advanced level – 1st year writing mistakes: friendship oct. 2010

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Advanced level – 1st year Writing mistakes: Friendship Oct. 2010

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Page 1: Advanced level – 1st year Writing mistakes: Friendship Oct. 2010

Advanced level – 1st year

Writing mistakes: FriendshipOct. 2010

Page 2: Advanced level – 1st year Writing mistakes: Friendship Oct. 2010

They were born with ten days differenceThey were born within ten days of differenceThey were born within ten days of each otherWe had a chance meeting after a long timeWe had a chance to meet after a long timeThere were only another two younger than usThere were only other two younger than usHe is living in Madrid and he is working as a nurseHe lives in Madrid and he works as a nurse

Page 3: Advanced level – 1st year Writing mistakes: Friendship Oct. 2010

She is pregnant for two monthsShe is two months pregnantHe was living here for years until she moved to LeónHe had been living here for years until she moved…

He is one of my neighbours from six monthsHe has been one of my neighbours for six monthsHer birthday is 21 of MarchHer birthday is on 21 March / on March 21He will get married with Eva next summerHe will be getting married to Eva next summer

Page 4: Advanced level – 1st year Writing mistakes: Friendship Oct. 2010

I’m excited with that partyI’m excited about that partyWe met when we were in the same primary schoolWe met when we were at the same primary schoolWe met when we were in the same classroomShe accepts me for how I amShe accepts me the way I amWe had a fun timeWe had a great time / We had funSometimes it is difficult to say who is your best friendSometimes is is difficult to say who your best friend is

Page 5: Advanced level – 1st year Writing mistakes: Friendship Oct. 2010

People are in two minds at the time to define friendshipPeople are in two minds when it comes to defining….

They are questions people do themselvesThey are questions people ask themselvesSomeones call him by his nicknameSome people call him by his nicknameHe has most of this qualitiesHe has most of these qualitiesYou won’t never be sad with himYou will never be sad with him

Page 6: Advanced level – 1st year Writing mistakes: Friendship Oct. 2010

I look for other values among the friendship like generosity, loyalty…

I look for other values among friends like generosity, loyalty…

We don’t know when could born a nice friendshipWe don’t know when a nice friendship might be bornWe have also take into account that sometimes….We also have to take into account that …We must be sure before consider someone a friendWe must be sure before considering someone as a friend

I had and still having very good times with himI have had (and still have) very good times…

Page 7: Advanced level – 1st year Writing mistakes: Friendship Oct. 2010

We have suggested each other as better as we canWe have advised each other as well as we can

We trust totally in each otherWe totally trust each other / rely on each otherI have other friends that they make me feel luckyI have other friends that make me feel lucky…and even he thinks about many things the same

way as me…and he even thinks about many things the same

way I do