active vs. passive voice developed by ivan seneviratne
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Active vs. Passive Voice
Developed byIvan Seneviratne
Why should writers think about their verbs?
“Verbs are the most important of all your tools. They push the sentence forward and give it momentum. Active verbs push hard; passive verbs tug fitfully.”
-- William Zinsser, On Writing Well
What is Active Voice?
In the Active voice, the subject performs the action.
For example:Joseph draws a picture.
Joseph is the subject and he is doing something (drawing).
When to use active voice
Use active voice unless you are required or have very specific reasons for doing otherwise.
Active voice generally leads to more concise writing.
It clarifies who is performing the action.
Remember: Staying active is a healthy practice, especially in your writing!
What is passive voice?
In passive voice the subject is acted upon.
For example:The picture was drawn by Joseph.
In this case, the drawing is the subject and it is being acted upon by Joseph.
When to use passive voice
Use passive voice when you do not wish to emphasize the subject of the sentence.
Example:
Smoking is prohibited. (passive)
The management prohibits smoking. (active)
The passive sentence takes attention away from management, so they do not have to be in the role of the “bad guys.”
Passive Voice (con’d)Also use passive voice when you wish to
emphasize what happened and the person or thing acting is unknown or unimportant.
Example
Poisonous gases were found in six factories.
The use of passive emphasizes the finding of gases, not who found them.
Note: Because passive voice often leads to awkward or wordy
constructions, use passive voice sparingly and with good reason.
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OverviewActive Voice: Subject does the action
Passive Voice: action happens to the subject.
uses form of “to be” or “am, is, are, was, were, being, been” plus a past participle.
A past participle is the ed form of regular verbs for irregular verbs: en, n, t
There is no reason to stay here.
This was the situation.
It is sometimes hard to forgive.
The boy was impressed by Ms. Jones.
Ivan’s Matrix
Passive (be+V4)
Simple Progressive Perfect
Present
am
is + V4
are
am
is +being+ V4
are
has +been+V4
have
Pastwas + V4
were
was +being+V4
werehad +been+V4
Future will+be+V4 * *
Active vs. Passive (1)
TENSE ACTIVE PASSIVE
Present Simple Jane writes the letter. The letter is written by Jane.
Present Progressive Jane is writing the letter. The letter is being written by Jane.
Present Perfect Jane has written the letter. The letter has been written by
Jane.
Active vs. Passive (2)
TENSE ACTIVE PASSIVE
Past Simple Jane wrote the letter The letter was written by Jane
Past Progress. Jane was writing the letter The letter was being written by Jane
Past Perfect Jane had written the letter The letter had been written by Jane
Simple Future Jane will write the letter The letter will be written by Jane
Change the following sentences into passive1.They have arrested him for shoplifting.
2.People in Chile speak Spanish.
3.They are repairing your car now.
4.Solar power drives this car.
5.The Chinese invented paper.
He has been arrested for shoplifting.
Spanish is spoken in Chile.
Your car is being repaired now.
This car is driven by solar power.
Paper was invented by the Chinese.
6.They do not sell stamps in bookshops.
7.Somebody will tell you where to go.
8.Philip Kotler wrote the marketing management book.
9.The company has imported new computers from Japan.
10.The personnel manager is still considering your application.
Stamps are not sold in bookshops.
You will be told where to go.
The marketing management book was written by Philip Kotler.
New computers have been imported by the company from Japan
Your application is still being considered by the personnel manager.
Summary
Use active voice unless specified otherwise.
Make sure the subject is acting and not being acted upon.
Use the verb form of words with suffixes
Place subjects in front of the action they perform (this often eliminates to be verbs)
Avoid to be forms of verbs
This presentation is developed by Ivan Seneviratne © 2007 purely for personal [email protected]