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Welcome to Writing Class!

Thursday, August 12, 2010

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What do you need (필요하다)?

I need...


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“Decay, disorder, stunned survivors pack streets.” (Toronto Star).


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“Towns absolutely destroyed.” (CNN).


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“Patience wears thin as Haiti’s desperation grows.” (New York Times).

Desperate Haitians await foreign disaster relief.” (South China Morning Post).


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“Patience wears thin as Haiti’s desperation grows.” (New York Times).

Desperate Haitians await foreign disaster relief.” (South China Morning Post).

“Can the world finally deliver its promises on Haiti?” (Reuters).


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What do you need (필요하다)?

I need...


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Announcements

• Classroom Contributions

• Essay due date

Monday August 2, 2010


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Final Essay

EarlyBonus

Up to 5 bonus marks!


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Today’s Aims

1. Introduce Show & Tell

2. Do’s and Don’ts

3. Create flow with Linking Words

4. The importance of Referencing


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Show & T ell

Presentation


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Show & T ell

Presentation

• Groups

• Writing activity

• Template

• Create a sample

• Presentation


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Show & T ell

Presentation

• Groups

• Writing activity

• Template

• Create a sample

• Presentation

Beginning Session 7!


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Do’s & Don’tsGaller Walk!

Do’s and Don’ts

Gallery Walk

Conjunctions Style Tone Cohesion Tense Examples References


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Creating Flow


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Creating Flow with

Coherence & CohesionMy Hero: My Dad

By Kim Jong Il #8 C3

Cohesion

Coherence

Connections

between

sentences

Connectedness of

ideas of your entire writing.


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Why is Creating Flow

Important?


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• Easier to read


Important?


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• Easier to read

• Transition


Important?


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• Easier to read

• Transition

• Professional


Important?


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• Easier to read

• Transition

• Professional

• Transferable skill


Important?


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What is Plagiarism?


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What is Plagiarism?

Plagiarism is the unauthorized use or closeimitation of the language and thoughts of

another author and the representation of them

as one’s own original work (Dictionary.com).


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In-text Citation

“Everyone knows they’re going to die, but nobody believesit. If we did, we would do things differently.” (Albom, 37).

(Author, page #)


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In-text Citation

“Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, whileloving someone deeply gives you courage.” (Lao Tzu).

OR

Lao Tzu once said, “Being deeply loved by someone gives youstrength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.”

Famous Quote:


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1. Final Essay

2. Show & Tell: Session 7

Reminders

Bonus due date: Friday August 6

Final due date: Monday August 9

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