where you are still naïve and innocent of basically everything. It is also an age where we start to get a love for something. This includes hobbies, sports and anything in general. We start to explore more about things that we are very curious about at that age. Before the teenage years I have a part of when the person is 10 years old. I feel that 10 years old is one of the best years for a child. An age where your understanding the world and gaining more knowledge on hobbies and etc. The teenage years are years when there are 3 types of students in school. The cool kids, the spectators and the victims. Generally, the cool kids love attention and picking on someone is really easy for them. The victims don’t get a voice and I feel that through this poem, bullying can be spread more. This poem can be spread to even the victims to give them that spark of hope. To know that there are people out there who experienced the same things but still came out on top. My poem also talks about hard work. Being an astronaut is a really difficult job and requires a lot of training. Neil Armstrong worked really hard and came the first man to ever walk on the moon. My poem shows these key messages by using words that resemble the messages. My poem shows that you can overcome bullying and still achieve your dreams. My poem demonstrates that if you really want something, nothing will be able to stop you from getting it. I feel that my poem can be spread to prove and show all audiences that bullying is not okay. Bullying is a huge problem in society and will not be stopped until action is taken. Neil Armstrong is a legend to the world but that doesn’t mean you have to be world known to make you who you are. You can still be that person you want to be by just trying your best and overcoming and ignoring haters. From that one telescope to the first man on the moon; everything has a start and will be finished by the effort you put in.
I am an astronaut
I would be an astronaut
Soaring through space in a rocket ship of my design
Living the dream going to the divine
I would be an astronaut
Loving every moment of living, free from the bonds of gravity
Never having to be frugal or savvy
I would be an astronaut
Oh how I adore them
Their boots, gloves and theorems
I would be an astronaut
Not a worry out of the world
The sails of freedom, unfurled
I would be an astronaut
Stopping for nothing and no-one
Not a bruise, papercut or sore thumb
Now, I am an astronaut
higher than everyone else, yet painfully sober
Even though it’s nearly Oktober
I am an astronaut
I was promised heaven
But all I see is the vast expanse of nothing, 24/7
I am an astronaut
Please don’t admire me
Please don’t go through the torture that I see
I am an astronaut
Still so immature
I guess that’s a reason why I was lured
Into the system
that utterly destroyed my already dying ambition
I am an astronaut
Stranded in the vast unknown of outer space
Knowing never to show my face
I’m trying my hardest to grow up
But I’ve seemed to blow up
I am an astronaut
Trying not to be
Escaping this world was the absolute worst thing for me
But my hand was forced
The job market has absolutely no remorse
I am an astronaut
But soon, maybe I’ll grow out of it
Artistic Statement
This poem is called “I am an astronaut” and there is one main theme behind the concept of it and that is the thought of growing up. This image really inspired me by showing how many Australian role models look so grown up in many photos and depictions of them and alcohol and growth was a major part of the experience. This also connects to how that inspires children to really be in a hurry to grow up, hence the short nature of the poem. The subject matter being the thought of a child growing up in space where space is a metaphor for life on earth.
*This*Life* by Lillian McNaughton
This helmet...
It feels too tight on my head
as I prepare to face the unearthly pressures,
gravity, and atmosphere of this new planet.
This helmet... It keeps me alive,
and yet makes me
feel the
cold loneliness
of death.
As I carry out my missions This bulky space suit...
It must weigh 2 times
my body weight extends my body
3 times its true size, like a gigantic hug.
This bulky space suit... Protects my skin
from the cold whilst also
protecting me from the
warmth and
comfort t
hat comes
From The Touch Of Another. This beautiful world...
that I see from my window
almost glows at night with the polluting lights
of civilisation. This beautiful world...
With swirls of blue seas, silver clouds,
and green lands, they all merge
together to create
ThIs GoRgEoUs PaTcHwOrK QuIlT Of LiFe. This fulfilling mission...
that I have been charged with,
is too search the stars for new life,
for new oppotunities, for new hope.
