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1.The idea behind the Personal Long Letter campaign is that a single impassioned constituent may

sway a lawmakers opinion, whereas a half-dozen banded together only causes him alarm.

a half-dozen banded together only causes him alarm

only alarm is caused by a half-dozen banded together

only alarm has been caused by a half-dozen banded together

a half-dozen banded together only cause him alarm

a half-dozen have caused him only alarm when banded together

2. Controversial mortgage laws passed last year state that, if at any point during the maturation

period of the loan the person in whose name it is taken is not able to meet the payments, that

persons spouse will have responsibilities that include paying the balance.

will have responsibilities that include

will be responsible to pay

is responsible to pay

will be responsible for paying

is responsible for paying

3. By the time the children get home from track practice, their mother will have finished putting new

wallpaper in their bedroom.

will have finished

will be finishing

will finish

would have finished

would be finishing

4. This process resulted in a total of 15 new townships: of which, to date, 7 are still in existence.

of which, to date, 7 are still in existence.

of which number, 7 of the 15 are still, to date, in existence.

of the number 15, 7, to date, are still in existence.

to date of these 15, 7 are still in existence.

to date, 7 of the 15 are still in existence.

5. As part of a unified scholarly approach, Symeon, an Eastern Orthodox saint often called The New

Theologian, collected texts describing existing traditions and relayed them to his readers in a tone of

great devotion and authority and borrowing from Asia some aspects of mystical practice.authority and borrowing from Asia some aspects of mystical practice

authority, and borrowed from Asia some aspects of mystical practice

along with the aspects of mystical practice he borrowed from Asia

authority, borrowing from Asia some aspects of mystical practice

authority borrowing some aspects of mystical practice from parts of Asia


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6.Authority Our understanding was that she would continue to cover the costs of school enrollment

and room and board for the children, which she verbally agreed to pay with the rest of the family.

which she verbally agreed to pay with the rest of the family.

which she agreed verbally with the rest of the family to pay.

of which she agreed verbally with the rest of the family to pay.

both of which she verbally agreed to pay with the rest of the family.

both of which she agreed to pay with the rest of the family verbally.

7. Scientists working on a number of separate projects made contributions to the invention ofthe radio, such as Nikola Tesla, who was one of the first to receive a patent in the United States for

what was then called wireless transmission of data.

radio, such as Nikola Tesla

radio; including as Nikola Tesla

radio, including Nikola Tesla

radio; not least among them being Nikola Tesla

radio; especially Nikola Tesla

8. The announced relocation of the hospital has been welcome news for the city, where economic

growth has been stagnant for the past several years.

city, where economic growth has been stagnant

city whose economic growth has been stagnant

city where economic growth has been stagnated

city, whose economic growth as been stagnated

city, the site of stagnated economic growth

9. controversial study suggests that the violent behavior displayed by some teenagers who play

several hours of video games a day is due to developmental damage to the frontal lobe region of the

brain rather than the absorption of any specifically violent content.

is due to developmental damage to the frontal lobe region of the brainare due to developmental damage to the frontal lobe region of the brain

is due to damage to the developmental frontal lobe region of the brain

are due to developmental damages to the brains frontal lobe

is due to developmental damages to the brains frontal lobe region

10. he new mayor is certainly more progressive than her predecessor, but she is not nearly as

efficient.

but she is not nearly as efficient

but she, however, is not nearly as efficientbut she is nearly not as efficient

even though she is not nearly as efficient

despite being not as efficient

11. Taking note of the success of local farmers markets, the universitys food service providers have

transitioned into a locally-grown, sustainable operation.

have transitioned into a locally-grown, sustainable operation

have transitioned into sustainable, locally-grown operation


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have transitioned into locally-grown, sustainable operations

are transitioned into sustainable, locally-grown operations

are transitioning into locally-grown, sustainable operation

12. A proposed law would require people to bring photo ID to polling places when they vote to curb

potential fraud.

places when they vote to curb potential fraudplaces when they vote, to curb potential fraud

places, when they vote to curb potential fraud

places, when they vote, to curb potential fraud

places, to curb potential fraud by voting

13. According to a recent study linking high social standing to a habitually stern facial

expression, models who do not smile adequately in magazine advertisements give an impression of

status and exclusivity, even if they are not wealthy or influential themselves.

models who do not smile adequately in magazine advertisements give an impression

models in magazine advertisements who do not smile give an impression adequately

models who do not smile in magazine advertisements adequately give an impression

it is the models, in magazine advertisements, who do not smile and adequately give an

impression]

in magazine advertisements, the models who do not smile adequately give an impression

14. lthough the researchers agreed unanimously on their expectations for the outcome of the

experiment, their surprise was evident when the actual data started coming in.

their surprise was evident when

they were evidently surprised whentheir surprise was in evidence when

they were evidently surprised as

they were surprised as

15. In addition to adhering to the policies and guidelines of the State Department of Education, the

successful instructor will be responsible for instruction in the appropriate teaching environment and

evaluates student learning.

will be responsible for instruction in the appropriate teaching environment and evaluates

will be responsible for instruction in the appropriate teaching environment and evaluateis responsible for instruction in the appropriate teaching environment and evaluate

is being responsible for instruction in the appropriate teaching environment and for evaluating

is responsible for instructions in the appropriate teaching environment and will be evaluating

16. Unfortunately for the commuters who lost their lives when the bridge collapsed, the engineer was

not honest at the preliminary public safety commission hearing, when he was questioned about the

structures weight-bearing abilities.

was not honest


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was not

was honest

had not been honest

had not been being honest

17. Ideally, groups focused on environmental justice should be concerned with how new government

projects will impact local populations. Specifically whether the projects would pose an unjust

burden for lower-income and minority communities.

will impact local populations. Specifically whether the projects would pose an unjust burden

will impact local populations, specifically whether the projects would pose an unjust burden

will impact local populations and pose an unjust burden

will impact local populations and, specifically, pose an unjust burden

will be impacting local populations and posing an unjust burden

18. Although genetic recombination ensures that only half the genetic material of a parent is

represented in the offspring, some genetic lines may eventually die out entirely, even though there

are numerous progeny.

Although

Conclusively

When

Because

If

19. In most industries the rising cost of support services actually passes a greater financial burden

to customers; in the legal profession, for example, a current climb in the cost of court reporting has

forced many attorneys to raise their hourly rates.

has forced many attorneys to raise their hourly rates.has made many attorneys raise their hourly rates.

has meant that many attorneys are being forced to raise their hourly rates.

is forcing many attorneys to raise their hourly rates.

is meaning that many attorneys are raising their hourly rates by force.

20. The constellation that includes the North Star has been known by many names among different

cultures, calledThe Bear in ancient Greece, The Drinking Gourd inparts of Africa, and Star Girl

and Her Seven Sky Brothers among the Cheyenne people of North America.

among different cultures, calledamong different cultures; it was called

in different cultures, being called

in different cultures; including the title

in different cultures; it was called

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