news reporting & writing why leads fail gerry doyle
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News Reporting & WritingWhy Leads Fail
Gerry Doyle
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Just as there are principles TO FOLLOW for writing news leads: Grab the reader’s attention Tell what was the most important and/or
interesting thing that happened Have some or all of the 5 Ws and 1 H Be concise …
Leads: Guiding Rules
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There are guidelines on what NOT TO DO when writing leads. …
Leads: Guiding Rules
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Avoid topic leads:
Hong Kong’s football team played against Singapore last night.
Hong Kong Chief Executive Leung Chun-ying appeared before the Legislative Council this morning.
Leads: Don’t Do This …
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Avoid overused sayings from novels:
“It was the best of times, it was the worst of times.”
Leads: Don’t Do This …
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Avoid quote leads. Quotes are usually
opinions, and may not fairly summarize a story. If you DO use a quote for a news story lead, it better be GREAT:
“I’m back,” Jesus said this morning.
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Avoid question leads:
“Have you ever wondered what it would feel like to sprint uphill from Bonham Road to Kotewall Road at the top of Hong Kong University?”
A journalist’s job is to explain. Questions in leads and even in headlines are crutches that show laziness. Get to the point.
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Avoid the chair-leaning lead:
After a while, in a startling and unexpected development, the deeply sorrowful Jesus H. Christ, 33, son of the Almighty, leaned back again an olive tree, stretched out his 5-foot, 10-inch frame, put his head in his hands as tears slowly rolled down his cheeks and His very close associates looked on.
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Don’t write any lead beginning with the word
“Imagine.”
“Imagine that you had no legs. Then you might have an idea of what life is like for poor Joe Schmoe.”
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Avoid referencing the dictionary:
Webster's defines lazy writing as quoting from a dictionary to start a story.
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Avoid the “Thanks to” lead:
Thanks to innovative technology developed at Queen Mary Hospital, Harry Wong can walk, dress himself and go to work every day.
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Avoid the one-word lead:
Cynical.
That is what most people believe journalists are.
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Avoid poor plays on words:
Critics say the Hong Kong government is barking up the wrong tree in trying to ban dogs from public parks.
Leads: Don’t Do This