This fulfilling mission... where I,
and I alone am responsible for
tHe fUtuRe aNd sUrvIvaL of My rAce... This bright sun...
it is still blinding to my well-trained eyes
as I travel faster than a flash of fire,
past our only light source This bright sun...
it burns my core as I travel,
probably too close, on my way
tO neW PLaNetS, nEw hOStS... This dry food...
flavourless like dust, I don't want
to know how it got its nutrients...
Blocking your nose doesn't help.
This dry food...
organised into packets that should last me years,
they line the wall, an
aluminium pinboard,
DisPlAyiNg vARioUs SpECieS oF buTTerFLy. This empty compartment...
that I am confined to has everything I need
to live out my years, alone, unwanted, unacknowledged...
This empty compartment... has everything my body
needs to survive, but it has nothing
to help with the loneliness
that comes with SuCh a tRYiNg EnDeaVOuR. This lonely journey...
I don't remember what I hated
about earth, about my family,
about my life that forced me
to seek out other planets. I don’t remember
The person I was Before the
loneliness Before the
darkness I
don’t remember Love, or
hope I don’t
even remember
MY OWN NAME...
Artistic Statement
The exhibit that inspired this poem was an astronaut’s helmet and other supplies that would’ve been needed during a SPACE mission. My initial approach was quite dark, first exploring why astronauts decide to leave their Earth lives. After this, though I tried, I couldn’t pull away from the idea of an Astronaut slowly losing their mind alone in the vast darkness of space. My poem is supposed to reflect the slow downward spiral of one’s mind, hope, and ambitions during their missions. In my opinion the key message or theme is the effects of the isolation and such of space on Astronauts. This is mostly conveyed through my use of a variety of language features such as repetition and tri-colon as well as the literal downward spiral of the poem’s text. Examples in the text which I am particularly proud of our; in the first section, is use the astronaut’s helmet as both a literal object and a metaphor if one’s contract to space.
PLANETARY CONSENT
T H E B E G I N N I N G O F T H E E N D
It is the beginning of the end
I wander upon my world like a foreigner
Oceans are turned to acid
By the toxic gases that surround them
The air darkens
And the atmosphere chokes
As we swallow the earth’s soul
The once blossoming trees are struggling to breathe
As the term of beauty no longer defines our coral reefs
The birds that once sang have gone to sleep
As the precious wonders from Earth
Are now buried deep
I glare at the bare world that surrounds me
And see fields of heavy, concrete,
Strangling the dirt,
Layering their malevolent surface onto the grounds
A hell to the Earth
Rivers of what used to be filled with life,
Now dumped with hate
And we watch
As they drown in their own bodies
It is the beginning of the end
To cease our world away
A wildfire of hate is spreading
And is slowly taking the sparks of life
The Earth is crying,
But we don’t listen,
Too focused on ourselves
Oblivious to our own burns
Our ignorance has taken over us
And a toxic smoke has slithered into our souls,
Thoughts whirled up and twisted like a hurricane
destroyed all just to prove that we are not the cause
Rather, that this destined to happen
It is the beginning of the end
That we were given a world
And have taken it for granted
That we ignore the desperate sounds
Of the twittering in the air,
Of the once lively flowers,
And blooming blossoms,
No longer visible
Time has taken its toll
And we have left it too late
Forgetting our damage can’t be undone
We all want to make our mark on this planet
But why must we do it like this?
Why must we suffocate the earth
With the hot and heavy air that surrounds us?
