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Coursework analysis Milka Erko
What went well :D
Distribution logo, makes the whole sequence effective and realistic
A good close up shot, as it was a bit boring, the way the sense where changing, right through the sequence
Grade: Kayleigh got a grade B which is a level 3
Grade
Even better if :/
The way the sense weren't changing like that, as it was kind of annoying. She should have done more close up shots to change to the next sense.
What went well :D
The black and white shot made the whole sequence more effective, and got the audience, a bit scared
Slow-motion kind of made the audience feel her pain, and made us feel sorry for her
Even better if :/If she used something then a plaster to cover her brose
If we heard her scram, when she was getting hit, to make the whole sequence more effective
Group grade