The main feature of the Indian education system is that it is more suited for social learning than some other systems

The main feature of the Indian education system is that it is more suited for social learning than some other systems. The Indian government had developed a technically-inclined learning program only about 5 years ago, which makes the learning programs entirely different from the ones offered a generation ago. The phases are being developed on a computer learning base and instructional methods are mainly undertaken in American English.

With a literacy rate of about 92%, indians generally finish secondary education. About 85% of the entire Indian population finish High School though on a local basis, the far-flung provinces have a relatively lower percentage of secondary school educational attainment compare to the highly-urbanized areas like Delhi , Bhopal and Kochi . With a good formal education, individuals can be able to land on good, high paying jobs, especially if the graduate comes from an exclusive private school. Education also develops a person's well-being and as such he can easily cope up with his country's development. As far as society is concerned, the fruits of education may be seen in the way people view culture; one that is based on reality and not one that is based on folklore, as some provinces have been in the past. Certainly, with a competitive level of educational standard and high literacy rate, India could definitely meet the growing demand for industrialization, technological development and the increasing concern for globalization. With these requisites met, the educational system in India becomes an effective tool not only for civilianizing its populace, but for meeting its desired economic development as well. However, with the continuing economic crisis, and the ever-present American business influence among indians, the educational system merely becomes a 'tool' for the on-going threat of 'brain drain' in India- lots of technocrats and intellectuals prefer to leave India and work abroad than to contribute to the development of the following generations due to the relatively low-paying jobs in the country. To conclude, despite the problems of 'brain drain' alluded to above, the Indian education system has many benefits for both individuals and society and is a 'key' to greater economic prosperity. Strengths Weaknesses

Very good sentence construction eg. As far as society is concerned, the fruits of education may be seen in the way people view culture; one that is based on reality and not one that is based on folklore, as some provinces have been in the past. Occasional errors in word choice eg. lower percentage of educational attainment compare to urbanized areas , land on good high paying jobs , he can easily cope up with his countrys development.

An extensive vocabulary is used eg. suited, phases, technically-inclined, urbanised, exclusive, under-taken, attainment, well-being, requisites, populace

Expresses complex ideas, including opinion and hypothesis eg. Certainly, with a competitive level of educational standard and high literacy rate, India could definitely meet the growing demand for industrialization, technological development and the increasing concern for globalization. With these requisites met, the educational system in India becomes an effective tool not only for civilianizing its populace, but for meeting its desired economic development as well.

There is evidence of extensive discussion of the topic. Eg. With a good formal education, individuals can be able to land on good, high paying jobs, especially if the graduate comes from an exclusive private school. Education also develops a person's well-being and as such he can easily cope up with his country's development. As far as society is concerned, the fruits of education may be seen in the way people view culture; one that is based on reality and not one that is based on folklore, as some provinces have been in the past.

The use of paragraphs is very good with topic sentences and supporting information presented skilfully, with ideas well linked presenting logical arguments eg. With a good formal education, individuals can be able to land on good, high paying jobs, especially if the graduate comes from an exclusive private school. Education also develops a person's well-being and as such he can easily cope up with his country's development. As far as society is concerned, the fruits of education may be seen in the way people view culture; one that is based on reality and not one that is based on folklore, as some provinces have been in the past.

Long complex sentences are accurate and used effectively to present an argument eg. Certainly, with a competitive level of educational standard and high literacy rate, India could definitely meet the growing demand for industrialization, technological development and the increasing concern for globalization. With these requisites met, the educational system in India becomes an effective tool not only for civilianizing its populace, but for meeting its desired economic development as well.

A variety of linking words are used. Eg. With a literacy rate As far as society is concerned Certainly However

The essay is interesting to read, with convincing arguments and clear conclusions eg. To conclude, despite the problems of brain drain alluded to above, the Indian education system has many benefits for both individuals and society and is a key to greater economic prosperity.

Overall assessment:Very Good (Advanced ADFELPS level 8)