It is the beginning of the end
Tonight we watch as the stars fall,
Tomorrow, we feel mars call
As we plead
For another planet to destroy
ARTISTIC STATEMENT
‘The beginning of the end’ is about the large issue of global warming, and how humans are destroying the planet. This idea was inspired by both the real world problem of global warming, but also from a birds eye view image of ice caps slowly melting away into the ocean. This Photograph inspired me as it shows how much ice caps are really melting and how much damage we have actually done to the Earth and the nature that surrounds it. Throughout the poem, the message that we cannot run away from the damage we have done, and move to another planet was
clearly depicted. Additionally, that time is slowly running out and we need to help our earth, not just ignore what is happening around us. The invited reading in this poem is to appeal attention to the prevention of global warming and damaging our planet, and also to create a new perspective, or way of thinking on the author to act for change towards our planet. Our poem ‘It is the beginning of the end’ addresses the straining issue of global warming and our disbelief and ignorance towards it. Our message is to bring awareness to our actions and highlights what will happen if we don’t make a change. In doing so, we also allow the reader to interpret the poem in their own way but assure they too are led to the intended conclusions. The invited reading is to draw attention to the importance of preventing the development of global warming and creating the perspective that will help the reader to act on change. My inspiration was drawn from both the real world and a picture from the NASA archives. The image is part of Earth covered in ice however, due to climate change, the icecaps are starting to melt as our use in fossil fuels increases. As we continue to destroy our planet, the worse it gets as we reach a point where our damage cannot be undone. This will lead to humans looking for other planets to live on and to take resources from. Ultimately, there are only so many planets that can support life in space and if we destroy them all, the hope for any existence is close to none.
THEN YOU LEFT By Daniel and Jack I am the Earth
Your only hope
Your only home
I gave you life
And so much more
Flora, fauna, people and things
They are beautiful,
But in return…
You gave me the black, poisonous smoke
The ticking nuclear timebombs
You took my precious stones,
My rocks, My fuel
My soul.
There was nothing left
You set your sights on a new place
An escape from your mistakes
You couldn’t save me anymore
A countdown was all you had time for
T-3
T-2
T-1
Lift-off
Then you left…
I am the Moon
I am your only hope now
I am your only home now
I kept you alive
And in return,
You gave me what I wanted
Flora, Fauna, People and things
I became a real planet
But in return…
You gave me your hideous factories
Your ticking plastic timebombs
You turned me into a literal dump
You set your sights on a new place
An escape from your mistakes
You couldn’t save me anymore
All you had time for was a countdown
T-3
T-2
T-1
Lift-off
Then you left…
I am Mars
I am your only hope now
I am your only home now
I kept you alive once more
And in return,
You gave me what I wanted
Flora, Fauna, People and things
But, just like before,
You gave me your hideous factories
Your ticking plastic timebombs
You turned me into a literal dump
Like the others before me
Like earth, like moon
You set your sights on a new place
To escape from your past mistakes
You couldn’t save me anymore
All you had time for was a countdown
T-3
T-2
T-1
Lift-off
Then you left…
You land on a new planet
You turn them into the ones before it
Like Earth, like Moon, like Mars, like Jupiter,
like Neptune, like Pluto,
You took off
T-3
T-2
T-1
Lift-off
You left for the last time
There was nowhere to go
All your options exhausted
I was the earth
I was your hope
I was your home
But You’ve given up on me
Destroyed me
All I can do now is slowly die
But don’t ruin the others
They are natural, unruined
Unlike me
Unlike you
Save them.
You,
Sitting there on your comfy chair
Sitting idly by
Whilst the same mistakes are made
Again and again
Waiting for an escape
When will you learn
It doesn’t work.
If you
Do nothing
If you
Sit and watch the world go by
Your world will go by
Space?
It may be your final frontier.
Artistic Statement
Daniel
Our poem, Then You Left, was inspired by the image from the NASA archives. It features a capsule floating through space with the background of Earth. This image portrayed the realities of our exploration in space – in a tiny capsule, leaving the only home we know. It also brings to mind many private space companies seeking to inhabit the moon and even Mars. This poem was inspired by the idea of leaving home, brought into an environmental context. The poem discusses topics of sustainability and environmental awareness in the context of space exploration. It examines how our continued neglect of environmental issues on earth could be reflected on our attitude towards space travel, as an escape from the issues on the existing earth. The poem seeks to invite readers that our exploration of space should not blind us to the current environmental issues on earth and that the inhabitation of new planets can’t be seen as an escape from the environmental harm we have done to Earth – our original home.
Jack
My poem was written in partnership with Daniel Ho and is titled “Then You Left”. It was inspired by SpaceX’s plant to setup a permanent base on Mars by 2024 and NASA’s plan to settle on the moon also in 2024. Both of these plans point to a future without the Earth. However, we all known that living away from the Earth permanently won’t be anything like the life we know and love today. The poem discusses the topics of life beyond the earth, pollution and global warming. Through the invited reading of our poem we encourage readers to contemplate what life would be like without the Earth, and take more care of the only thing known to be capable of keeping us alive. We want more money to be spent saving what we have, not looking for a replacement that probably doesn’t exist. Our poem was also inspired by the following image which is from the NASA space archives. It pictures a small space shuttle in the foreground and the Earth in the background. This is one of two images we tried to portray and contrast in the last stanzas of the poem - The last humans in existence crammed into a tiny spacecraft looking down on the earth wanting to turn back time, and save what we had, not look for a replacement that probably doesn’t exist; And the reader, sitting in their comfy chair waiting for someone else to take action and save their world, encouraging them to think about their actions and how they affect the future of the human race.
PLANETARY PERSPECTIVES
Pluto
By Tony Nguyen
Pluto rolled out of bed
It was cold
She was supposed to be looking forward to the day ahead
But instead
She just felt dead inside
Pluto gazed at the other planets playing outside and cried
For she had tried to be like them
Lied in order to be like them
But they still felt unsatisfied at Pluto and said that she was too small to play with them
She was appalled and knew that above all
That she could never be like the other planets
Never good enough according to their prejudicial opinions
Never cool enough to hang out with superficial Jupiter and her 79 moon minions
Too miniscule to belong in their unofficial dominion
She was ridiculed because while the other planets were hot, she was -223 degrees…
School was hell for Pluto
She was as small as a molecule
There was an unofficial rule not to talk to her
It made her feel abysmal
Every insult was like an asteroid chipping away at her soul
Pluto was sucked into a black hole of depression
There was no question that she was too focused on perfection
And making a good impression, living in fear of rejection
Has an obsession with seeking attention
Oppressed by her parents who weren’t easily impressed
Waking up depressed every morning, repressed
Stressed about her follower count on In-star-gram
So she lived in isolation and frustration, contemplating her existence
Believing that no one would provide her assistance
Stuck in one location, keeping a distance
Because while the Sun was a superstar
Pluto was just… bizarre
The bar was set too high and she would never be quite on par with Mars
Never catch up to the competition
She made a decision that her ambitions were impossible to achieve because of her condition…
One afternoon, Jupiter and her moons
Showed up at Pluto’s door
She had never been here before
Pluto silently swore - thought she was done for
Jupiter ignored the ugly emo décor and waltzed indoors
And said,
“You’re out of orbit,
If you think you’re cool enough to hang with us you’re out of it
When you said I was hotter than Uranus I doubted it
Your feelings towards us are counterfeit
Earth has decided you’ve got no worth
And in other words,
You’re
Not a planet anymore….”
Artistic Statement
My poem is called “Pluto”, and it is technically about the dwarf planet Pluto, but is actually a metaphor to represent a small girl getting bullied by her classmates. The main themes include loneliness, bullying and depression, felt by Pluto as she is ignored by the other planets and is an outcast in their solar system, because she’s too weird and too small to play with them. The image chosen for this poem is titled “Jupiter” and is from the NASA Image Archives – this was edited into the final image at the end of the poem. Pluto’s loneliness is represented by her distance away from other planets, and the fact that she is “out of orbit.” At the end of the poem, Jupiter (which is represented as the popular kid/bully because of its physical size, being the largest planet in our solar system) kicks Pluto out from the “group” – which is the group of planets orbiting around the Sun, because she is too small to be a planet. This reflects real life, where in 2006, Pluto was demoted to a dwarf planet.
A Fraction of Time by Katrina Wang
Human perspective:
An average human lifespan lasts,
Just one sixteenth of a cosmic second.
For the future, the present, the past,
All thoughts and deeds will be reckoned.
Confusing matters of time and space,
This world is where we stand upon.
For it is this earth, this planet’s embrace,
Where we will run a marathon.
One sixteenth of a cosmic second,
So short, so insignificant.
On the front lines with our weapons,
We are all the same, yet still so different
We are just little glow-worms stuck,
To the ceiling of a Tasmanian cave.
We exist and conquer with endless luck,
But this earth is what we must save.
We are just grains of rice squished,
Into a sushi of warm crispy prawn.
Devoured in a matter of minutes,
And by then, we are gone.
We are just drops of water crashing,
Onto the sand-covered beach.
Suddenly, something is flashing,
And now, we are out of reach.
We are just miniscule ants struggling,
To provide the queen the daily kill.
And when we are left with nothing,
Everything, everything is still.
Earth’s perspective:
These people, these humans,
They constantly demand me to grow.
Only worth a fraction of a cosmic second,
And they should be able to know:
To have gratitude and cherish,
What a world they’ve been given.
And if not, they’ll perish,
And their souls will ascend to Heaven.
They will love me back someday,
But sometimes they mistake me.
For a star, a moon, a small speck of dust,
And yet I am forced to live for eternity.
I have lived since the start,
Surrounded by infinite darkness.
But still they pound and ground me,
And I’ve seen how heartless.
They are only worth,
One sixteenth of a cosmic second.
But they have a life, and they will live it,
Because I, will teach them a lesson.
Artistic Statement
My poem, ‘A Fraction of Time’, focuses on the insignificance of humans in comparison to space and the lack of gratitude we have towards Earth. Unfortunately, we are quickly destroying and gradually stripping our planet to its core whilst astronauts explore for new planets as their victims. Space exploration is extremely expensive while it should be used to replenish the Earth and reduce many other serious issues. The image that inspired this idea is of the 2017 Solar Eclipse, collected from the NASA Image Archive. The moon blocking the sun demonstrates how humans are blocked by the reality of their actions and the consequences that will occur. On the other hand, the light beaming out from behind the moon represents the people who value the earth with hope that burns bright like the sun. Furthermore, the fact that the image is in black and white better contrasts the opinions and perspectives between humans and Earth. This picture is dominated by the black moon, almost like a black hole, with streaks of white brushing outwards outlining it. The bright light symbolises to Earth’s powerlessness against humans, while the image foreshadows what Earth will possibly look like in the future if this problem is not dealt with. There is no point of space exploration if Earth is not appreciated. ‘A Fraction of Time’ is a poem relating to the insignificance of humans, the amount of impact we can have on the Earth.
The Ignorance of Stardust Matilda Raison
I was born of floating dust My heart made of fire
No one has ever gotten close
For fear of being burned I suppose
They surround
And they live
And they fill my mind with sound But they never get too close
They never got too close
Until them.
They were different
And new…
And… Special
They made me feel the fire once more
Taught me to Embrace the heat
To Enjoy the heat
They sculpted my mind into an art I had never considered Never thought possible
But it
Was
Beautiful
And they were Kind
So
So
Kind
They paved pathways of wonder Brought new beauties to summers and winters
Made me Stop
And look
And see
They dug up my demons Uncovered ugly blemishes
Took my insecurities and unnecessary parts And burnt them
I watched the sparks
Sent flying by their fire With thankful eyes
They were so
Kind They made me
Stop
Look
See
Which confuses me…
Because I looked so close Payed so much attention
To every single action
But I never once noticed Never once stopped
Them
How can you see so much
But notice so little? Because before I knew it
Everything Had been stripped
Away
I suppose that’s the ignorance of stardust You latch to whatever comes close
And feel like a part of it You change its colour
How it feels
So obviously, you must be important…
But your own particles block your eyes Make you forget
How easily you’re swept aside
And now I see Now I actually see
Everything they were doing to me
They made me embrace my fire So they wouldn’t get cold
Twisted my thoughts Left ideas in the folds of my mind
The pathways they carved into my skin
Left scars
And I can only watch as my surroundings start to Crumble
And Crack
As I stumble to regain some sense of Control
Beauty is pain
That’s what they say What they always say
But if that were true Why have I been left like this?
After so much suffering So much moulding
And changing
It hasn’t been enough
To make me enough
They are not kind.
Far from it.
They are selfish They don’t try to hide it
They don’t have to
And if you notice their selfishness they’ll just blame it on
You That’s human nature
And now that I’m dried and thinned Stretched and skinned
They’re Bored
Now they’ve used me all they could Flicked the final particles of insignificance from their shoulder
Pushed me to my brink
They’re leaving me to sink
Alone
And now they’ve set their sights on you
Your alluring glow So different from me
But still useful
So
Good luck, my friend Count down your final days
For they will be for you, like they were for me
The End.
Artistic Statement
My poem, ‘The Ignorance of Stardust’ was written to portray the relationship between humans and space through the personification of Earth. It is inspired by the observations and beliefs I have in regard to how the Earth is treated by people, as well as humans dismissive, wasteful and selfish
nature. An image from the NASA archives titled ‘The moon’s first quarter phase’ also played a part in inspiring the poem. The photo depicts the moon appearing to be coming out of a shadow, while earth lays below, clouds coating the sky. The clouds signify humans’ blindness to the problems they are causing, ignoring them just because they can. The image also signifies the poem’s mention of humans moving on from the Earth, ignoring the destruction they’re leaving behind to inhabit somewhere new
that has caught their attention. As mentioned previously, the moon appears to be revealing itself after being hidden in the shadows, both symbolising something new for humans to chase as a broadened concept, while also being literal, as humans plan to travel to the moon again. Being hurt by others is a very human thing that everyone can relate to. Humans have a wasteful and dismissive nature.
INTERSTELLAR MINDS
Past the Future By Elijah Eustace
What if
The future has already happened
What if
Everything happens for a reason
Everyone and Everything around you perfectly constructs your choices
Like a simulation
Like clockwork
Every intricate detail placed and picked together
Ups and Downs
Swings and Roundabouts
All lead to the eventual ending,
Your perfect life
Your future wife
Every variable and possible outcome lived out through the Milky Way’s most detailed blueprint
That terrible Boss
That heartbreaking loss
Your gut feeling is the future telling you
what to do,
when to do it,
where to do it
What food to try
What car to buy
But why
What if
The future is out there
In the deep, dark void that is space
The future is encapsulated within the realm
The endless nothingness of this place
Where no one is at the helm
What if
Technology progressed so much where we could intercept the future
Where we could see it and prepare for it
We could tamper it so that life would be suited for everyone
No war
No hunger
No underprivileged
No hatred
But wouldn’t that just defeat the meaning
Of life as a whole
After all, we are just the insignificant dot in the galaxy
Moving closer, and closer, and closer to that eventual end
What if
Everything doesn’t happen for a reason.
And we are the true culprits of our own future
Humanity is always looking to point the finger
But our footprint on the galaxy is tiny
And if we keep living in the past, our footprint won’t linger
The future won’t always look so shiny
But
What if
We broaden our horizon
While we may wizen
Lay down the foundations
To encourage innovation in the future generations
To make our tiny insignificant chapter of existence
The next chapter in this galaxy
What if
We look past the future.
Artistic Statement
What if the future has already happened? What if our conscious was controlling our decisions for a reason? What if technology goes too far? These are the questions that my poem asks and endeavours the logistics of. The image that inspired my poem highlights all the interesting and ominous stars and galaxies that are really out there. Christopher Nolan’s movie Interstellar (2014) gave an inspiring and unique view on space and space travel. His theories and thinking behind the ominous void around us, inspired my idea and fuelled my poem. The picture throws so many questions out to the audience and our job, as humanity, is to answer these questions. But maybe this objective is to pushed upon us as humans too much. We are taught to learn for the future and how to push civilisation further, which is what how we got here in the first place, but never can we celebrate and live in the moment. Such a robotic and uniform system that has mass-produced our humanity, maybe we are just around the corner from the astronomical breakthrough that could help our evolution or maybe… we are just scratching the surface. The message that my poem is trying to deliver is for my generation, and the many more to come, to enjoy the success, learn from the mistakes and embrace the future, not try and force it.
the space inside her
the darkness overtakes her
consuming her light
little by little
every day.
the space inside her grows,
recruiting its army,
increasing its numbers,
poised,
waiting for the perfect time to strike.
and her grandfather,
so beautiful in his own special way,
when her father broke the perfect imperfection of her life back then,
and told her he was no more,
that was when that emptiness,
that space,
entered her, growing for the first time.
one minuscule thought of him,
of his love of Kombi vans, pocket watches, and how he always asked her,
every single time he saw her,
if she still played violin.
and how she wished that she still could now,
because that guilt,
that wretched, sickening guilt
sent fat, salty tears rolling down her cheeks,
like dark storm clouds approaching before a violent unforgiving rain.
it broke her.
just a little though, for she was yet to break in ways she could not imagine.
that day not too long ago,
her father yelling, her
mother crying,
the sounds so dreadful when combined,
like fire waging war with ice,
like sticks waging war with stone.
those sounds so horrific they turned storms into dust,
turned blazing flames into smoking ashes.
those whispers of impossible fantasies,
so delicate like tiny blinks of stars, visible only at night,
they are fragile
so fragile that she is scared they might shatter.
and when they do,
that emptiness
that space inside her
grows.
and him.
every time they grew close enough to touch,
like jupiter catching up to saturn on their orbit of the sun,
they were bound to once again separate.
after that final hug,
the one where he said goodbye for the last time,
just like sand in an hour glass,
gradually accumulating,
that space grew.
yet again.
she sought some sort of relief,
some sort of solution,
some sort of escape.
but that useless, endless searching,
it put space between her,
between her and her parents,
her and her friends,
space between her and her feelings.
before it all became too much
and a wall collapsed inside her,
unleashing something wild.
that build up of space,
the space that wasn’t space,
but a hurricane raging inside her,
twisting her thoughts,
mutating them.
that hurricane, it became too much,
too wild,
too destructive.
like a star exploding,
its surface going up in flames,
her rage erupted.
it erupted.
like ferocious volcanoes on the land she called her home,
it erupted.
until something broke,
when that storm of flames died down,
the embers that remained,
they gave way to the darkness,
the space inside her.
the last piece,
that last glimmer of hope,
surrendered to the darkness.
and just like that,
she gave up.
it ended.
that space inside her,
like the vast openness of the galaxy,
swallowed her up.
she stopped caring.
stopped hurting.
stopped feeling.
her body went numb,
and that in itself,
was the greatest relief of all.
Artistic Statement “The Space Inside Her” is a poem which encompasses not only literal space, but figurative as well. This poem is one about the space inside people; their feelings, their thoughts, fears and dreams. It is a poem about space that is not space. The image which inspired it reminded me of a build up of emotion, specifically anger, in the vast openness that is the mind. This intrigued me, so I then decided to explore the topic on a deeper level, drawing on the experiences of others, as well as my own. I then composed some lines, analogies and descriptions of these scenarios, relating some to space to reiterate the overall theme. After consideration, I also decided the invited reading was about how sometimes, when left without support, the mind can become more dangerous than the world around it. This invited reading was carried throughout the poem, however the ending does not in any way suggest that girl ended her own life. I genuinely wanted the poem to be about the invited reading, and how the girl overcame it by letting go of her feelings and, in some ways, moving on. I attempted to create a somewhat meaningful and heartfelt poem, which I hoped readers related to and could draw on.
Nothing matters up here
it doesn’t matter how I got up here on my paper plane of love we were flying high you and I but pain came r a i n i n g d o w n on us in a hurricane in a storm in a whirl of everything Nothing mattered d o w n there Not until I found you And you hung onto me somehow Pouring love into this black hole full of all this darkness full of all this matter And emotions that apparently didn’t matter You were space A moon lighting the night With stars freckled across your face I was time Never quite right Too fast for some or s l o w for others Our love was space and time meeting together to create the finest point imaginable Not crossing over each other or battling for control we were Collapsing into each other in a speck of nothing before E o g x i p d l n
Your darkness was hard to spot Loving me at night Following me at day Your darkness whispered lies Which slipped out your mouth In cool breaths d o w n my neck I guess I never realised the black hole was you I’d forgotten how stars can only shine in the dark Your gravitational field of lies was so strong The more I fell into what we had it started becoming more
dark and
intense g to the edge of the world with you n i y l I dreamed of f But you plucked my feathers And captured me in a cage of my own pain Poisoning me every time your fingers lingered just too long I am in love with you just as much as I was then But I am so tired of fighting off these swarming demons of doubt in my head That crash in tsunamis of despair each time pain licks my face with handprints Marking me as yours until they disappeared You disappeared Yet at the end of everything I was still nothing I was trying to escape our world Escape was sisyphean but Exploration was not y without being weighted d l o I finally got to f w n by you
Escape nothing and explore up here I thought I could fill the gap left by you up here Find something new up here But nothing matters up here
There is nothing up here Yet it still manages to suffocate me with heavy air Yet it still manages to blanket the entire room until there is no room for light I feel nothing and the weight of it
I feel nothing and its bites that leave no mark As it slowly eats my flesh and tears m e a p a r t And leaves everything empty Like nothing ever happened
Because nothing is what happened to me
Nothing matters up here
Artistic Statement
The poem I have written is called Nothing. The image that inspired me was a combination of the pale blue speck and the sun peaking over the moon. These both inspired it because the pale blue speck shows how small we really are in space and the sun shows what little light we have; without it, there is only the endless nothing of space. My poem Nothing, it about the concept of nothing; whether about feeling like nothing or being in nothing. My poem starts with the person feeling like nothing after many people have come and broken their heart. “pouring love into this black hole” is describing how they feel like nothing (like how a black hole sucks the light from everything so it is nothing) and how the other person must be something so special, that it fills up the black hole instead of collapsing into it. The main people are in an unhealthy relationship further into my poem. There is a sense that the voice inside is telling them that the other person doesn’t care might just be true. Once the person does escape the relationship their fear of nothing comes true. They spend the whole poem dreaming about flying away – in this case to space. However, when they get there, they don’t find anything. Just a world of nothing. They describe how being surrounded by nothing starts to mess with their mind. They thought that after so many heartbreaks they had found something worth looking for (something in space) that would fill up the emptiness inside but as they flew into the universe, the truth that nothing is out there broke them. I wrote this poem to investigate nothing. The concept of nothing could be feeling nothing, being surrounded by nothing or just nothing. Humans can’t believe that there is infinity, we all believe that it has to end somewhere, and a similar concept applies to nothing (which is why solitary confinement is such an effect method of torture).
Background to Anthology
In our current world programmes like STEM are moving forward to become STEAM with the addition of the Arts. This fusion of the arts and science is a growth area and one we took the opportunity to explore in creating an Anthology of Poems on the topic of SPACE for our Year 9 English Project in Term 2. To celebrate the 50th Anniversary of the Moon Landing this year our class began our project by visiting the Queensland Museum at Southbank and attended the NASA: A Human Adventure exhibition. We then researched SPACE further by working through the NASA archives and even made contact with NASA who wished us well on our project. As part of Science Week we will be distributing copies of our Anthology for free. Included in the Anthology are the images which have inspired our work. Our poems explore the perspectives of astronauts, other planets and of us on Earth.
9E are:
Albin Biju, Evie Cadman, Martine Carroll, Angelina Chakkamkunnel, Isabella Chen, Divyang Chovatia, Samuel Cobcroft, Sarah Dreiling, Elijah Eustace, Amber Everett-Jones, Alexandra Hassall, Daniel Ho, Jack Howie, Chelsea Hutchinson, Marcus Koo, Sophie Ley-Hornsey, Mathilda Lovejoy, Callum Lyons, Willa McGuiness, Lillian McNaughton, Merek Modini, Kellyn Nguyen, Tony Nguyen, Matilda Raison,
Delvin Shibu, Katrina Wang, Millie Wesley, Millie Williams